Date: 01/02/20 11:10 pm Title: Untouched
this was a really good story!
Date: 07/10/19 12:09 am Title: Untouched
This was a good story
Date: 05/12/10 07:06 pm Title: Untouched
OMG I LOVE THIS it was in the random story area and i clicked on it and omg its amazing! :) i love it!
Love,
Ashley
Date: 03/16/10 06:42 pm Title: Untouched
This was really good. =) I love how you fit the song in with the story.
Date: 02/12/10 06:27 pm Title: Untouched
That was touching I think.
I wish there would have been more indication that Bill felt the same around that time that they kissed. It felt a spontanious, like, I understand why Tom kissed him, I don't understand why Bill went with it.
Anyways, it's ok, I liked the story. :) Well done.
Date: 08/13/09 11:21 pm Title: Untouched
Maybe Tom has just discovered a better treatment.
Date: 06/13/09 11:55 pm Title: Untouched
I did enjoy this! Great job.
Date: 05/03/09 03:59 am Title: Untouched
Wow... This story is great man...
Date: 04/20/09 07:10 pm Title: Untouched
Really original idea! It seemed pretty realistic, and I loved the twin's relationship so much! Really sweet!
-BRE
Date: 04/15/09 03:17 pm Title: Untouched
that was awesome!
No wait...it was MORE than awesome!!!
It was P-E-R-F-E-C-T!! O____O
Date: 12/04/08 04:34 pm Title: Untouched
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Ugh I feel like a crack addict!!
How many times must I read this story u.u it's s-s-s-so good!
Author's Response: its not even that good! D:
Date: 10/31/08 01:30 am Title: Untouched
awwww....i loved it....idk why you think your stuff is bad....its actually really good ^_^
Date: 08/30/08 12:32 am Title: Untouched
I just want to read this story over anf over and over and over again for ever. Because if there's one story that could ever make anythign feel so right or sweet it's this one.
I know I've reviewed this before, but...it's lovely, it really is.
Date: 07/10/08 12:51 pm Title: Untouched
I liked it. It was cute. ^.^
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 07/08/08 05:56 pm Title: Untouched
That was fabulous! =D
The kiss scene was AMAZING.
Definate love, love, love.
Author's Response: THANKS! n_n i wanted to please you with this. c_c
Date: 07/07/08 10:22 pm Title: Untouched
I loved this story n_n
it was so sweet and hot at the same time, great work!
Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it. (:
Date: 07/07/08 09:41 pm Title: Untouched
Loved this. So deep and emotional. Great piece here!
Author's Response: thank you so much! =D
Date: 07/07/08 06:03 pm Title: Untouched
That was... amazing. Really, really unique and sad and "touching." I hope to read more from you. :)
Author's Response: O_O.rnThat's quite wonderful to hear!rnThank you!