Date: 07/08/08 08:50 am Title: Moving to Level Two
Name: Lupe
What did I do: I have been cutting myself for ages, because I had the feeling nobody understood me.
Who: Georg.
Oh, for the record, I don't do these things for real. ^^ Pretty please?
Author's Response: i'll have the winner in the next chapter. :D thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 07/08/08 06:45 am Title: Moving to Level Two
I just read the 1st 2 chapters and I'm really impressed, the idea is really original and its written out really well! I can't wait to read the rest!
Oh and well it would be cool to be in the story so heres the form!
Name: Marielle
Reason I'm in st. raphael's: Tried to off myself by swallowing razor blades and injesting plant poison (now that would have been 1 horrible death)
Georg/Gustav: Georg :)
Author's Response: holy fuck. that's creative. i'll have the winner in the next chapter. :D thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 07/08/08 06:12 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
I like this and the idea of it and where it is going. However, it feels too much like it is being narrated, which makes it harder, as a reader, to fall into the story, which is your aim. Also there were quite a few spelling errors and places where you have missed out/used the wrong word, so things didn't quite make sense. A beta can fix this. I'll read on now.
Author's Response: i figured there would be. but when i try to get a beta, they never reply. :P thanks for letting me know. :]
Date: 07/08/08 03:31 am Title: Moving to Level Two
Sweet this story's pretty interesting.
Taylor, or Taz
Tried to drown myself in a bathtub
Gustav
Author's Response: thank you. :] winner will be in the next chapter. :D
Date: 07/08/08 03:26 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
I love your story :)
My names Lovella
I got in a really big argument with my friends, they never spoke to me again, they told people all the secrets i had told them no matter how bad they were, not being able to take the humiliation anymore i ran myself a bath, took 25 vicodin and a shot of vodka for every pill got in the bath and drowned my self my brother found me dead but doctor brought me back to life.
I like Gustav better, i don't know why be he reminds of a teddy bear that I wanna cuddle with all night long *blushes*
Author's Response: aww, thanks. :D i'll have the winner in the next chapter so stay tuned! hehehe. thanks for reviewing. :DDD
Date: 07/08/08 02:31 am Title: Moving to Level Two
Amazing! I really love how this story is, it makes me think of Girl, Interupted....... I'd love to possibly be thought of for the OC. My name is Kaitlyn, my reason is that my parent's divorce hurt me so much that I took a whole bottle of Ibprophen with almost a full case of Smirnoff Green Apple. My mom found me almost dead in my room and she sped to the hospital. They pumped my stomach and I was alright. I screamed at her for finding me and that it was all her fault. The doctors told her it was in my best interest to go to Saint Raphael's and I went even though I wanted nothing more then to just die and for my parent's to go back to loving each other. I like Gustav better out of those two.
Author's Response: Kaitlyn, thank you very much. (: i'll have the winner in the next chapter. thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 07/08/08 02:07 am Title: Moving to Level Two
Emma
Fell hard for my best friend but was to confused and scared to admit that I was in love with a girl so I took a couple narcotics called her cell phone to tell her I loved her but got the voice mail left a short message "Randa (her names Miranda) the only thing on my fucking mind is you" hung up and slashed my wrists.... sry if that was to descriptive, I got into a little fit of creativity
Gustav for sure, he's just so dang cute
Author's Response: thank you Emma. that's very, creative. :D i'll read over the rest and the winner will be in the next chapter you for reviewing. :D
Date: 07/06/08 12:28 pm Title: Seeing A Stranger
I love it. Impulse is a great book and a wonderful inspiration, huh? A dream like it would just be fun. I can't wait for more and please more MNIF soon. :]
Author's Response: yeah. i can't read it before bed anymore because i get the dreams from it. lmao. i'll haev more on both as soon as i can. (; thanks for reviewing. (;
Date: 07/05/08 07:33 pm Title: Seeing A Stranger
awww hehe it was so cool Hun really_
I cant wait to read more... XD
Author's Response: thank you. :] i'll have more as soon as possible. :]
Date: 07/05/08 04:20 pm Title: Seeing A Stranger
good orignal story!
please continue
Author's Response: thank you very much! :D i definitely will. (:
Date: 07/05/08 03:20 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
Like where this is going =D
Author's Response: i'm happy you do. (: i'll have more as soon as i can. (:
Date: 07/05/08 03:14 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
Go on!
Author's Response: i totally will! (: thanks for reviewing. (:
Date: 07/05/08 02:47 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
I really liked this. Very much.
I'll be looking out there for more.
Funny thing when I read at some point it says that Bill had a bandage on his left elbow, right? Yeah, so, don't ask why I read eyebrow. Then I thought "his eyebrow piercing got ripped out, ouch" because I always think about that since I got mine pierced. Then I touched my own piercing and noticed it was on the right side and I was like, relieved. Then I went "wait, it says elbow, not eyebrow!"
Yeah, sorry... that was funnier when it happened. Fact that it is almost 3am makes me believe anything is funny.
Oh and I didn't see any mistakes and I'm a freak about that, so I don't think there's any ;)
Author's Response: hey! you wrote ten weeks of summer! hehehe. anywho, thank you. the first part of that i read was 'wait, it says elbow, not eyebrow!' i was like, did i fuck up that badly?! then i read the rest of the review and i was like, 'good i'm not a total stupid ass.' oh 3am does make stuff funnier; no lie! oh, thank you so much! i would have died if there was a mistake. i read it four times before posting it! i'll have more soon. thank you for reading. :DDD
Date: 07/05/08 02:29 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
god i love reading stories like
this...sorta like how i used to
think about my life too :|
but i really am enjoying this so far
and cannot wait to read more! =]
Author's Response: i'm happy you like it. and i'll totally continue. (;
Date: 07/05/08 01:44 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
that is a really nice story. and that My Name is Fate is a good one too.
Author's Response: aww, thanks times two! hehehe.
Date: 07/05/08 01:31 am Title: Seeing A Stranger
oooo, me like. please update!!!!
Author's Response: aww, thanks. (; i will. (;