Date: 07/11/08 02:31 am Title: Nice To Meet You
yay!!! ^_^
love joe and bill - they're so adorable!
no offence.... just a little creepy the way Tom was looking at Nick... he's what?, like, 15 isn't he? ^_^
can't wait to read more!!
Date: 07/11/08 12:04 am Title: Nice To Meet You
40 reviews! congrats! *showers you in love and reviews*
Date: 07/10/08 11:11 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
By the way, your banner gave me a heart attack!
Its soooo GORGEOUS!
Date: 07/10/08 11:04 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
WOAH! They got a little to close a little to fast.
I guess its okay.. I mean there soo adorable!
Loving the Tom and Nick.
Author's Response: -___X you are the second person to say that... and i apologize. Would you rather I make it more boring with the silly getting to know one another in the one night tokio hotel is there? Its fiction... and I wanted this to happen. I have a plan for it. If it turns you off, i extremely apologize. I'll try and slow things down...though it might mess up my plans. Hope this didnt scare you off :(
Date: 07/10/08 04:48 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
Omg! the idea is AMAZING! I just love it. I've never seen before these pairings, but it was love at first sight to me so yayy BillxJoe and TomxNick ^^ :3
Date: 07/10/08 03:10 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
0_0 so cute I'm obsessed with your story.
Date: 07/10/08 02:13 pm Title: Welcoming
So I must say, its definitely an original idea, at least from my POV, considering I've never read a Jonas Brothers fic at all... so I was really looking forward to reading it and ended up kind of disappointed.
You're a good writer in your own right - nice vocabulary as far as I could tell, good grammar and the like, so I didn't have any technical problems with the fic, just that... it seemed too easy.
Nick and Joe went to the concert, where they just happened to get near the front of the stage, where Tom just happened to notice them, where it just happened that Tom turned out to be crushing on Nick, and oh, coincidence upon coincidence, Bill has a thing for Joe too! AND their love is returned!
Come on. You catch my drift, right? I don't mean to ridicule, really, thats not it at all, but this just seems unbelievably... well, unbelievable. The idea itself is pretty unbelievable and I understand that's sort of what fanfiction is about - making the impossible possible - but I just thought you could've taken a much better approach to it.
I liked the beginning, and I liked the idea of them sneaking out to go to their concert. I even liked the part about them being trampled to death, it was just the 'OMG MY SUPER CRUSH JUST HAPPENS TO BE HERE AND IN LOVE WITH ME AND IT DOESN'T MATTER IF WE'VE NEVER MET BEFORE' part that made me wince.
Anyway. I liked reading it, even though the cliche gave me a bit of a cavity. You have a golden opportunity on your hands here, considering this is a very new idea, so I hope you can make the best of it.
Much love,
Ella
Date: 07/10/08 02:02 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
Aw Tom should know better than think of taking away Nicks virginity when he deeply believes in premarital sex. Or whatever you call it. The scene with Bill and Joe was really cute too!
Date: 07/10/08 02:00 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
humina humina. i love JB (not nearly as much as TH) so this sounds like its going to be good. Looking forward to some Jill (Boe) and Tick (Tock) action. hee =P
Date: 07/10/08 01:25 pm Title: Welcoming
dont let memories go, of me and joe!! OMFG that is hilarious. poor bill! has to be soo embarassed now.
Date: 07/10/08 12:48 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
Joe is so clumsy and Nick is so CUTE *FANGIRL SCREAM*...UM...YEAH i REALLY LIKE THIS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.~_~
Date: 07/10/08 10:14 am Title: Nice To Meet You
Yay , you stuck to Joe's original personality!
GOod!
i really liked the Tom is totally flirting with poor NIck!
I think your story is going to start a fad!
Date: 07/10/08 10:09 am Title: Nice To Meet You
okey this story is just plain wicked.i had to show my friend who adores the jonas brothers and we both was smileing like chester cats the whole time.
Date: 07/10/08 07:10 am Title: Nice To Meet You
YAY! I love it : D
Date: 07/10/08 05:52 am Title: Nice To Meet You
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! TOKIO HOTEL AND JONAS BROTHERS!!!!!! *dead*
update sooooooooooooon!!!!
xoxox
Date: 07/10/08 02:59 am Title: Nice To Meet You
That was so cute I died D: more sooon?
Date: 07/10/08 02:08 am Title: Nice To Meet You
Joe + Bill = LOVE
They need to go ahead and (attempt to) make babies together.
:D
Date: 07/10/08 01:50 am Title: Nice To Meet You
can't they just fuck already? I wanna see how Tom and Nick are in bed....or read it w/e
Author's Response: I'm sure you are not the only one that is wanting to read that, but come on. This fic is not just about sex. Really. If you want them to just 'fuck already' , just keep it to yourself. It makes me feel like shit as a writer, that the only reason you're reading is for the sex. :(
Date: 07/10/08 01:45 am Title: Nice To Meet You
=D
awsome.
bill and joe are totally meant for eachother. tom is such a mac daddy.
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