Date: 04/14/11 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I didn't like this one like I liked the first story. I understand that Tom wants to give his brother all but I don't understand why it all ends so badly, poor Bill. Some weird power struggle they have..
Date: 12/12/10 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
It broke my heart. I guess Bill is more mature than Tom emotionally in this story. Too bad Tom can't give what he gets.
Date: 04/15/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
awe it's all hurty and fighty and very nice. Great addition to what you had already started.
Date: 06/10/09 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1
So you did it again :). After reading "His brother's keeper" this was so confusing, so torturing story to read. I was gasping my breath with this one. You wrote so intense emotional rollercoaster here, that it not fair to call it pure smut. No way! I'm trying to find a word for this, but I don't have anything in my head. The way how love goes wrong.... How far limits can be pushed... what complexity and mixed feelings are involved. Just WOAH again!
I partly red this as a porn for my imagination, but partly description of on difficult and twisted form of love. Hell, I love everything with twisted turns. I didn't know should I cry or masturbate, if I can say so. Extremely hot and yet full of sadness, anger, love, hurt, fear. I like your way to write very much.
I think it would have been easy to say that they both were idiots here and they should just work things out differently, but in life people do not work that way. People are just trying to handle their mixed emotions and unknown future the best way they can. That's seen in this fic and I like it.
The whole series of Keeper Universe is amazing and goes definitely to my favourites. Thank you!
Date: 05/27/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
idk wat to think really....
just dat tom was a dick
putting bill through all of that pain[deep-throating]
he's mean...i still love him though!!!=]
Date: 09/23/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, this was good. i liked the emotional complexity of it. like the boys havent figured it out yet and we havent either. i'd love to see more!
Date: 08/14/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW!! this is just so ... omg wow. everything is soo descriptive. everything is sooo well written. I love how bill keeps pushing and trying just for Tom. you really hit something in me w/ this one. i read it and i was just in complete and total awe. brilliant, really. and .. did i say WOW yet? =P
Date: 07/21/08 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This had the same intensity as the other one, but it was just a little more confusing. Or maybe it was just me. xD. I think i understood everything by the end, so it doesnt matter all that much.
I think that last line is just terrible. It makes it seem like a sad ending! Was it supposed to be? I mean, technically they are still together yeah?
Well, i still liked it. The part where Tom told Bill to "do it to him like me" was particularly heart wrenching, but i loved the idea that if Tom did it right he could get Bill off too, lol.
Date: 07/19/08 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow I really thought Bill was going to get fucked. I'm glad he didn't.
I liked it.
Date: 07/09/08 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was breath-taking and intense. Reading the first few lines I almost run away because it was too kinky for me, but anyway I read the whole fic and it was not just smut at all. Just that the way they express their love to each other goes wrong.
You're an amazing writer.
Date: 07/07/08 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, so beautiful. The descriptions are amazing and the emotions are so deep, they feel so real. Such a wonderful fic!
Date: 07/07/08 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1
excuse me for screaming now but. YOU PUT THE WRONG WARNING ON IT!
in mye eys that was NOT Light kink. it was NOT kink in any way. THAT WAS TO MEŽ. rape. and nothing but rape.
Date: 07/07/08 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this fic. It's amazingly emotive and hot in a despairing way. Lovely like an atomic mushroom cloud.