Date: 07/08/08 03:46 am Title: t w e l v e
quotes^^:
"You?!" The man spoke up. "YOU!” He pointed a gnarled finger towards Tom.
"Me… ME!" Tom mocked
that is actualy kinda funny XD
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Hands from out of the darkness grabbed her and pulled Tarra back; Out of Tom’s hold, away from this scene. Surprisingly, Tom had allowed this.
"Forgive me. My body was not my own! I did not realize what I was doing!" His whisper pleaded in her ear.
yeay i'm glad bill didn't do that on purpose. good bill want a cookie? oh wait no you don't want a cookie you want blood do you? well your not getting mine blood :P (oke sorry my thoughts strayed a little bit XP)
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“Oh, have you already had your fill? The young maiden feels you have. Your first feed in… how long has it been now? I must say, you do me proud William. More so if you‘d find your own. SHE is Mine!”
woesh tom is a bit possessive.
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"Watching!" He answered. She was horrified! Not feeling entirely safe with Bill now,
yeah i don't know if you can trust bill,but i'll know you can trust him more as tom.
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so my review is done ^^ so i'm ready for the next chap ^-^
Author's Response: Now this is a review that makes me happy to read. Because then it shows me that people are actually reading it instead of just skimming through. Thanks sweet'art. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 07/08/08 03:35 am Title: t w e l v e
I really hope you continue this story because I love it! It has an amazing plot and its really well written. And I hope you start to feel better soon. Just remember that everything gets better eventually even when it seems like it won't. :)
Author's Response: Danke schön hunn. rnThanks, I hope I feel better too. rnBut I guarantee it won't be soon.
Date: 07/07/08 11:57 pm Title: t w e l v e
ooh please dont abandon this fic it is so awesome and u are such an amazing writer x)
Author's Response: danke
Date: 07/07/08 10:03 pm Title: t w e l v e
(: LOVE it
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 07/07/08 09:58 am Title: e l e v e n
wah! update soon please! and please don't cry!
Date: 07/07/08 05:16 am Title: e l e v e n
its started, poor girl
oooh i love this, i had to check back first thing to see if you had updated....and you had!
im so into this story i want to read it all lol
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!!rn*hugs*
Date: 07/07/08 04:17 am Title: e l e v e n
i'm am so sorry i didn't revieuw on the previous chap,but i didn't have time yesterday,so i'll hope you forgive me :P
and despite i allready have read alot of chaps i stil don't know who tarra can trust bill or tom XP
and i don't like the idea of tarra going to nicholas s'dtrawsser (wow you could seriously break young tongue over that name XD)
and yeah i'm ready for the next chap ^^
Author's Response: Lol ya that is a name that would take a few tries to get right. =prn
Date: 07/07/08 03:47 am Title: e l e v e n
I very much loved it. Still addicted as ever.
I still hope that you feel better. I just found out my mom has been diagnosed with cervical cancer- so I've been bawling my eyes out too. It just seems like life keeps getting worse.
blah. *squeeze* You made my day by posting this. It took my mind off of that for once. :D
thank you.
Author's Response: OMG sweetie I am so sorry. *big hugs* rnI'm glad I could help take your mind of things, if even for a little while.
Date: 07/06/08 09:20 am Title: t e n
You have inspiration somewhere darling, this may have been short but its great. im still addicted to this story and i dont think that will ever change.
keep it up and try to keep your chin up. your doing a wonderful job on this truely :)
Author's Response: thank you. I'll try. rn*hugs*
Date: 07/06/08 04:09 am Title: t e n
I am so sorry i havn't read this fic before now, becuae i seriously LOVE it, its hard to belive that it has so few reviews, its amazing.
the ONLY thing that bugs me is that sometimes you get the perspective mixed up as in "he landed on me' while the rest of the story is done in third person ie "he landed on her" just thought i'd point that out, you said you wnated to know what you could imporve on, and that is all that i could find.
but please update soon XD
Author's Response: thanks hunni. Ya the perspective used to be in First person. So I may miss some me's, and I's and stuff. rnThanks :-)
Date: 07/06/08 01:00 am Title: n i n e
dude its awesome update quick!!!! xD
Date: 07/06/08 12:41 am Title: t e n
Aww, it was really good. Great even. I still hope that everything gets better soon. My life has been a scheiße hole too- recently. We should make a club!
*huggles*
Date: 07/05/08 06:02 am Title: n i n e
im reading!
and i love it. this is gettng better and better. i know once its finished im going to go back and reread the whole thing again :)
keep it up this is addictive!
Author's Response: thanks so much hunni. *hugs* I needed that.
Date: 07/05/08 04:02 am Title: n i n e
"Lighten up a little. There are worse things than a hot co-worker."
YEAH a vampire hot co-worker who's name is Tom XD
and there is sarah again,well she is stil blegh X'D
and maybe there are not many people who read your story but i do and the others who read it ^-^
and i'll keep reading your story,it's very addictive you know.
so i'm ready for the next chap^^
Author's Response: Thanks hunni. Reading this made me feel a little better.
Date: 07/04/08 09:42 pm Title: n i n e
Aww, don't be so down. I always enjoy and love reading it. I'm reassuring you that people are too lazy to review :(
Yesh, it was very written. I can't wait to read more :D
Date: 07/04/08 03:24 pm Title: e i g h t
woohoo go Tarra! *is very jealous about now*
awesome as usual, i love this i really do :)
Date: 07/04/08 04:25 am Title: e i g h t
and then she woke up and everything did happen.
do you have any idea how much i love this story, well now you do ^-^
can't wait until chapter n i n e
Author's Response: and then the whole world explodes. The end. LOLrnthank you so much. I am happy you like it so much. rnMakes me smile to know its being read and not just disapearing off the main page unnoticed and unread as most of my fics usually are.
Date: 07/03/08 09:03 pm Title: e i g h t
aww, we love you too :D
What else can I say that I haven't already? lol I'm all out of words, but it really was just awesome
Update when you can, please.
Author's Response: *blushes* Yhank you!!
Date: 07/03/08 07:08 pm Title: e i g h t
LOVE it
Author's Response: danke. :)