Date: 06/08/09 01:51 am Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
well im loving this storie! i just really want smthn to happen idk lyk scary n tom saving bill or bill getting a weird feeling seeing girls trying to get to tom! and and... well the new styles, i lyk bill but tom... i just cant get used to it! *cries* he doesnt look bad, but, black? corn braids? he is messing with my head and idea of his looks, anyway, i still luv him XD
Author's Response: lol thanks! n.n rnTom saving Bill my just happen, hmm...rnlmao i know what you mean1 i wrote a whole blog based on my frustration with Tom's new hair, but what can you do? oh well.
Date: 06/06/09 03:30 am Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
i wanna see the boys get together in every way...
Author's Response: lol don't we all?
Date: 06/05/09 11:53 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
AHAHAH! A stick up their ass while trying to speak english. BRILLIANT!
1. bow chica bow wow!
*cough* sorry. Had to say that XD
2: Not that I caught. But then I get too wrapped up in reading to pay attention. Which is why I fail at betaing.
3. Love them both! Bill can pull off anything, and well, I like cornrows better than braids.
Author's Response: omg i thought i responded to all the reviews but i guess i didn't. i like corn rows better then braids too, at least on a guy n//n
Date: 06/04/09 06:00 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
I just came accross this and I have alreadys fallen in love with it. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks and i will. n_n
Date: 06/04/09 03:54 pm Title: 100% and Misunderstandings
ohh I've just started reading this and I'm already in love with it.
How can Tom not be happy to live in Toronto?? I've been there on holiday last christmas and I'm in love with that city. I'm gonna go back there again on summer and I'm eager to leave!!
Gonna go back to the story now xd
Author's Response:
LOL i agree Toronto rocks (i've lived here all my life) Tom's just a sourpuss because he had to leave home lol.
i'm glad you like it and i hope you keep reading n.n
Date: 06/04/09 03:52 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
i loved these last couple chapters cant wait to read more...dont get them to have sex on the trip, thats too early. i didnt see any mistakes, and i like the new styles, i absolutely love Toms new gauges, but i can say i liked the old hair styles better
Author's Response: I'm so glad you did! Even with my really spaced out updates -_-'rnYay for no mistakes! I suck at proofing my work and I'm too impatient to wait for a beta to do it. LOLrnwait, What?! those things in Tom's ears are spacers?!? i had no idea... i guess they look kinda good? n.nrnrnthanks for the review! i really appreciate it! :)rn
Date: 06/04/09 11:27 am Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
OOOH i loved it!
1. Maybe TOm and Bill should kiss? IDK... lol
3. LOVE IT!!! THANK YOU!
Author's Response: i'm glad you did! n_nrnkissing...i like, i like....rnthanks for the review!=)
Date: 06/04/09 02:04 am Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
I can't believe I haven't freaking reviewed this, I thought I had.. But now I don't think I did *rambleramble*
Love this story, so much! Keep up the *Awesome* work. :3
Answers to the questions:
1. Some drama maybe? And sex? No, I'm kidding. I don't knooow! Drama would be good, I love drama. x3
2. No mistakes from what I read, but I maybe wrong but I don't think so anyway.
3. Ee! Love, love, love!! Now Bill's hairs calmed down (so it doesn't look as much like a mop as it did,) it's great and he looks so good witha beanie. And Tom's look is just like.. jaw-dropping, drool worthy. :D
Author's Response: i'm not sure...but i love reading these no matter how many you post! n_nrnThanks! for reviewing. it's these that keep me working hard...or worrying during my procrastination, when I'm supposed to be working hard...-_-'
Date: 06/04/09 12:15 am Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
to answer ur questions...
1. the boy should do it..but not all the way...have something funny happen or somethin.
2. not that i noticed.
3. I love their new look. Even if it is different and I will miss toms dreads...they are still the same loveable(sp?) and goofy guys we all love and care for.
Keep it comin!
Author's Response:
i've been getting thar suggestion alot lol. funny is my thing, you can count on that at least lol
i agree, they'll be forever loveable no matter what they do to their hair, i just miss the blond hottie that was tom *sigh* oh well.
Thanks for the review! you make me happy when you do! n.n
Date: 06/03/09 10:54 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
Okay love it love this love you =]
And thats all im gonna say anymore as to actaully "review"-ing your stories haha xD
1.) Don't know, don't care, you;ll think of something =] haha aren't i helpful? =P
2.) *CLAP CLAP CLAP* i didn't see any mistakes this time! YAYYY Janet! =D lol
3.) GAH you already know what i have to say on this topic... UGH... -.-
P.s. LMFAO at the "Quebec Trip" idea =P
P.s.2. HAHA Georg and his rant about Canadian French... hmm what does that remind me of that i hear EVERY SINGLE FUCKING TIME the topic of French comes up lol =P ;D
P.s.3. LOL Hazaa? = You never say that around meee... = and i'm around you ALOT haha...
