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Reviewer: likewhoa10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 06:48 pm Title: Viva La Vida, Because You Only Live Once

Haha loves this one!!!!
My sister did something a lot like this awhile back, sneaking out and going to a frat party... lol and I hope they don't get drunk... that would be a site... lol

Continue soon!!!

Emily

Author's Response: ouuuu your sister snuck out to go to a frat party? :O
well i personally haven't, but i'm sure it would be fun xD
and you'll see what happens with them in the next chapter ;) im not promising any soberness though :P

Reviewer: Twins of Riot Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 10:15 am Title: Black

MORE PLEASE!! and GUSTAV!!!!! how dare he!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL HOW DARE HE! hmmm remember, things aren't always as they seem with Gustav ;)

Reviewer: sakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 09:14 am Title: Black

good no great and duh its is jessie lol she has her hair blonde now am i right tell me im right

pleeease

i love this

i love it

ly
xx

Author's Response: LOL mmm you could be right! xD
i don't wanna give too much away! But you'll find out soon enough!
thank you sooooo much!!!

Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 06:40 am Title: When Nothing Else Mattered

I meant Georg's BUTT... haha... yeah ¬_¬

and I totally get the age thing now. Thanks for explaining ;D smartie!

moaaaaaaaar ^_^

Author's Response: lol oh gosh i didn't even notice the typo :P

oh and no problem about the age thing ;) you actually made me realize i had made a few mistakes so thank YOU :)

Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 06:39 am Title: Black

LOL! cracked up at Georg's but ;] that guy's on FIRE baby! xD

Gustav wouldn't cheat ;__; he's... he's a GOOD guy!

SAY IT AIN'T SO WOMAN! *shakes*

more! D: :D

Author's Response: LMAO He's on fire baby! talk about smokin' :)
hmm ok... IT AIN'T SO! LOL well, you're gonna have to wait to find out if he cheated or not :) don't worry, Tessa cant help but confront him about it!

Reviewer: billismiiiine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 06:10 am Title: Black

omg I hope he's not cheating on her! I hope the next chapter comes soon : )

Author's Response: actually, the next chapter IS comming very soon :)
happiness all around! woot!

Reviewer: soldmycat4heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 02:24 am Title: Black

whaaa?! cheating??!
noooooooooooooo =o.
the story was so innocent!
or semi-innocent hah.

the georg/tessa part was so cute=]

Author's Response: hehe yeah, i'll go with the semi-innocent part :P
don't worry though, the whole thing will be cleared up, because of course, Tessa just can't help but confront him about it!!
Lol thank you! but leave it up to Tessa to get cold feet at the last second eh...

Reviewer: StixSpaztic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 01:00 am Title: Black

AHH! If Gustav is cheating on Jessie I'll whack him in the head with that turkey! But seriously, this was an amazing chapter and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: AHAHAHAH that's right, get in the turkey throwing spirit!
ohh you remind me of Jessie :)
no worries, the whole thing will be cleared up soon ;)

Reviewer: likewhoa10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 11:25 pm Title: Black

Ohh my goshies, I loves it!!!
And *sniffs* I smell a love triangle!! Haha lol... x] But it's awesome and I just... really really love it whenever you post a new chapter!! They make me happy.. lol...

And bleh.. school's starting soon... I DON'T want to start highschool.. haha.

But, PLEASE continue whenever you get the chance!!!

XOX, Emily

Author's Response: awwww that made me happy! xD I'm glad you love the story!
and yes... maybe a little bit of a love triangle... you'll have to wait and see :)

ohhh no worries about high school ;) its a lot less brutal than it seems!

Reviewer: Chrissy19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 09:40 pm Title: Black

None of them realized what was going on with him until Jessie noticed the flames dancing on the hem of his t-shirt, moving onto his jeans and burning a hole through them.

She pulled her candle away instantly and held it in the other hand, pretending it wasn’t her who had caught his ass on fire.

That fuckin' made me crack up!
Oh my god!
-giggle snort-
Update soon!!

