Date: 04/23/12 12:17 am Title: Chapter 01/01
A. Oh my GODDESS, that was so fucking adorable at the end that I think my eyes may have popped out of my head as I was reading it XD It was adorable and sweet and a very good lime, and... it was just kinda awesome. Lols, poor David XD Anyway, well done ^-^ B. At the end, there was a TINY, little mistake. You used the wrong form of the word that sounds like 2. The sentence is "'I love you to,' he replied, blew..." and it should be "'I love you, too,' he replied, blew...." Apart from that there were no mistakes =) Anyway, well done ^-^
Date: 06/12/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
Hot!! ;)
Poor David though.
Date: 06/09/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
aw this is adorablw!
Date: 01/06/09 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
"You've had blow jobs, right?" - *cracks up*
Yes," he said carefully, not sure where Bill was going with this conversation. – how can he not know where Bill is going he’s with Gustav?
"Okay," he said after trying to tie up his mental objections, "first of all, no teeth ..." - *grins* Tom’s so sweet! Giving his brother blow job techniques. *shakes head* that must feel so wrong.
one magazine headline had read "Is It Love or Drugs?" - *giggles*
"Want your wicked way with me?" Gustav asked with a very mischievous smile.
"Always, Juschtel," Bill said while doing his best innocent look, "always." - *grins* yes *nods* yes and O.O he got full sentences out of Gustav before the kit was done? O.O wow Gustav IS in love!
"How ... how," he had difficulty speaking when Gustav sucked on a particularly sensitive spot just below his ear, "would you ... like ... ummm ... to take ... this ... ohh ... another ... step." - *giggles* Gustav is good at this.
"Oh god, I want to," he admitted, feeling the butterflies in his stomach doing loop the loops. - *grins* Mine too!
"Oh hell, I did not need to see that," the sound of David's voice and a very hurried exit - *cracks up* oh poor David!
I love this storyline I hope I get to see more of it in the future.
Date: 11/30/08 01:26 am Title: Chapter 01/01
This was incredibly hot, but also incredibly sweet. Really. It was totally great. I loved it.
Date: 07/04/08 05:47 am Title: Chapter 01/01
Ahhhhhhh xxx
Date: 07/03/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
Aww...nice! That was sweet & hot. Probably the longest blowjob scene I've read here, and such good detail!
Date: 07/03/08 10:43 am Title: Chapter 01/01
THAT WAS SOOO HAWT!!!!
The ending was very sweet as well.
FANTASTIC JOB!!