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Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/14 07:13 am Title: Epilogue

Amazing!

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/13 05:11 pm Title: Epilogue

Interesting story.

Reviewer: Darxy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/10 10:47 am Title: Epilogue

flawless. perfect. i have no words at all...keep writing!

Reviewer: Jeanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 12:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Holly Shit! I cry every time whan I read this.. It's... amanzing.. Can I translate it on Polish? Please, I must show this our Twincest's fans, but no much peaople knows good English

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/09 12:05 am Title: Epilogue

i also don't have any words.

except, I love you.

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 09:43 am Title: Epilogue

Good matter-of-fact take on a difficult subject. Not many stories out there where the twins get caught.

Thanks:)

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Maria

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/09 02:40 pm Title: Epilogue

Hmmm. Still thinking the last chapter through. I love the tone of the story, and your execution is close to perfection. Love this!!!!!

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 06:08 pm Title: Epilogue

"She has a fucking party planned for us getting out of incest jail? That's fucking great." Well, when you put it that way...

Separating the twins forever is impossible, they will always love each other and trying to be together.

I am SO glad that this is fiction. I can't imagine this happening in real life. Well, I can imagine the twins being together, but not the jail-part. Thank god for that.

Nice work.
Very well-written.

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 06:04 pm Title: Year Three - End

Tom was there, and he was one of them.
Dammit, stupid ass. However, I can understand that he had to become one of them to survive himself.

Yes!! They're free!! :D :D

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 06:00 pm Title: Year Three

How could Tom not even recognize his baby brother, the man he loved, the reason he was here in the first place?
Good question.
I already thought something like this would happen :)

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 05:55 pm Title: First Month

I'm glad Bill is happy with Andreas' visit :)
Oh god, now Tom's going to rape the newbies? :O

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 05:50 pm Title: First Week

That's sweet of Gustav to go visit Bill :)
Both twins are trying to be strong, but they chose the wrong moments, they shouldn't try to be tough with their friends and family, they should be when they're with the inmates.
This is so sad :(

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 05:46 pm Title: First Day

Tom bald? :O I think it's already hard to get used to his black braids!
Prison must be hell!

Reviewer: MisbB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/09 01:40 pm Title: Year Three

you are a good writer

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/09 10:12 pm Title: Prologue

I like it!!! really really really like it! good story!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/09 01:36 am Title: Epilogue

i think....it was good :D would have been interesting to read their talk and stuff, but its still good :) great job

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/09 12:22 pm Title: Epilogue

WOW! This was amazing! I really loved this story, cuz if it ever happend(God, please don't let it happen) this would tell us how it would be! Fantastic!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/22/09 09:09 am Title: Epilogue

OHMYGAWD!!I dunno why letting bathrobes fall is such a sexual image for me, but it's like, here I am with all my flaws but I want you to look at me like this right now. GUH!

I'm sorry this didn't get many more reviews, but ever since the first chapter, I thought this fic was such a fantastic story. Heartbreaking, yes, very much so. It hurt to watch them shave Tom's dreads off, it hurt to see Bill give in to be his roommates bitch, it hurt to see Tom get pissed on while also becoming the prison bitch and even more so when he decided he WOULDN'T be THAT anymore. That's when I cried, because I knew right then that Tom was killing a very important part of himself, something that was him and Bill together. It hurt to see Bill become so hard and jaded as to let himself be fucked by his roommate and WANT it. It hurt to see Tom change in his day to day life, not letting himself think about Bill because he refused to let his brother see him for who he was now. It hurt how through it all, Bill couldn't handle thinking about Tom without thinking what he had become and how it was perhaps best if they didn't see each other again. It hurt to see Georg visit him to tell him about Tom and see the look of pain cross Bill's face only to disappear right after as if he couldn't care less. It hurt how through it all, Tom still cared deeply for his brother enough to not let the monster inside him take him away from Bill, even if his brother hated what he had become by pure survival instinct.

It really hurt what they'd been reduced to, but when it all came down in the end, everything could only lead to THIS and it's who they are now. You can't erase your past, you can't forget where you came from, you can't really forget the love of your life when he calls to you. You can't ignore that fire that once burned so brightly and they tried to extinguish, how hard they tried to break you but failed.

This is who they are now and they will never forget, no matter what hell they had to go through to get here.

You know this is the kind if stuff I love to read and a thousand times Thank You for writing it. <333

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/09 05:56 pm Title: Year Three - End

aww that was messed up :( but they're finally free ^_^

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/09 07:11 am Title: Year Three - End

OMG! This was amazing! They're together again;D

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