Date: 09/29/08 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap, are you ever gonna update this?!
Date: 07/07/08 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
omg
this is heartbreaking
and...now im worried what did bill want?
aah...my heart bleeds for Tomi..
Date: 07/06/08 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes I shall stay tuned 'cause I wanna read more.~_~
Date: 07/06/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fuckina. I hate to admit i had sort of the same basic idea. To start a fic, after Tom and Bill had "broken up". T^T.
So, prolly because of that, i am VERY interested to see where you take this, prolly because its so different from the normal "get together, break up, get back together" thing.
And of course, i really hope they DO actually get back together....otherwise you will prolly make a lot of people sad. T.T
Author's Response: lol, I'm going to guess that the general concept has been visited hundreds of times before on this site alone. I just hope the direction that I'm headed in is interesting enough to keep people from hating it.
Date: 07/06/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really good! Very well written. I'm quite interested. Please continue.
Date: 07/06/08 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
intrigued and very much hooked
Date: 07/06/08 08:08 am Title: Chapter 1
oh, next chapter please!!!!!
Date: 07/06/08 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I will definitely stay tuned. Liked this like a lot lot too much. Poor Tomi is lovesick and Bill is making him jealous. Bill is stupid, how could anyone be better that Tom. I agree with him, I hate Bryan with a passion.
Date: 07/06/08 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I rather liked this! Give us the next chapter soon = )
Date: 07/06/08 03:52 am Title: Chapter 1
this is amazing!
oh young love!
Author's Response: wait, how young did you think they were? I always forget to establish their ages -_-