Date: 10/20/09 02:49 am Title: Chapter Seven
keep writing!
i really like this story and i want to know what happens.GOD RUBY SHOULDNT HAVE SAID ANYTHING! agghhhh i want to know what happens next! :D
Date: 05/28/09 07:28 am Title: Chapter Six
oeh lala more please! I was sad for them that she just ignored them. but now I'm happy again:D
Date: 05/26/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter Five
I really like this story. I'm glad you updated!! :D
Date: 05/21/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Five
i love this story! i hope Scarlette still moves with the guys. Bill is funny and cute, i love his childlike humor
Date: 11/03/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Four
that was hot they needo have a threesome
Date: 08/09/08 01:50 am Title: Chapter Four
i love this please update soon
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Date: 07/31/08 02:45 am Title: Chapter Four
aww poor bill! he aint gettin no love! *cuddles him* the storys great! Cant wait to see wat will happen between the 3 of them :) plz keep writing!
Date: 07/31/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter Four
*droools*
That was yummy to beta and to read again!
More soon! Let me have some to catch up on when I get back from London! :P
Date: 07/30/08 07:40 pm Title: Chapter Four
dude im glad your having fun writing this because im definitely having an awsome time reading it. great writer, update soon
Date: 07/30/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter Four
Well then, I'll be reviewing on each chapter. This is great so far, a threesome should end the jealousy!!! Post more a.s.a.p xox
Date: 07/20/08 01:53 pm Title: Chapter Three
whahahhaha I LOVE it!!!! hahaha and Bill being creeped out by that doll is freaking hillarious!!!! more please
Date: 07/17/08 12:14 am Title: Chapter Three
Haha That resturant was funny! :D
'I love you...I love you... >D'
Yay shes gonna leave with them! :DDD
Keep Updating!!!
Date: 07/16/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Three
this is a really fun story and seems pretty realistic in dialogue too.
thanks for writing!!
Date: 07/14/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter Two
Wonderful as always, Awwwhh Tomi stuck up for her!
Date: 07/14/08 02:42 am Title: Chapter One
Genius as usual Miss tayna616. :D
[Oh i do hope you are a Miss. o.o; If not my apologizes! ^^;]
Man i'm loving Scar's attiude. Looks like dear Tomi met his match. >D
Keep on updating! :DDD
Author's Response: lol yeah, I am a miss. I'll be updating soon, just gotta wait on my beta :)rnThank you!
Date: 07/13/08 08:42 pm Title: Prologue
That was a very good concept for the story! The way you made Scarlette's character is perfect. I love how she has that attitude. :DD
Normally stories about 'Exotic Dancers' don't interest me but i must make an exception! This was very well done! :DD
Please Update soon! ;D
Author's Response: I'm glad you saw past the summary and enjoyed it!
Date: 07/13/08 06:26 pm Title: Prologue
Ooh I love this FF already and it is just one chapter long!
Keep those chappies coming!! :D
Author's Response: oh I will haha, thank you
Date: 07/13/08 02:50 pm Title: Prologue
This story is great so far, really interesting! Post more soon! xox