Author's Response: AHAHA im glad you liked it! xD

Reviewer: JanelleJO Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 09:11 pm Title: Black

i love this freaking story you need to continue, when they nearly got caught you had me on the edge of my chair holy shit and i would like to hear more from Bill he is normally egotist so plz let him talk more

Author's Response: lol yeah i've been meaning to let bill talk more :)

Reviewer: 0xleannxbillx0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 08:39 pm Title: Black

Your story is more tha good! It's amazing! Have I mentioned that it is amazing?! :)

Author's Response: lol yeah, i think you mentioned it was amazing xD
Thank you!! <3

Reviewer: HighSchoolHellCat Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 07:59 pm Title: When Nothing Else Mattered

this is good i've been checking for an update everyday and when i saw this i almost freaked out--or well i did

Author's Response: well there ya go, it's all nice and updated for ya :)

Reviewer: JessyRAWR Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 07:16 pm Title: Black

Aw, Gustav is cheating on Jessie.
Poor Bill, he still gets no love.

Author's Response: lol still no love for bil yet... soon though, soon ;)
and no worries about Gustav and Jessie! The whole thing will be explained!

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 06:37 pm Title: Black

gah, i just finished reading the last chapter, and almost squeaked when i saw ANOTHER update. yayyy :D
ooooh, naughty Gustav! didn't see that one coming....

Author's Response: HAH Gustav isn't always what he seems...
lol thanks for the review! xD

Reviewer: scenequeen12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 06:24 pm Title: Black

WHAT?
YOU MADE ME A HOMEWRECKER?
As much as I luff Gusti Bear, I can't do that to Melanie.
But wait?
Isn't she sorta blonde now with the new hair?
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
(And I should REALLY update mine -.-)

Author's Response: LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
oh Olivia, you're so NOT a homewrecker! You're smart actually! :)
you hit the nail right on the head there with Jessie being blonde too!
rnBut... it could be your sister too ya know :P all three of you are blonde now! and besides, Tessa's eyes were out of wack :P she'd just woke up!
You'll have to wait and see in one of the up comming chapters ;) (Don't worry, it's soon!)
and um... YES! IM HAVING BONDING WITH LARYNGITIS WITHDRAWL SYMPTOMS GOSH. I miss Bill's broken english and Georg's idiotness :( UPDATE!

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 06:14 pm Title: My Dear Cousins

nope, wasn't bad at all :D
humm, favourite characters.. i rather like Jessie (she shares my name to some extent), and Tessa, seeing as their fiesty enough to deal with all four of the dudes. and my favourite pairing would have to be Jessie and Gusti; they're just too cute.
I wouldn't mind seeing Bill get with someone, actually, that would be interesting :D or Georg falling for someone other than Tessa, just to throw a bit of a spanner in the works :D

Author's Response: awww thank you! xD
lol yes i agree, the girls are very fiesty :) Just what the dudes need.

So, about the pairings, I agree with you, i think Jessie and Gustav are so uber cute :D i dont plan on messing with them. As for Bill, i've been thinking about him falling for someone, since a few people have asked! And the Georg part, you totally read my mind on that xD so many people have been telling me they love the Tessa/Tom pairing, but they love Georg/Tessa too... so i'm thinking that maybe i'll make something happen between Tess and Georg to make Tess want to go back to Tom for a while :)
Thank you soo much for the review!! :D it's greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: scenequeen12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 08:34 pm Title: My Dear Cousins

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
ICAN'TBELIEVEYOU.
ZOMGZ.
I hate Melanie; she took Gusti.XD
ROFL, NICE CHAPTER!

Author's Response: LMAO I HAD TO PUT YOU IN HERE LOVE!!
you make the story more interesting :)
awww don't hate Mel, theres enough of him to him to go around xD
thank you soooo much <3 I LOVE YOU!

Reviewer: Chrissy19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 11:41 am Title: My Dear Cousins

Weeeee!
Nice update...

'I have to do an essay...on bugs' man that almost sounds like me...lol
Great job!

Author's Response: HAHAH thanks xD

Reviewer: CALI81894 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 11:42 pm Title: My Dear Cousins

i still hope tessa will be with tom :]]
my favorite characters are tessa&&jessie :]]

Author's Response: lol welllll i've been thinking about it, so there's a possibility they may get together :)
no big promises tho!
thanks so much for your opinion! :D its greatly appreciated!!!!

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