Date: 07/20/23 04:29 pm Title: Welcoming
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! I didn't see it coming with them ending up with Nick/Joe but that doesn't mean its a bad thing!
Date: 05/07/10 07:13 am Title: When You Look Me In The Eyes
:O they ended up with nick and joe? :( it would have been better with the twins but i still loved the story!!
Date: 03/18/10 09:14 am Title: Nice To Meet You
I have to say, when I read where Nick and Tom were heading I sort of had a similar reaction as Bill, not agressive or that strong of course... But the sentence, jeez how slutty! Was repeated in my head several times xD
Date: 03/18/10 09:05 am Title: Welcoming
I liked the beginning of this story really much and I look forward to reading the rest =D
Though that german sentence in the end... yeah. It's all wrong...
Yes fick means fuck but the germans don't use that word in that sentence.
to translate: What the fuck happened to your arm, you would have to say: Was zur Teufel ist mit deinem Arm passiert? Wich means the same, though you use Teufel = devil instead of fuck, which is not used in such a sentence. Another tip, don't use google translate, it's the most fucked up translation program there is. Btw, nouns in german always start with a capital letter. =D
It's complicated I know, but when you first get the hang of it, it's ok =D
Author's Response: I didn't use google translate ;) I had a German speaking friend help me but maybe they made a mistake. Thank you for pointing it out!
Date: 03/18/10 08:43 am Title: Welcoming
This is awesome!
Can't wait to read the rest now :D
Date: 08/03/09 02:30 pm Title: Nice To Meet You
awwwww super!!!!
Date: 07/14/09 06:51 am Title: When You Look Me In The Eyes
ah man the twins did not end up together! well that sucks. i liked the story it was really good :)
Date: 07/13/09 06:50 pm Title: Time For Me To Fly
wtf lmfao!!!!
Date: 07/13/09 07:28 am Title: Welcoming
well google translate translated the end -“Was die fick geschah es dein arm?!”- just as you said it was, so your all good. btw i love this story all ready :)
Date: 07/07/09 12:17 am Title: Burnin' Up
It still males me feel dirtyy reason about the TH boys and JB together like this but ... I LOVE it. :P
Date: 06/25/09 04:08 pm Title: When You Look Me In The Eyes
that was different, but i actually liked it.. sequel?? :p
Date: 06/02/09 01:55 pm Title: Welcoming
Perfect as I knew it would be. I'm gonna miss this. :)~ Mysti xx
Date: 06/01/09 09:52 pm Title: When You Look Me In The Eyes
AW!! I really love this ending so so so much!! I really do. I'm so happy with the ending, everyone ended up totally happy.
Date: 06/01/09 09:31 pm Title: When You Look Me In The Eyes
loved it, I cant wait for missing scenes lolz. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 06/01/09 08:47 pm Title: When You Look Me In The Eyes
good story and nice endding
Date: 06/01/09 06:49 pm Title: When You Look Me In The Eyes
In the morning when their phones were turned back on, they would make plans to go and embrace with someone else, to go and breathe with someone else. The air was clear now.
My favorite line(s). ♥
Date: 05/28/09 05:17 pm Title: Burnin' Up
I'm kind of scared about what he means by "he would miss his brother." It makes me thinks he's leaving and isn't going to see him again. That scares me a little. But anyway, I'm so happy that you updated so quickly. And I really did love the chapter, especially the way Bill says 99% of him loves Joe, but both of them know that other 1% can't be swayed. I love it!
Date: 05/28/09 12:45 pm Title: Welcoming
Love this fic.
Currently desperately desperately hoping that it'll end up Bill/Joe and Tom/Nick....despite being an avid jonas brothers hater.
I don't know how you've done it, but I'm actually not routing Bill/Tom here...that's a great feat.
Whatever the ending, I know it will be brilliant, as every chapter before it. :)
Date: 05/27/09 10:28 pm Title: Burnin' Up
oh, how i wish Bill and Tom end up together. Please, please make it happen
Date: 05/27/09 10:12 pm Title: Burnin' Up
wow nice chapter (: