Date: 08/01/09 04:34 pm Title: be really good
That was amazing. I never thought I would enjoy a mental image of Tom like that so much.
Date: 02/01/09 09:26 pm Title: be really good
*clears throat and smiles* That was pretty interesting. I've never thought of Tom in a school girl outfit. But that was pretty hot. And then him bottoming. I wish it could've been a longer smut scene though. But it was amazing nonetheless!!
Date: 12/29/08 07:04 pm Title: be really good
botTOM. Guh. And Tomi in a school girl outfit. That was unexpected, but I liked it. :]]
Date: 11/02/08 11:49 am Title: be really good
Great xD Haha, poor Tomi xP I love it ^^ Dirty, and Bill's the hottest here *grin*
Author's Response: hihi, oh thanksies, and yes, Bill is rather dirty ,p
Date: 10/15/08 10:58 am Title: be really good
Oh, is so hot XD
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies ,)
Date: 10/15/08 08:42 am Title: be really good
""I’m not enjoying this, I’m not enjoying this…oh fuck, who am I kiddin', I’m so enjoying this!""
best line of the fic... heh Tomi gets it
Author's Response: lol, I'm so happy when people find favorite lines, lets me know what I'm writing right ,p thanksies !!! and yeah, tomi is so getting it ,p
Date: 08/27/08 02:36 am Title: be really good
*giggles* That was brilliant... Hot and naughty and makes you smile all at the same time.
I promised myself only one more before bed- I think this was a good choice!
Author's Response: hihi, I do that too, the 'only one more' thing, never seem to be able to keep it oO thank you so much for this, it means a lot to me that you liked it !
Date: 08/13/08 06:38 am Title: be really good
I love it! Although topping Tom still and slutty Bill still works best for me ;)
Author's Response: lol, thank you so much, it meant a lot to me that you reviewed <3
Date: 07/13/08 12:11 pm Title: be really good
I can't believe you wrote this...
This wasn't sexy...
This wasn't funny...
It wasn't even good...
It was hotter than the flames of Hell!!!
It was Rolling On The Floor Laughing My Ass Off!!!!!
It was FANTASTIC!!!
That last line just blew my head off!!! (I leave it to you, to figure out witch head... ;)
YAY!!!!!
Good plot, good story, I love the beginning where you can "hear" Bill's thoughts!
"Who ‘invented’ socks anyway?" LOL Soo Bill...
And the two lines about sliding... Gulp OMG...GLXBLT
Tom in schoolgirl uniform... Maybe, I don't know... Fuck, who am I kidding... Hell Yeah!!!!
Tom Bottoming... Very nice!:) Yay! Like it a lot :D
Tom Submissive... Gulp... Ehhmm... Errr... GLXBLT... Drools... I...Ehh...
FUCKING LOVE IT :D
More please... Please (?)
If all your upcoming one-shots are THIS Good... keep 'em coming!!!
And you say I'm spoiling you??? No way!! You are spoiling me!!! (all of us, really)
100 X Thank you!!!
“We’re brothers, Tomi, we don’t fuck like normal people.” Awww So sweet, and hot... And dirty, all at the same time! I don't know if I'm the only one thinking this or even if it crossed your mind when you wrote it, but i also found it a bit sad...
“If you do this for me… “I’ll let you do that little kink you like later!”
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
Sequel Please
I liked it... A lot!
Thank you
Anders
Author's Response: LOL ! seriously, you DO spoil me ,p okay, first off THANK YOU sweet Jesus are you trying to kill me by trying to make me blush to death or something xD because that feels like what I'm doing! hihi and Bill's thoughts, that was actually my randomness ,p see when I write these stories my brain is making these little comments on the stuff that I write and that was just one of them, the doorway thing as well ,p so, this was my little kink to the fullest; submissive,pampered up,riding Bill Tom, just had to write it! naw, you though it was sad? my brain was going: how do normal people fuck anyway? and then; not their brother! so yeah, didn't have much time to think of it as sad, but now that you mention it I can see where you're going with it! lol and I just had to mention Tom's little kink, just to be mean and have you begging for a sequel, which I managed so the world makes sense again ,) there might be a sequel one time though, but I'm not promisisng anything! lots of love <3 luce
Date: 07/13/08 10:11 am Title: be really good
Hooooooooot
Tom has a kinky side too!! Are we going to see it? :D
Author's Response: hihi, you might ,) but I'm not promisisng anything (although I will most likely wright it)
Date: 07/09/08 05:07 pm Title: be really good
*XD Georg spanks Tom
*Bill gets turned on by seeing Tom get spanked :P
*Tom had nearly thrown a bitch fit the size of Bill’s last time, when the suitcase housing his caps had been thrown around carelessly.
-> LOL
*“That or he’s shopping for lingerie again!”
-> wahaha
*“Why can’t we just fuck like normal people, huh? I’m horny, you’re horny…and obviously mad…come on, Billa, I don’t wanna wear those!” Tom’s eyes were drawn to the outfit again, it really was the kinkiest thing his little brother had come up with for a while.
-> I wanna see that outfit!
*“If you do this for me…” Bill pressed closer, his entire warm, little body lined up against Tom’s deliciously. “I’ll let you do that little kink you like later!”
-> Oeh! That's tempting!
*Sexy hexy Tom!
*Bill is talking dirty! Me likes it!
*Bill stretching Tom is so hot!
*It really was the most fantastic feeling! Sliding down on Bill.
It really was the most amazing feeling! Sliding into Tom.
-> hotness!
* I can’t believe my little brother is coming inside my ass…
-> even more hotness
I loved this fic!
Author's Response: lol, I had to have the spanking Tom there, it was just too good to leave out ,p I am so happy that you liked this, and it's so much fun to see which sentences that were good, it helps me know what to write more of ! thank you so much for this, I do hope you know by now how much it means to me !!! much love <3 luce
Date: 07/08/08 01:00 am Title: be really good
Okay, there needs to be more Bill-on-top fics like this. Submissive Tom? Yes, please! Loved this!
Author's Response: I know xD top!Bill rocks (Tomi's panties) lol, thanksies
Date: 07/07/08 11:50 pm Title: be really good
I just love love love love when you write smut with Tom as the bottom XD If I could send you a box of chocolate chip cookies I would. And if I had a dealer, I'd send you crack too ;)
Author's Response: aw, thank you so mcuh honey, and bottom!tomi really does rock doen't he ,) he's so hot xD love
Date: 07/07/08 11:34 pm Title: be really good
omfg!!!XD
I absolutely LOVE Bottom!Tomi!!!
And a school girl uniform... stay still my beating heart!
Wonderful one-shot!
^_^[Sagey]
Author's Response: bottom tomi rocks the world, I love to have him keening under his brother's touch ,p lol, thank you so much for this ,) means a lot
Date: 07/07/08 11:01 pm Title: be really good
OMFG!!!!! LUCE! I can't believe you actually put Tom in a catholic school girl outfit! I thought you were refering to Georg or something! I wasn't serious! Wow, AND Bill dominated! You've lost your marbles! And I'm keeping them b/c this was fabulous! Love you so much!
Author's Response: hihi, I love cross dressing Tom, he can be such a girl sometimes ,p you may keep my marbles, I'm not sure I need them for writing fics anyway, everything I write seem slightly crazy xD thanksies Queen, how are you these days by the way ???
Date: 07/07/08 06:24 pm Title: be really good
Lucy, this made me giggle like mad, I swear! Just when I think nothing is going to surprise me anymore, you send something like this. O__O Submissive Tomi is so hot! I have to agree with Andi, I wanna know Tom's kink, now!
Author's Response: lol, hey girl ,) see, I've reached quite far with responding to this fic xD I love subTom, but his little kink will have to wait for another time ,p I'm sedning you virtual pornographic pictures of Hagen right now, just because I love you so much for doing my beta and taking time to reaview and being the most perfect fic reader ever, that and the most perfect friend <3
Date: 07/07/08 02:20 pm Title: be really good
O.O...ô.o...^_^
Absolutely one of the sexiest pieces I've read. Very nice!
Author's Response: hihi, thank you so, so much, that really means a lot to me !!! ove ya for it
Date: 07/07/08 01:57 pm Title: be really good
OMG OMG...OH MY FUCKING GOD! You Lucy, you and your one-shots just fuckin AMAZE me! How you come up with them, i don't know. How you write them, so fantastically...No clue either!
I loved the whole concept of this...with the little insight into both, well mostly Tom's, mind, it made it that much more intense.
But you know what you need to do?...
Write a sequel, i think defs, becuase first of all this was so hot that i want more, and second of all i wanna know what Tom's little "kink" is and for Bill to get a little "payback" ;D
Loved this way too much for my own good =P
Hugsnkisses
Andi
Date: 07/07/08 12:41 pm Title: be really good
hubba hubba! chugga chugga chugga chugga wooo wooooooooooooooo!!!!! this is soo hawt. tom in a .. a... catholic school-girl uniform ... *shuders* that's a mental picture i never want to part with. WOW. and you painted it so well with your words. yes BILL bottoming for a change. i love that. ITS HAWT.
Date: 07/07/08 11:51 am Title: be really good
*drools* wow....