Date: 07/13/08 02:43 am Title: Crazy Kind Of Crush On You
fuck you.
that's what i have to say.
fuck you.
good job though, really.
Date: 07/13/08 02:42 am Title: Crazy Kind Of Crush On You
Uh ohhhh... even more drama!!
I love it, haha.
:DDD
Date: 07/13/08 02:36 am Title: Crazy Kind Of Crush On You
omg yay thanks love you this was like way big green and pink show lol wow he's blind loved it update soon love you
Date: 07/13/08 02:20 am Title: Underdog
Poor Nick =[ his stupid brothers gosh.
Bill is being really sweet! love it!
Cant wait to see what else you have planed :P
Date: 07/12/08 09:41 pm Title: Underdog
UGHHHHH... I want to punch Kevin.
DDDD:
I never thought I would say that... haha.
Date: 07/12/08 07:08 pm Title: Underdog
I really like this story, my only thing with it is the German you have in there. You just had me a little confused, cause when they're all talking about Tom bedding Nick, you have some of the dialog written in German and the rest in English. I would assume they would all talk German to each other, but for whatever reason you have them talking English, or I'm guessing you have them talking English because you made the effort to include German.
I think I've confused myself, and probably you. Um, ok. Basically, what I think I'm trying to say, is that, if you want to include German in your story, you should do it when they're speaking to/around non German speaking people.
Author's Response: Hi. I understand what you mean. But what I was going for with the German was that Bill was telling Gustav and Georg that Tom had sex with NICK JONAS so like... I imagined that if you hear something interesting or that drastic, you might resort to your mother language to express yourself, yes? I know when my grandmother is yelling at me in Greek, I yell right back in English and she's like...um, wrong language lol. I hope it's not too confusing. I just thought that adding the crazy German speak from the G's would make it more comical. It obviously just confused people, so I'll refrain from doing it again. Thanks so much for reading, and I'm so sorry if any of this confused you. :D
Date: 07/12/08 04:44 pm Title: Underdog
Warum hat er nicht lieben ihn? Damn that Tom!!!
GRRRR!!!!! *is pissed off now*
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! *will die without updates*
Date: 07/12/08 02:49 pm Title: Welcoming
LOL okay this is an interesting story... I love TH and JB equally so JB haters back off!!!! As long as this story stays a fantasy I guess it's fine! ;-) But I love the author so I'll keep reading...just don't damage my boys to much, kay? lol =)
Date: 07/12/08 12:55 pm Title: Underdog
YAY!
me loves it.
me loves author.
:DD
Date: 07/12/08 12:18 pm Title: Underdog
awwwwww!!! oh gott!!
update sooooon!!
xoxoxox
Date: 07/12/08 12:12 pm Title: Underdog
I like it!
I love the Jonas twist to it!
Update ASAP!!
~Emily
Date: 07/12/08 10:03 am Title: Underdog
:O they.. fought. omg. *dies*
Date: 07/12/08 09:38 am Title: Welcoming
I seriously laughed lol
NICK IS SO YOUNG O: it's sweet though
im not big on the jonas brothers but i like this story ;)
Date: 07/12/08 09:10 am Title: Underdog
ooo nick took off his purity ring for you Tom. what you gunna do, what you gunna do. :) I smell trouble.
Oh Bill, stop getting on Tom's case. You sooo know you are trying to hold back from fucking Joe. lol.
Date: 07/12/08 09:04 am Title: Take A Breath
omg that was sooo hawt. nick and tom would make a hawt HAWT pairing (Tick or Tock. or Nom. lol) I'm having a harder time imagining Nick and Tom though because I know Nick is like as Disney-fied as you can possible get and would never ... mm ya. BUT WOW! That was so hawt!!
Date: 07/12/08 08:40 am Title: Underdog
I'd like to see a reaction of JB fangirls for this ^^ At the sight of their innocent Nick to be with Tom like this :) Keep on cuz I still LUV it :D
Date: 07/12/08 08:12 am Title: Welcoming
great great great great cant wait for the next chapter!!!! pleazzzzzzzz post it soon :D
Date: 07/12/08 07:00 am Title: Underdog
I'm not a big Johnas fan but this story isn't that bad. I feel bad for Nick. And I think Kevin is being a huge jerk. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07/12/08 05:59 am Title: Underdog
;---; silly tom!
oh god I cant wait for more D: this chapter (and the previous) was freakin brilliant Leana!