Date: 07/29/08 08:17 am Title: Déjà Vu
Aw, now I do appreciate how Tom reacted :) thank to anyone who'd given him the second chance to fix things!
Date: 07/29/08 08:08 am Title: Beginning of the End
OH MY GOD YES YES DEAR LORD YES! Second chances are good, well, for this story they are!! GO TO BILL YOU IDIOT!!!
Author's Response: Tom doesn't appreciate being called an idiot :P hahaha
Date: 07/29/08 07:56 am Title: Falling Apart and Slipping Through the Cracks
:O wtf?! Tom you must wish to appear and kill the freak or something! What the hell!
Date: 07/29/08 07:48 am Title: Wishful Thinking
D: Bill... too much pain to bear...
Date: 07/29/08 07:40 am Title: Could've Would've Should've
So sad :( I hope Tom'll be able to go back to normal life, being his brother and all! That life was so devastating... oh lord D:
Date: 07/24/08 03:13 pm Title: End of the Beginning
That was a phenominal ending! And it fit for very well with the whole story. Awesome job! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Endings are always the hardest, so thanks ^___^
Date: 07/21/08 09:28 am Title: End of the Beginning
Oh, that was quite interesting. We all wondered at some point in our lives how the world would be without you, didn't we? Would there be any changes? Have I accomplished anything that the others would miss?
I like that Tom got his clothes back and that he has got these scars now - as a reminder.
And well, the ending was sweet. I'm happy that Bill didn't hate him or anything ;)
Author's Response: Bill could never hate him ;) Thank you!
Date: 07/21/08 09:12 am Title: End of the Beginning
God, Tom made me teary. Very good chapter.
Keep writing fics, we like them :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^__^!
Date: 07/21/08 12:50 am Title: End of the Beginning
Thaaaaa waaaasss O_O amaaaaazzziiiinnngggg XDDDD I love you for writing this story!!! lol and yes ._. I spelled "that" wrong on purpose lol XDDD
Author's Response: Haha, thanks a lot! :D!
Date: 07/21/08 12:04 am Title: End of the Beginning
I loved the ending! I though the note was kinda funny actually. I think it was just the word mental.
Bill will believe Tom won't he? He will. I liked this story, good job.
Author's Response: Yep, he will. He'll have to :P Thank you :]!
Date: 07/20/08 11:00 pm Title: End of the Beginning
Aww, that was sadly cute. XD
If that makes sense, lol
Author's Response: I think so :P Thanks!
Date: 07/20/08 10:28 pm Title: End of the Beginning
i loved that ending! happy endings make me happy inside. i really liked that. sad to see its over though. but meh, all good things must come to and end.
great story and great writing =D
Author's Response: Thank you :D!!!
Date: 07/20/08 10:26 pm Title: End of the Beginning
Damn that was one hell of a good story. Kinda freaky but awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/19/08 10:12 pm Title: Déjà Vu
Was that the last chapter? I hope theres more. I really like how you wrote Bills reaction. How accepting he was of Tom and his feelings for him. I hope Bill returns them back!
Author's Response: There's more! We get Bill's reaction and everything :D
Author's Response: There's more! We get Bill's reaction and everything :D
Date: 07/19/08 09:22 pm Title: Déjà Vu
O_______O does this mean that it's overrrr????????? D"X please tell me that it isn't!!!!!! *cries*
Author's Response: It isn't over until it says it's completed! It's far from over, really.
Date: 07/19/08 02:38 pm Title: Beginning of the End
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
a second chance *-------------*
AAAH YOU MADE IT ALL BETTER *sighs of happiness*
Author's Response: Oh but it's what Tom does with it that counts ;D
Date: 07/18/08 04:15 pm Title: Beginning of the End
It's a beautiful and original story.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you :]
Date: 07/18/08 03:29 pm Title: Beginning of the End
Awww! Tom died for Bill!! That was so sweet. All cute and sugary... and sad and death-ish. Yeah.
I loved how you explained why Tom was back. And how, for that matter. Oh, I can't wait for more!!! Tom's gonna kiss him again. :D I know it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make it as un-clish as possible with such a cliché idea :]
Date: 07/18/08 02:46 pm Title: Beginning of the End
Oh Tom is gonna have to decide. I hope it goes better than the first time.
Author's Response: I promised a happy ending, I believe :D
Date: 07/18/08 02:15 pm Title: Beginning of the End
That was amazing. Beautifully amazing. I loved it. I have freaking tears in my eyes. That was just...gahhhh! so beautiful. I loved it. loved it. loved it. there's more, right?
Author's Response: Of course there's more! Thank you :D