Date: 11/10/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 9
oh, right, i should review huh? I mean, it will be the positive encouragement you need to be coaxed into writing more ficlets right?
Ok, this was cool, the descriptions were good and pretty entertaining, bill was a little bit of a wet blanket and neither of them was hugely developed but I liked the momentary glance i got of them, like looking into the window of thier lives for a brief moment, seeing an important event but not came before or after that.
Date: 09/23/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Bill looked down, “Nah…” He said grinning, “Lets confuse people” he laughed and walked through the door to the outside world of Carnival mayhem.-- Hahahah I wish I could see that lol
Date: 09/23/10 10:21 pm Title: Show Stopping Words
" I like the ones where I’m in a mental institute for some reason…"
Hahahah I loved that
Date: 09/08/09 12:05 am Title: Laptop Nuisance
Very NICE!
Date: 11/06/08 06:59 pm Title: Body Language
Havok did an awesome job proof-reading. ^^
Author's Response: Havok is an awesome snake... he enjoys proof reading and hiding in my hair.rnThanksfor your review =^^=
Date: 11/06/08 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
I know the movie...I think is is Final Destination 3 right or was it 2. I don't remember it was one of them though. I love all this little stories they are so FREAKING SWEET!!!
Author's Response: Hehehe Yay!!! Final Destination 3 Rules!!rnrnYou're the first person to guess that =^^= Go You!!!rnrnThanks to ~Everyone~ who has reviewed everyone of them means a lot to me ^^
Date: 11/06/08 05:11 pm Title: Albtraum
They're such believable little snippets. I love that. Though bus!showers don't sound like fun :/
Date: 11/06/08 05:07 pm Title: Laptop Nuisance
Something like this should annoy me, but it doesn't. I lol'd. It was shockingly believable. And well written. Yay!
Date: 11/06/08 04:47 pm Title: Body Language
I really liked this. The set up was good enough so it wasn't just total smut but it was still really hot w/ a romanti twist.
Date: 08/25/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Much loved. :D What's 'du kranke sau' mean? the closest thing I found was "Du siehst krank aus" and it literally means "you look ill".
Ummm, write about a day at the amusemesn park! xD Yes, ignore the whole fact that they'd have to get there and not be recognized... But Bill in the house of mirrors... And Bill on one of those little kid rides where it's like a jail and has a ball pit and a slide... Yeah. XD
Author's Response: Thank you all for the Reviews! =^^=rnrnIn answer to your question Alina Van, 'Du Kranke Sau' means 'you sick pig' [or directly translated 'you ill sow']rnrnThank youfor the suggestion ^^ I shall do my bestrnrn~Cat~ xXx
Date: 08/22/08 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
so cute and funny ^___^
Author's Response: Yay thankies ^^rnrnhehehe i only put it up a few hours ago... an already having a review makes me so happy ... hehe yes i have no life ^^
Date: 08/05/08 03:10 am Title: Show Stopping Words
Ah! So cute. :D
Suggestion: Georg and Gustav talk the twins into watching a horror movie one night.
We all know Bill doesn't exactly enjoy horrow films.
Author's Response: Thanks to everyone who has reviewed ^^ Hugs to you all!!!!rnrnThank you Alina Van for the suggestiion... i shall see what i can do ^^rn
Date: 08/05/08 01:47 am Title: Show Stopping Words
These are way cute ficlets... Keep up the good work! ;D
Date: 08/05/08 01:23 am Title: Show Stopping Words
awww the Tom and Bill love is beautiful!
Date: 02/27/08 05:17 pm Title: Hissy Fit
ahahahah that was funny! xD
love this story!
more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the reviews ^.^ hehehehe rnrni shall gladly write more as soon as i get a few more ideas.... university is currently killing off my brain cells >.<;;; hehehehernrnThanks again for the loverrrrly reviews ^.^ they make me shmile =3
Date: 02/27/08 05:13 pm Title: Albtraum
aawwww so CUTE!!!! poor georg was like: what the fuck?!
love it! ^_^
Date: 02/27/08 05:10 pm Title: Spontaneity
aaaawww!!! so cuteeeeee
Date: 02/27/08 05:08 pm Title: Laptop Nuisance
its interesting ^_~
Date: 02/27/08 04:14 pm Title: Laptop Nuisance
I love this one! Its so cool how Tom said "Wonder... what it would be like... to act that story out..." x)
omg I can so imagine Bill's reaction if Tom would say that to him!
xoxox