Date: 06/21/20 09:04 am Title: Chapter 6
this really good story!!
please up date it!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/12/14 05:36 am Title: Chapter 6
ahh, i know it's been forever, but I still live in hope that you'll update this one day! :) I miss it so much. and it truly has so much potentional! aah! :) ^^
Date: 09/05/13 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
PLease post the next chapter! I love your story!
Date: 03/12/13 02:54 am Title: Chapter 6
Finish this story! Oh please!
Date: 09/04/12 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bitte!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
Date: 01/05/12 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is still one of my favorite-stories, ever! How is the last chapter going? :)
Date: 06/17/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww its so perfect that i almost dont wish for Bill to turn back, but I am sure either way i will love the ending!! Thanks for sharing I hope someday you will find the time to finish >
Date: 04/10/11 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg!!!! hotess chapter ever! mein gott! loved it soooo much!!talk about sexuall! please hurry up with the next chapter!!!:)
Date: 03/23/11 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
Why... why... why did I start reading a work in progress?! :'(
This is amazing, original, and was last updated in '09. Is there an ending? I want to know how things turn out!
Date: 09/19/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bring it on! When will it be ready?
Date: 08/16/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really hope you're gonna update this at some point ^___^ I love this story.
Date: 04/20/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
A little TOO much "porn" but I love the way bill and Tom love eachother.
Date: 04/13/10 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
OH YEAH!! :O :D
Date: 04/13/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hott.Steamy.Twincetst.Love. Is the HOTTEST!
Date: 04/13/10 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
hehe wow. :O :D
Date: 03/22/10 09:19 am Title: Chapter 6
aww i really want more i love this story so much it's like omg to good
Date: 02/10/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
WWWWHHHHAAAATTT???!!! I noticed you haven't updated in forever, so I'm gonna go ahead and assume this story has been abandoned but I'm soooo sad they never actually made love, or did I miss something? D:
I really enjoyed this chapter. It was really sweet, especially with Tom realizing he is in love with Bill and then both of them saying that they love the other. Really tender :D
Date: 02/10/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was definitely HOT and I loved it. I was a little disappointed that there was not breast/nipple action, but I'm hoping that will come in the next or future chapters? Yes? Please!
Date: 02/10/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy shit! I LOVE THIS!!! God, I can't wait to read more... There just aren't enough twincest het stories on THF! Thank you so much for writing this!
Date: 02/02/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
When is the next chapter coming? Been waiting for so long! When's the big finish?!