Date: 08/03/08 07:00 am Title: t h r e e
O . o I really like this. Full of drama and blood ^^
Date: 08/03/08 06:50 am Title: t w o
Ö Exiting. Hoping for more dirty stuffs x) My mouth is wet. You write well.
Date: 08/02/08 08:02 pm Title: o n e
this is one hell of a story! i love it :) the plot and characters are awesome, please keep it coming!
Date: 08/01/08 10:28 pm Title: t h i r t y - o n e
Awww I am like dying for this next chapter!
The storyline= amazing
Character development= flawless
GAHH! I crave this story
Date: 08/01/08 04:06 am Title: t h i r t y - o n e
a few quotes:
“What you did to this poor girl is unforgivable. You can’t just go around converting young women because they look like your dead girlfriend!”
bill is so right but it's harsh to say it in that way.
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“No, Tom, no. That is not funny. You don’t joke about these things!” Bill seemed irritated.
he's not lying.
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Thick drops began to form in the corners of his eyes. Bill sat wide-eyed and shocked.
aww.
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“Shh … it’s okay. Everything’s going to be okay,” He didn’t understand. Why was she being so nice to him. He’d been the one man who had ruined her life forever. After all that had happened. After all that he’d done. All that he knew, his body was sure to push him to do in the future. She still acted like she cared.
she does care about you tom.
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now i want to now so bad who killed her mother.
love the chap ^^
Date: 07/31/08 08:36 pm Title: t h i r t y - o n e
Loved it I thought it was really good. Can't wait till the next one.
Date: 07/31/08 06:46 pm Title: o n e
Your welcome.
Eek, well I hope that nothing goes wrong or repeats :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, hunn. That's sweet of you.rnI hope I can have a better time than I did before, too. :) *hugs*rn
Date: 07/31/08 06:13 pm Title: t h i r t y - o n e
Lovely!!
Date: 07/31/08 05:40 pm Title: t h i r t y - o n e
Bravo! *applause*
That was really good. I can't wait to see what happenes next. I hope that you have fun on your trip :D
Author's Response: Thank you hunn. :)rnI hope I do too. The last time I went I was just begging to go home the moment I got there.
Date: 07/31/08 04:37 am Title: t h i r t y
it's more then oke.
i think it's one of the best chaps.
you can feel all there emotions in it.
but this chap is in their past right?
at least i thought it was
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Author's Response: Yes. This is a vision/flashback type thing.
Date: 07/31/08 03:03 am Title: t h i r t y
Ooooohhhhh very intense!
Author's Response: ;D thnx
Date: 07/31/08 01:01 am Title: t h i r t y
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: As soon as I can. ^^
Date: 07/30/08 08:39 am Title: t w e n t y - n i n e
Bills alive! yes!
sorry i havent read for a while, been having a rough time so havent been around too much
those chapters are awesome as ever, im still loving ths story and it still has me gripped
i love it, enjoy the states and ill read as soon as i can after the summer
Author's Response: Yes, he's alive. :) I would never have him in any other state.rnThat's ok sweetie, take your time. I hope things work out for the better. rn:D *hugs*
Date: 07/29/08 04:15 pm Title: t w e n t y - n i n e
aww your chapter end note made me happy ^-^
but now i feel sorry because for once i'll leave a short review.
oke bill is visiting amber.(oke i'm jealous i wish he visited me XD)
and woesh you have a great cliffhanger on the end.it really kills me,i want to now so bad whats gonna happen in the next chap.
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Author's Response: Thank you hunn. It's not about the length of the review, I'm just happy when people make them. They could write "good" -- as simple as that, and I would be happy. :) Thanks again. *hugs*
Date: 07/29/08 02:29 pm Title: t w e n t y - n i n e
OOOHHHH!!! love it.. gotta know more. more i tell ya!!!
Date: 07/28/08 06:20 pm Title: t w e n t y - e i g h t
oke first,don't give up writing,why? well because your good at it and people DO read it.
and i wil be sad if you end this story
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oke and now quotes^^:
“So what if I did! He’s my brother. It’s no business of yours what I do to him, woman!” Tarra glared intently,
if i was tarra i would be so pissed right now because i hate it when people just call you woman,and maybe tarra hates that too so i would slap him.
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slamming his head
oke tarra certainly hates that too,go tarra,and yeah you may slap him now XD
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“Everything is just falling into place. Why ruin the surprise now by just coming out and telling you? No-no-no, that’s not how it’s gunna work.”
DON'T BE AN ASS AND JUST TELL HER. (oops sorry i was a little bit to dragged into the story XD)
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It’s unique.
It’s cool.
It’s sexy!
it's Tom ^^
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A loud booming voice behind caused her to jump in surprise. “M’lady? I’m sorry to disturb you, but there is problem your father asks that you see to at once.” A tall broad man,
-growls- -getting mean look- OKE WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HER AND WHY DO YOU HAVE TO RUIN IT,LEAVE THEM ALONE -looks nicer- or i wil have to kill ya
^-^ got that? good XD
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oke quotes done,and yeah there are a bit strange and evil now XD
stil hope you like them.
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Date: 07/28/08 04:29 pm Title: t w e n t y - e i g h t
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Date: 07/26/08 06:37 am Title: t w e n t y - s e v e n
why don't you like writing anymore?
don't you like writing this story or don't you like writing at all.
well i love your writing and i certainly love this story.
and now a few quotes:
He smiled. The blankets pooled around him; His chest, bare and unclothed for me to gawk at yet again. Resist it Tarra. Resist it! Now’s not the time for this.
come on tarra later there is time for that XD now you first need to know the answers.
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“My dear Alayne,
and again he has her name wrong.is it so hard to say her name right tom?
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“My brother? Well …what makes you think I had something to do with his mysterious disappearance?” Tom said slyly.
well that wouldn't be the first time hè
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“I haven’t seen him for weeks. You did something. I know you did!”
maybe he did,but maybe he didn't
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oke and even if you don't enjoy writing it i stil hope you post the next chap.
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Author's Response: Well .. I guess I still like to write. But I end up working so hard on something and I post it and no one reads it or reviews at all. It just slips off the main page and into obscurity. Kind of brings one down, ya kno'. rnrn:) Thanks sweetie. I'm glad you like it. *hugs*
Date: 07/26/08 01:58 am Title: t w e n t y - s e v e n
Oooohhhh!! I love this new rewrite! It is awesome! Love it love it love it!! Love you too!
Author's Response: And your sure your not just saying that Am to make me feel better about it. Lol.rnrnI can't wait til this is done.