Date: 07/16/10 12:04 pm Title: Dancing Out On The Edge
a very vivid narrative style. score!)
Date: 03/10/10 06:05 pm Title: Ice
I LOVE IT!
amaaingg ;] b29;
Date: 10/12/09 12:21 am Title: Ice
Thats so sweet. Through their facade, they are falling in love. Wonderful ideas. Lorelei is sucha pretty name, but I get the feeling this unwanted Bitch is gonna be evil.
Date: 07/20/09 09:35 am Title: Ice
wow cant wait for more this is really good
Date: 01/12/09 09:31 pm Title: Ice
aww i wish you would update this. i noticed it hasn't been updated in like five months...that's pretty sad. why did you give up on this? it was good.
Date: 10/14/08 11:32 am Title: Ice
those two are just hopelessly cute... tagging this story for updates...
Date: 09/08/08 06:44 pm Title: Ice
gahh, they need to confess their love to each other alreadyyy!
:O
D:
Date: 09/03/08 07:08 pm Title: Ice
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I LOVE this!
Date: 09/03/08 10:58 am Title: Ice
omg, I really love this one! ^^
You're a great writer!:3
Please update soon :*
Author's Response: thanks, it means a lot. =) Oh man!! so I was looking at your profile and I saw you're from Sweden.. =D I've never been there nor do I have any idea about the culture or language, but I'm pure blooded Swede =P yay!!
Date: 08/31/08 04:39 am Title: Ice
cant wait 4 next chappie
Date: 08/30/08 05:47 pm Title: Ice
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. that is so cute. i cant wait to read more. great jb so far.
Date: 08/30/08 04:04 pm Title: Ice
This is super cute. I can't wait until one of them makes a move. please keep up the great work and update soon! :)
Date: 08/30/08 12:00 pm Title: Ice
ugh i hate this build up. i mean dont get me wrong i love this chapter it was amazing and cute, but im so frustrated that bill and tom are so blind to one another. but i have a good feeling that it'll happen soon enough and when it does its going to be magical! i really hope you do update soon, i really love this story and id love you and it more if you updated soon!
Author's Response: hahaha i know, trust me, I, more than anyone, want to just push them together and make them have wild sex. However, for the benefit of the story, I have to control myself and not make it go too fast, even this was probably too soon, but i couldn't help myself lol. Don't worry it'll speed up a bit but still more build up lol. I'll try, i promise =)
Date: 08/30/08 09:40 am Title: Ice
awww cute icy moment^^
too bad they got interrupted...
*rolls eyes*
Author's Response: what'd you expect? them boys got to work for it =P
Date: 08/30/08 03:51 am Title: Ice
Great chapter :D Tom should've kissed when they were called xD Then he was finaly happy ;) Anyway, I hope you can come out of your WB, I had it too, a few days ago -___-' it sucks xD I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: hahaha yea, but then where would the story be?rnyea, this story has especially been giving me trouble, but this chapter i think helped it a lot. danke <3
Date: 08/30/08 02:16 am Title: Ice
:] nice.
I like it.
I wouldn't mind skateing with tom. ;]
lol. update soon again please?
Author's Response: me either. i like showing Tom's faults it makes him seem cuter i think =)rnwe both get one song to skate to with our dear Tomi, how's that? but we have to SHARE... well i'm kind of greedy ;-) so iono lolrni'll try. it's really hectic with school and stuff but i'm working on it =)
Date: 08/16/08 01:01 am Title: Ready, Set, Go!
I'm so glad you updated! When I first found this story, you only had the first 2 chapters up, and for forever, you never updated...I actually thought that you abandoned this story! But then, I was reading another story by you, and you mentioned Tiny Dancer, and I thought 1: "These are by the same author? Whoa, didn't know that!" XD and 2: She updated "Tiny Dancer"? YES!!!
But anyway...lol...I really like where this is going. Update soon, please! :)
Author's Response: aw, lol. yea, a lot of times I have things to do, especially in the summer so it might take awhile to update. haha.rndanke, and i'll try to update either today or tomorrow, i just got home from camping which is why i haven't =)
Date: 08/14/08 06:08 pm Title: You don't give me any choice
wow like so much to do 0_o!
xD man pissing off parents is fun xD ehhhhee, but still Tom really likes Bill:/ I hope Bill will see that one day:)
Author's Response: Eventually he will, remember, he likes Tomi too, but doesn't want to really do anything until he's sure that he won't have to marry the bitch =Drnand yes, pissing parents off is fun, esp. if you can have Tomi as your boyfriend =D!
Date: 08/14/08 12:26 pm Title: You don't give me any choice
oooo please write soon! i know what you mean about school gettin control of ur writing time. i was going to see tokio hotel up close too the 28' but i wont be able to make it ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! and yea, it really sucks. I'm still in HS (iono where you are in school) but I'm taking so many AP classes and they are killing me, even in summer, it's ridiculous =/rnIt's sad you won't be able to see them, I almost wasn't able to either. =( I'll be extra loud tomorrow for you! =D