Date: 07/25/08 06:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Awww n___n
LOL! "and Georg, well Georg looked like Georg."
and another lol @ "1) asleep, 2) thinking, or 3) dead."
rofl n__n
This fic is good xD
EAT SOMETHING BILL! D:
more!
Author's Response: lolz thanks I can never keep my stories seriouse Oo really I do it with every fanfic I wrote.....Thanks for reading the story and reviewing^^
Date: 07/24/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
it was very well written. this isn't the end is it?
Author's Response: thank you^^ and no one of the main thiongs that really f's up a story is when the author speeds the story up this may be like 15-20 chapters if my brain wants to corperate^^
Date: 07/24/08 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Okay, so after beta-ing this chapter, I decided to read the rest, I must have missed this story somehow. I really like it so far, it's very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it. I hope Tom and the others can help Bill, and make him realise that he isn't fat. Anorexia is an awful disease. I have a friend who suffered from it, and although she recovered from it, it's still a constant struggle for her.
Oh, one thing I noticed that I missed... “Or last night,” He finished. The 'he' should not have a capital there, sorry. Also, I noticed that the flashback isn't in italics on here, that might help, as it's a little confusing as to where it finishes...
Author's Response: Really it's ok i think you did an awsome job^^ yeah I'm mainly writting this fic for one of my freinds, he had a really hard strugle with it, i want to make this story long though because I might hate myself if I go to fast...Thanks for reading the story and again for betaing =^-^=
Date: 07/24/08 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE it!
More, pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee
*puppy eyes*
Author's Response: lolz writting right now^^
Date: 07/24/08 05:38 pm Title: Prolouge
i didnt find one about bill having an eating disorder. i found a few about tom having one, but thats it. but well done. i look forward to reading more :D
Author's Response: same here! lolz thanks for reading the storey and reviewing^^
Date: 07/24/08 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love your style. i hope you continue soon!
Author's Response: Thank you^^ and thanks for reading and commenting =^-^=
Date: 07/19/08 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
*-* why won't you write the next chap?!
Author's Response: I swear to god I'm writting it now!!
Date: 07/16/08 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, nice clliffhanger! I've only found one other story where any of them has an eating disorder. I was kinda surpirsed because of the rumour awhile ago that Bill was anorexic, so i expecting abunch. Oh well. Im glad you're writing this one. Its really good so far. :D
Author's Response: lolz! Thank you for the comment and reading the story I hope I can get the next chapeter up soon! rock on!
Date: 07/10/08 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Scheisse!!!
Bill hast problems ^^
Author's Response: lolz. thank your for the comment and reading the story. Rock on ~Michelle
Date: 07/09/08 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha, love the way you ended this chapter. Anyway, I love how you keep the action flowing but somehow make it calm and soothing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: XD thank you for the comment and reading the story. Rock on Michelle
Date: 07/08/08 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really liking this fic so far! I especially like the end of the chapter...a little dose of humor to go with the angst!
Author's Response: Lolz. Thanbk you for reading the story and for the comment, rock on ~Michelle
Date: 07/08/08 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
dammit, is it okay for me to blame
the cornflakes in this situation?
ahhh i wish Bill would just eat though
and not listen to Tom :|
still good chapter either way :)
Author's Response: lolz. Thank you for the comment and for reading the story! rock on Michelle
Author's Response: lolz. Thank you for the comment and for reading the story! rock on Michelle
Date: 07/08/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww poor Bill. Why is Tom being such a dick.
Nicely written. :-) X
Author's Response: lolz. Thank you for reading the story and for the comment!rnRock on Michelle
Date: 07/08/08 12:43 pm Title: Prolouge
I actually did a fic where Bill and Tom both had one, but i went about it differently to this :)
I like it (:
Author's Response: Cool. Again I didn't look hard enough, i tried but i just didn't look hard enough so i decided that i will write my own and if people like ti enough they will comment and hopefully tell me other fanfics like this or that they wrote. so thank yuou for the comment and reading the story! I plan on reading yours now! Rock on ~Michelle
Date: 07/08/08 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I had a friend that did the same thing that Bill is doing, she was in the hospital for two months I just hope Bill realizes that Tom was joking and stops starving himself, I really like this story.~_~
Author's Response: Well than i'll have no were for the story to go. But I will not tell if bill does get better (But since i'm a happy ending person you can probably already tell lolz.) thank you for the comment and reading the story! i'm glad your freind is all better! rock on ~Michelle
Date: 07/07/08 10:49 pm Title: Prolouge
You deserve a cookie for a very good first chapter! ^^ ... or should that be a nice rice cake to keep in the spirit of the fic? :B
Author's Response: Lolz. I have this fear of posting because im afraid my stories won't be good enough so yeah your comment and for reading the story means alot! Rock on ~Michelle
Author's Response: Lolz. I have this fear of posting because im afraid my stories won't be good enough so yeah your comment and for reading the story means alot! Rock on ~Michelle
Date: 07/06/08 08:10 pm Title: Prolouge
this is amazing so far. I love how you point out that it could only be one comment to make someone feel like that. Great job and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment and reading the story!rnRock onrnMichelle
Date: 07/06/08 07:05 pm Title: Prolouge
Thre is another eating disorder story on this site somewhere, but uh..yeah lol.
Nice idea, your writing is coming out well it's very good. You might not want to space it out so much though.
It's great to see someone else like me on this site.
Author's Response: Lolz and yeah thank you for the comment and reading the story!rnRock onrnMichelle
Date: 07/06/08 06:19 pm Title: Prolouge
I used to have a problem with anorexia, and what you're describing is dead-on. This seems like it'll be a really cool fic and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Awww! Glade your all better now! Thank you for the comment and reading the story!rnRock onrnMichelle
Date: 07/06/08 05:09 pm Title: Prolouge
Dammit Tom.
:D
And there are actually a lot of eating disorder ones.
Author's Response: lolz. Yet again probably didn't look hard enough!XD thanks for the comment and reading the story!rnRock onrnMichelle