Date: 07/04/08 04:39 am Title: Breaking Point
oh girl.
i m so sad now. Pure Tomi.
Bad boy Bill.
Honey i dont know of course what you have in your mind about this story, but i really like to see Bill in knees before TOm , to beg him to fix their relationship again.
Very good story,i love your inspiration :)
Date: 07/04/08 02:13 am Title: Breaking Point
Oh, now I really don't like Bill.
And don't make me wait for another chapter. It's not cool. *wipes tear*
Loved it.
More.
Date: 07/04/08 12:28 am Title: Breaking Point
Yeah i love this!! It's really nice!! One mistake is the spelling of 'ok'- it should be in the long form when in formal writing, which i guess this is, so 'okay', but meh, not too much of a big deal.
I can't wait for the next chapter! :]
Date: 07/04/08 12:03 am Title: Breaking Point
UPDATE SOON, OMG!
Bill, how could you! I don't think he actually found someone. I bet he was just saying that because it made breaking up with Tom easier.
Haha, Tom. You deserve this.
OMG, is this like the movie Forgetting Sara or something? He goes to Mauritius and then sees Bill there with some other guy??? That would be so funny and sad at the same time. Poor Tomi.
Date: 07/03/08 07:35 pm Title: Breaking Point
Ugh this is awesome. Please, tell me they'll be together in the end? I think i might cry. T^T.
Tom doesnt need material things to remind him of Bill, all he needs to do is look in the mirror, really. That end made me think of that.
this is amazing. But why didnt Bill give him a real reason? Are you saving a big fight for later? xD.
Ooh, i really wanna know who Bill 'found'. I'm hoping its Georg. Biorg holds a little place in my heart. ^^ (very small compared to Twincest, but still... xD)
I dunno about Andreas. He seems really coarse in this, like he doesnt care. What role does he play...Hmmm :) i cant wait to read more. ^^
Date: 07/03/08 07:23 pm Title: Breaking Point
Good chapter! Yeah, a lot happens, but it doesn't seem overwhelming.
This was painful: What hurt the most though, was not knowing where all these familiar things were now. Had the photo of Bill’s parents found its place in another guy’s home already?
I felt that one. Nicely done.
Date: 07/03/08 07:16 pm Title: Breaking Point
Aww, poor Tom. So sad. I can't believe Bill cheated on him! Even if Tom was a neglectful lover, that's where communication comes in--hello! Maybe I just need to read more to find out where their relationship went wrong...and I assume you'll get more into that eventually. Man, even though the title of this story just screams bad things to come, I'll still hope for a happy--if not just bittersweet--ending.
Date: 07/03/08 05:30 pm Title: Breaking Point
o.O didn't expect that.
and i think i know the film it's based on; Forgetting Sarah Marshall?
i've not seen it either, just seen trailers... lol
Author's Response: It might be, somebody's mentioned that movie in another review, I have no idea what it's called, but it's probably that one then ^^ this fic will be quite a lot different though, since I haven't seen the movie xD
Date: 07/03/08 04:59 pm Title: Breaking Point
Great chapter :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'll try ^^
Date: 07/03/08 04:50 pm Title: Breaking Point
Oh, and in the summary is the 'his' meant to be 'is'?
Author's Response: *gasp* OMFG :O (thanks for pointing it out)
Date: 07/03/08 04:49 pm Title: Breaking Point
Oh man, even though you said there would be no angst, I still got all teary-eyed and a little weepy. Still it was really well written and I enjoyed it!!! More please :D
Author's Response: You did? *squeals excitedly* I'm totally crap at writing sad, touchy, emotional stuff, I'm happy you got into it though :D I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/03/08 04:49 pm Title: Breaking Point
I know what this is! I know what this is! I think. Well, the movie plot you used. Forgetting Sarah Marshal! I hope. Where he does on holiday and Bill's there with another guy? But in the movie, Tom's character fell in love with someone else.
I hope I'm right, it's a rather mint movie.
I'm not worried about reading this anymore now.
It's rather good like, already.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah it might be that movie! Sounds like it, but in this fic Tom's not falling in love with somebody else ^^ I'm glad you're not worried anymore now haha
Date: 07/03/08 04:09 pm Title: Breaking Point
haha, it's me again! :' ))
like this story too ^^ I don't see where it's going though,
but I guess that can be a nice thing too :p
please update soon ^^
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you can't see where it's going yet, otherwise it would spoil the next few chapters xD I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/03/08 04:09 pm Title: Breaking Point
Ziemniakers is sad :(. Ziemniakers doesn't like breaking up. But the story is great. Mauritius is full of kinky people. They will rape Tom :(.
Author's Response: Hahaha, let's see what awaits Tom in Mauritius, and don't be sad! :O
Date: 07/03/08 04:02 pm Title: Breaking Point
Haha man I love this!
Author's Response: Glad you do xD
Date: 07/03/08 03:50 pm Title: Breaking Point
ow...
Why did they break up?
*pout*
like, everything is gonna be all right, yeah?
god... so sad :(
xxx
Author's Response: *shrugs* we'll see :)
Date: 07/03/08 03:19 pm Title: Prologue
Liking it so far. can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: I'm glad you do :)
Date: 07/03/08 02:40 pm Title: Prologue
Wow, this is so different and intense. I can't wait to see how this unfolds. I can tell its going to be fantastic though, well obviously becuase I love ALL your stories. =)
I'm so glad you're back too! I missed all your amazing fics... i had like none to read while you were gone, especially because firelucy was gone as well :P
But you are definitely on a roll sapere, you've updated like 5 stories in two days and i was sooo excited when i saw them all. =D
Can't wait for the next chapter and updates from all your other fics.
Danke,
Andi
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :D It's nice to see I was missed and I'm glad you enjoy my stories so much! ^^
Date: 07/03/08 11:51 am Title: Prologue
I'm scared about this. If it was anyone else, I wouldn't dream of reading something that sounds potentially...upsetting.
I don't doubt it wont be fucking amazing, but I just can't deal with angst.
I'll still read it no matter what.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I can't wirte angst xD It's not going to be that angsty nor dramatic actually. The movie I got the idea from is actually a comedy as far as I know! But I don't know how to write humour either, so it's simply gonna be a rather general story, romantic maybe, not too angsty though, don't worry ;) It's nice to see you would have read it anyway! Thank you :D
Date: 07/03/08 11:44 am Title: Prologue
oooo looks good!!
Author's Response: :D