Date: 02/27/08 03:53 pm Title: Laptop Nuisance
ok, this last chapter was really cute, mainly teh last part!
keep going!!
Date: 11/01/07 03:05 pm Title: Laptop Nuisance
awww they're cute! i love them! you should definately write more! =] x
Date: 10/20/07 06:46 am Title: Albtraum
I love how you wrote their feelings =)
And also the way they act with each other, that they are there for each other.
Yeah really nice ^__^
And it's sweet so it doesn't really mather that it is short, although it wasn't that short =D
Well can't wait for the next story =)
byebyxx
Date: 10/20/07 01:59 am Title: Albtraum
awwww cute...p.s what's albtraum? lol
Author's Response: Thenks for reviewing ^.^rnrnAlbtraum if german for nightmare... well... at least thats what teh internet says ^.^ i took german for GSCE, but that was three years ago... and i'm rantng...rnrnThanks again for reviweing ^.^
Date: 10/19/07 03:20 pm Title: Albtraum
Albtraum? Simply Wonerful.
-Jherri
Date: 10/16/07 05:06 pm Title: Spontaneity
Lol, counting sugar grains, sounds like something Bill would do...then quickly give up on.
Date: 10/14/07 04:18 pm Title: Laptop Nuisance
Something you should really right more I'm already hooked.
Date: 10/14/07 11:44 am Title: Laptop Nuisance
Wow... great story! You've sure got talent, so keep up the good work... I would love to read more of your work :)