Date: 05/01/23 02:09 am Title: o n e
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 12/14/12 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 42
You must promise that you will continue NM once you finish with VI
Date: 01/20/12 11:34 pm Title: t w e n t y - t h r e e
Yay!
Date: 01/20/12 11:13 pm Title: t w e n t y
Your stories are amazing please don't be sad xxx
Date: 06/21/09 01:33 pm Title: n i n e
i like this store so much! :)
Date: 11/16/08 10:42 pm Title: t w e n t y - f i v e
I'm so confused, there is very little trans in this chapter so at first I couldn't tell who worked at the strip club and I'm still not exactly sure why she's seeing Amber or why Amber was at a strip club??? or why she's going back to her old house?
Author's Response: yea I'm sorry. I hate this fix. I'm glad it's over. My writing is so terrible in it.
Date: 11/16/08 10:33 pm Title: t w e n t y - f o u r
It's like a sequal within the story. Kind of cool!
Date: 11/16/08 12:44 pm Title: t w e n t y - t w o
what? where did this come from? it's so left field. mmm I'm not sure I like it.
Date: 11/16/08 12:18 pm Title: n i n e t e e n
hhhmmmm??? where is this going?
Date: 11/16/08 11:52 am Title: f o u r t e e n
yummyness - not a real word but a real feeling!
Date: 11/16/08 02:15 am Title: t h i r t e e n
I really like where this is going! It's getting better and better!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews Hunni. :)
Date: 11/16/08 02:08 am Title: t w e l v e
Finally I feel like it's headed in the right direction! *deep sigh*
Date: 11/16/08 01:59 am Title: e l e v e n
It makes sence now that the "dreams" aren't a part of the story line but there's something missing...the character's intensions bill's, tom's, her's aren't clear which continues my confusion.
Date: 11/16/08 01:41 am Title: e i g h t
Oi! With all the "dreams" and whatever's they are I can't follow the "real" plotline the one that she know's is happening to her for sure? So the mean-tom, the sweet-sublt sexy tom get all mixed up. I know she's supposed to be confused but because there is no clear line between the dreams and the reality I can't be anything but confused too and I'm not supposed to be confused I'm supposed to know the "truth" Oi!
Date: 11/16/08 01:24 am Title: s e v e n
Ok well I like this story. But...the action is sometimes difficult to follow in that you change scenes or focus on diffrent aspects and I haven't, cause I'm not sure about other readers, caught up to your change in scene or the direction your story has taken. Sometimes there aren't enough details for me to follow.
Oh and little side note sometimes you throw my or me in there when you are talking about the main charcter which isn't always right, I'm assuming a mistake but you know what assuming does... :/
Date: 11/16/08 01:09 am Title: s i x
it's good! I'm a happy reader!
Date: 11/16/08 12:24 am Title: t w o
I wouldn't mind one of the twins sucking anything they want on me. Uuuhhhh!
Author's Response: Mmm me neither. *dirty thoughts* haha. Lol. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/11/08 07:42 am Title: f o r t y - o n e
Finally i got back to finish reading
Awesome, truley awesome
i loved it, every second of reading it
job well done sweetheart, a brilliant, gripping story
Date: 11/10/08 03:18 am Title: f o r t y - o n e
ok so that ending did not suck it just left it open for a sequal. i would say make a movie out of it! i know i would buy it specialy if Bill and Tom played them selves
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much. ^^ I'd buy snything where Tom and Bill were blood sucking Sexies. :P
Date: 10/24/08 01:03 am Title: f o r t y - o n e
Okay so the sun was burried alive?
I had to come back and reread it, like I told you I would.
If that is true, then you've got plenty reason to start a sequel. There is so much that you could go off of for the sequel. Like.. Bill. You could talk about what happened to him and what Tom did to him and why he isn't there. Tom. You could talk about how he continues his reproducing with Tarra and they don't work and someother ideas I'll tell you another time. Tarra. She could like turn evil cuz of what Bill did and go all psycho vampire or something. There is plenty here for you to make a sequel from.
But I understand that you hate this story and don't want anything to do with it.
So yeah. I'll talk to ya later!
Love you!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review hunni. I love you.