P.s.4. We still have cake left =D lol
and i feel like i'm forgetting something but meh i'm tooooo tired to care... see you in law tomorrow? maybe? DAMN i wanna see the end of that movie!!! ARGH!!! =[
Author's Response:
*blows rasberry* LOL ilyt!!! *muah!*
dude, leave me and my frech hatig alone! lol i've offended a poor french canadian girl who reads my stories....(shit!!) lol i feel bad enough. (that doesn't mean that i'll stoparounf you tho...teehee)
Hazaa is something i don't say at school simply for the fact that i sound retared saying it and you prolly laugh at me (like you always do...)
Cake!! ur making me fat!
law fails and i wanna see the end too...i hope mr.brown lets us come down to see it...if not i'll rent it or something.
Date: 06/03/09 09:44 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
DUDDDEEEEEEEE!!! :D :D
i'm in love with that story! :P
and for the trip... will they really have sex?? X'D
there are mistakes but it's ok everybody makes mistakes!!!! ^^
i love their new styles!!! ^^
oh! and... I'm from Quebec and when I talk in english, it's not like I have a stick in my ass!!! X'D X'D X'D
... I think... X'D
Author's Response:
oh!!! thanks!! and i'm sorry if i offened you!! it's just a way for me to take a jab at Terrible-Tash (my BFF) cuz she's french and she knows how much i hated having to learn it in school. lol agin sorry if i offended you! i love french ppl...(just not Terrible-Tash lol)
They may or may not...i haven't thought that far ahead yet that's why i'm asking you guys lol. n//n
Thanks so much for reading! i'll try to keep the french canadian jokes to myself from now on...but one or two might slip out :P
Date: 06/03/09 08:39 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
I'm so anxious for this trip!
I don't know how Tom should feel about being with Bill around a bunch of people, but I want him to try. They should be somewhat excited to have some time together when it seems like they haven't had much. And I understand Bill's nervousness, but it doesn't seem like Tom's expecting anything from him....yet. I like their new styles. It took me a little getting used to. Tom used to look like that punky kid who thought he was all that, but now he almost looks like a straight up criminal to me. Like, if I saw him at a store and didn't know who he was, I might be tempted to clutch my bag and walk quickly in the opposite direction. I feel like their old looks work better for slash, though. You know? Maybe not, but so far I like the old hair better for...stuff. Haha, that's it. Keep writing. I think the story gets better as it goes on. I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response:
your ideas are gold! *jots down notes* lol
And with Tom's hair, i just wish he kept it blond...*sigh* oh well... and ur right, the old hair works so much better for slash fiction.
Thanks! i'm so glad i'm improving! n.n And i'm so happy your enjoying it! thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 06/03/09 07:38 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
plz update soon thx ssoo much=]
Author's Response: okay! :) thanks for reading!
Date: 06/03/09 06:51 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
eh.. 1) Let them have fun^^ Let bill surprise them by being able to speak french?
2)I haven't seen one.
3)I like it, but I'll mourn for da loss of da dreads 4-ever^_^ Bill's hair ain't changed permanently, so yeah. I love his soft looking styled hair, but this is okay too.
Author's Response:
-_-' i can't write french to save my life lol but we'll see :)
Bill's hair is permanent?!? really? i wonder how he got it like that...*ponders*
anyway thanks for the review n_n
Date: 06/03/09 06:48 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
I loved it, it was amazing. And I dont think they should do it, they should get to know each other and maybe mess around but not have sex. Plus I could never do what both Bill and Tom did, get up there and talk, I would have a heartattake and die lolz. Tom's was amazing, very creative. Update soon hun, keep it up. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: thaks! =) messing around hmm...*scribbles down notes* thanks for the idea! and yea i hate presenting in school I get the shakes -_-' i'm working on it! :) thanks for the review n.n
Date: 06/03/09 06:26 pm Title: Screeching Guitars and School Presentations
For the third question I hope that Bill & Tom's hair dews go back to the way they where..For the first question I am not sure what should happen on the trip..Suprise me.
Author's Response:
lol then surprise i will! :) their hair has me all trippy -_-' i want the lion man and the blond goodness back too lol
Thanks for reading!! n.n
Date: 06/03/09 10:06 am Title: Date fails and School Trips
I hope you add more really soon!
Author's Response: i will! :) thanks for reading n.n
Date: 05/31/09 06:39 pm Title: Date fails and School Trips
mmmm i missed this story so much :)
Author's Response: i'm sorry!!! -_-' i'm so lazy lol i'm hoping to post the next chapter soon so hopefully the wait won't be nearly as long n.n
Date: 05/24/09 10:10 pm Title: Date fails and School Trips
That's interesting I wonder if Bill will lose his virginity on the trip?
Author's Response:
maybe...maybe not, we'll just have too see in the next few chapters. n.n thanks for reading and reviewing. it makes me happy! lol
Date: 05/21/09 12:28 am Title: Date fails and School Trips
i can forgive XD
now really this thingy of the sex thing is hilarious! XD Tom paled!!!! lolz i do wanna see what happens next!
Author's Response: yay!!! thankies >.