Date: 12/30/09 11:18 pm Title: Orange flowers, dress shirts and papers
ack cliffies shall be the death of me!!! good work though i cant wait for the next one. The holidays were boring but fun....you basic family get together! best gift was this pair of pijama pants. theyre meant for guys but guys always have the best clothes so thats all good! keep writing!!!!
Author's Response: i'm sorry i hate them to -.-' thanks for the review :)
Date: 12/30/09 11:08 pm Title: Orange flowers, dress shirts and papers
1. I've gone to bed about 3am and woken up 4pm. Eaten my dinner, reading FF's and gone to bed XD
Author's Response: That sounds like it was fun? lol thanks for the review n.n
Date: 12/30/09 10:53 pm Title: Orange flowers, dress shirts and papers
Aw, this chapter was so sweet. I, like Bill, am a romantic so this had me cooing and gushing hearts, smiles and rainbows everywhere. I'm not going to lie...I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
As for my holidays! They were good, thank you for asking! I saw both sides of my family on Christmas Eve and Christmas...and for New Years we're having people come to my house. We're going to blast music all night, it's really fun. What do you do?
My favorite gift this year...I got these kick ass pajamas that are so soft and comfortable. What about yooou?
Author's Response: i'm glad you were honest with me :P i'm glad you had an awesome holiday and a great gift too! i didn't really do all that much...at least not enough that i remember now...In March...-.-' Thanks for the review though! :)
Author's Response: i'm glad you were honest with me :P i'm glad you had an awesome holiday and a great gift too! i didn't really do all that much...at least not enough that i remember now...In March...-.-' Thanks for the review though! :)
Date: 12/30/09 08:22 pm Title: Orange flowers, dress shirts and papers
awww that sucks you left it like that mam come on put more good chapters on here.PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i know, i know i suck! but yeah i'm sorry i left it so long but i'm updating it for ya soon! n.n
Date: 12/30/09 07:58 pm Title: Orange flowers, dress shirts and papers
favorite gift?
Hmmm...I have to say the Tokio Hotel bedding I got from my host parents xD
And that was mean! I'm not really a big reader of that kind of stuff, but even I am waiting! Update soon?
Author's Response: that sounds like an awesome gift! i'm sorry i'm taking so long with the chapter but it will be up soon :)
Date: 12/09/09 05:38 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
How about like a trail bill has to follow it can start at his locker and he'll get clues to the next place were the next clue is ....?
Just an idea!
Author's Response: it's a great idea too! thanks for lending it out to me!:) and thanks for the review. n.n
Date: 12/09/09 07:12 am Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
Haha, this chapter was funny with Bill pretty much being a girl in it. That was great. Oh, poor Tom. He's trying so hard! Hm, I think since he knows Bill is a little ticked already he should have a big public thing. Like they can have a romantic picnic...at school. But Tom would probably have to get on all sorts of teachers' good sides for that to happen. I dunno. I think Bill should be a little surprised and quite pleasantly so.
And my day...is SHIT. I just found out that I'm probably going to get deported from the country if I don't take care of some things PRONTO. Damn, why is the Italian government bad at EVERYTHING?
Author's Response: i agree, girly Bill is awesome. Oh no! i hope everything is sorted for you now! that would suck to have to leave a place like italy :( thanks for the review and ideas! n.n
Date: 12/09/09 02:45 am Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
aaaww :"D
1. Tom should put out alot of candles outside of Bill's house and make Bill follow the candles where Tom stand and ask him for prom or something like that :D
2. I'm sick -.-"
Author's Response: candles!! i love fire...like actually. i'm a bit of a pyro-maniac...anywho...lol. OMG i hope you're all better now! being sick is horrible, i despise getting ill. :( thanks for the review :)
Date: 12/09/09 12:18 am Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
I will cut you... hahahah that rocked! ~clears throat~ ok, i think that it would be sweet if Tom put one rose petal in Bill's locker, a few on his desk, a handful in a shoebox that could be send to his house(before work) then have ten roses send to his job. then when Bill comes home, he could go to his room and one rose and a note could be on his pillow. that's eleven... then the note could say, 'Open your bedroom window.' and Tom could be outside it with the twelfth rose and a picnic basket. at the park, Tom could start a little campfire for smores and then take a little list out of the basket, verbally listing off, 'picnic, park, fire....' then take out a red glass spun rose and ask Bill to the prom. OKAY!!! sorry, i could just see it...~blush~ ok update soon and reply to this review, if you don't mind. i wanted to know if that idea was okay or too mushy? all i know is that Bill would LOVE it!!!
Author's Response: roses!!! very Romeo and Juliet-esque and pretty too! sorry i took so long with the reply! i don't think anything is too mushy as long as it fits the tone of the story. i'm hopefully updating sometime between tomorrow and early next week. i've been super busy. thanks for the review though, and the ideas! n.n
Date: 12/08/09 09:15 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
ur lucky i was busy with school..so I couldn't harass you....but Tom should ask him in the most cheesiest but romantic way possible...use your head!!! ;)
Author's Response: lol i was actually looking forward to ur badgering and missed it when you didn't! i will use my head as much as possible! promise. :D
Date: 12/08/09 08:04 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
1. Okay, okay so I have this image in my head of what he should do.. bare with me, alright !? XD
I'm not good with stories and stuff. :P
Okay, so like, Tom's leaning next to Bill's locker while Bill is like, putting his stuff up or something.(He isn't aware of Tom) So, Bill closes his locker and turns and is surprised when he sees Tom, holding a single rose. :3 and he askes Bill to go to prom. And Bill says yes, of course !
Lmao, its so fluffy and cheesy but I can see it happening !
