Date: 07/30/08 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha, Betje, I love that story ! And that commercial is just awesome ! xD
[Kids are evil, lol !]
You're an awesome writer ! ^.^
Author's Response: Piroooooo! *hugs tight*rnrnLove your reviews^^rnAnd no I don't say that just because you're mine LKL!rnThank you so much for that compliment^.^
Date: 07/27/08 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing! It was funny, cute and hot at the same time :)
You should have writte what they did after the kids left ;)
haha nice job again :)
Author's Response: aww thanks so much!rn*grins madly*rnrnJa, well I'm afraid I'd screw it up:( So ja:Prn
Date: 07/22/08 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMAO!!! I LUVED THE STORE PART!! THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!!!!! HOPE YOU WRITE MORE!!! I LOVE THAT COMMERICAL TOO TAHT INSPIRED YOU TO WRITE THE LAST PART!! ANYWAYS... HOPE YOU WRITE MORE!!!
Author's Response: aww hun Thank you so much^^
Date: 07/11/08 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol that was a cute oneshoy i really liked it!!!=D
Author's Response: jeej^^ mission accomplished 8)
Date: 07/11/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL, I've seen that commercial. Oh, I'm the first review...then let's make it nice and long. Poor Bill...I would have killed the fucking kid for good and I would even have a reason. Hell, kids are trouble in person, specially when they gang up against you. Naugthy, naughty kids.
You know, you made me laugh. I was like that when I was small, playing dead, and I even developed an ability to breathe without moving my chest up and down. My younger brother once freaked out because of that, and started crying. He never fell for it again, though. And, oh, fuck, the commercial inspired part...Fuck it was hilarious. Way to shut up a whinning kid.
Alright, so as I always do when I like something, I'll give you cookies, the kind you want and I'm going to ask you to keep writing, I'll keep an eye on your work, since it seems I like it.
Author's Response: ^^ man you made me smile sooooooooooooooooo much! Thank you so much for this review :DrnI also have/had a great ability to fool people XD and the time something really was wrong they didn't believe it until they saw blood 0_o ach ja, my own fault eh^^rnrnand that commercial totally cracks me up every single time XD. That's really something i'd do to shut up my kid :)rnrn*grabs honey raisin cookie* yum yum^^