Lol.. err, this is why I just read and don't write. XD
Anyways, this chapter was funny ~ especially there phone conversation, even though Tom didn't listen. XD
I can't wait til you update. :D
2. The kid I like stepped on my shoes, and my best friend saw him talking to this girl that he likes. MY DAY WAS CRAP.
And yours? (:
Author's Response: that's pretty detailed, you could totally write your own stories! you obviously have the imagery down. :) Fluff and Cheese are my babies! don't boys suck? don't worry about him, he has no idea what he's missing! mine was okay, could have been better, but okay. thanks so much for the ideas and the review! n.n
Date: 12/08/09 08:02 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
500! Woot Go J-Clipp-Swabb! =D hehe.
1.) Dunno, you'll think of something, and if you don't you'll be bugging me in school to help you -.-' even though i'm fail at that.
2.) You already know... =[ pretty fucking shit lol.
LOVIES YOU =] b29;
Author's Response: know!!! i iz osm wif da revuz!!! :) i was speaking gangsta Jack rite thurr -.-' okay i'll stop. and ur days are always horrible, especially when ur not around me! *cutesy face* and i loves you too sugar lump! :P
Date: 12/08/09 07:26 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
1.I think Tom should take Bill on the picnic he wants....by a lake with a campfire maybe, with all his favorite treat's and wine!
2. My day was shitty-in more way's than one. Hope your day was good!
I really like this chahpter and love that Tom is asking Bill's friend's for help-at least he want's to make it special when he ask's Bill!
Author's Response: wow that would make Bill very happy wouldn't it? lol and my day was lame, but i lived, so i'll get over it :) thanks for the input! n.n
Date: 12/08/09 07:15 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
Aww, I really liked da phone part!
How he should ask...
um send him a card with "Will you go to prom with me?" Don't have idea's.
We don't have proms here. Even if I think i'm sure no guy would have ever asked me out xD.
How was my day.
Rushy!
School 10 - 10:30 Was 15 mins late cause I missed my train again.
Work 1 - 5 So after school I rushed back to my city grabbed something to eat and changed at work.
We had 2 work a lil longer tho cause it's "snack" day and we had 2 bake over 200 egg roles(or whatever they're called)
Thennnn my sis picked me up and we went to the movie. We saw Precious.
Came back home, spoke 2 mom on da phone briefly, fitted some clothes while listening 2 music, braided my dreads, got in my PJ, came online seeing my friends left me mssg, and were wondering here I was, and now I miss then and they're not here anymore *sobs*
I'm hoping they'll come back, but idk.
So right now i'm a incy wincy sad.
(I'm so miserable when he's not arounddddd! xD nah jk!)
Okay, this is getting 2 personal sorry chick!
And da story, yeah I like it. Do your thing! :D Greeeeetigns,
A very bipolar Betje
Author's Response: don't say that! i'm sure any guy would be lucky to ask you out any where! :) Oh! Precious was an awesome movie, i saw it with me mum. :)i hope you're not sad anymore! it sucks when friends go away. my best friend went away to a different convenient for a year and a half and i almost couldn't handle it -.-' i have seperation issues lol thanks for the input! n.n
Date: 12/08/09 07:09 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
oh! I Was so excited when I saw this was updated! This made my day better.
1. I think that maybe Tom should take Bill on a walk through a park or something and ask him then.
2. My day has been tiring, last day before I have to start working on my final projects, and then a week until theyre due.
Yours?
Author's Response: hmmm, parks...i shall consider it! lol my day has been pretty chill. Had a huge business presentation to do, which i probably bombed, but at least it's done! :) thanks for asking.
Date: 12/08/09 06:33 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
Exactly how Bill wanted! I loved this chapter. Tom's so clueless. ;)
I need to vent, and since you asked how our days were....
Super suckish, one of my best friend's mother passed away and I'm super worried about him. I'll be able to see him tomorrow, but I'm nervous about it. I don't know if my presence will be helpful or not. :(
Thanks for listening. :)
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the chapter! :) That sucks! i hope that your friend feels better and i'm sure you being there was very helpful. having people that care about you is always helpful. =)
Date: 12/08/09 06:32 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
I think Tom should ask Bill to prom over a nice dinner..My day was alright I guess I had school, I go to an adult school you would never guess they are all adults acting the way they do..But I guess a nice dinner to make up for what Tom did to Bill by forgetting him to ask him to prom/formal. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: gosh Tom's horrible isn't he! forgetting to ask his own boyfriend to the prom -.-' lol and that sounds crazy...adults acting like children... o.O thanks for the review!
Date: 12/08/09 06:25 pm Title: Ghetto Queens and Prom Invitations
Tom should ask Bill to prom, like he wanted (:
surprise bill by going on a date to a picnic, then ask him!
Author's Response: lol thanks for the input! next chapter will hopefully be posted soon!
Date: 11/28/09 07:26 pm Title: Meeting the Parents and NYU
the beginning was so....fluffy O_O lol
Author's Response: i know! -.- fluff is soo not my thing like, at all, i swear i got a tooth ache! lol thanks for the review :)
Date: 11/26/09 12:29 am Title: Meeting the Parents and NYU
Yay! u found an end! im really glad u did n i do love the fact that there will b moar b4 u write the last chappie! yay for u!!
1. type type type... if im at school n bored then i write XD
2. it IS going way too fast!! lol u will see how good u do in ur entranc exams! i was worried last year but now look at me! im in! XD
n hohoho, i love how tomi is that way, still he should find what he loves to do, think bout himself n not bout bill that much, i mean i would hate myself if my bf did that cuz of me! :S if they are together is so they can b better people n reach their dreams and desires. not to drown... so yeah, still tomi is waaay too cute n moar with his im not gay thingy haha
Author's Response: i'm so totally relived now that i finally found an ending now i can count down to the end! :)