Date: 10/23/08 11:08 pm Title: f o r t y - o n e
WAIT!!! what happend to Bill?? and why is Tom laughing? and why did Bill and Tom like become worst enimies???? :O
Author's Response: Bill's alive, just not at the funeral. If I had just killed someones child I wouldn't show to the funeral. I'd be panicking. Tom and Bill have the brotherly hare thing going for them. They love eachother but they wont figure that out until its too late I'm sure.
Date: 10/22/08 05:57 pm Title: f o r t y - o n e
I can't believe it's over -cries-
BRAVO! *claps hand*
I'm going to miss this story. It's like a part of me that died with it.
The last chapter wasn't bad at all.
I loved it and it summed it up somewhat beautiful and gracefully.
Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much sweetie. :)
Date: 10/22/08 04:01 pm Title: f o r t y - o n e
That was sooo good! I love it. You gotta write more.. This can't be the end. I have questions tho..
Author's Response: Thanks. ^^ Ya, I figured you would.
Date: 10/22/08 02:48 pm Title: f o r t y - o n e
wow,i so didn't expect this ending.but think it fits the story perfectly.
and now my last quotes:
"Come on, Nii. Do just like I showed you okay?"
Nii that sounds so cute ^-^
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"Niita, Just grab one."
aww i like his name ^^
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"Up to this point, Niita hadn't done anything to cause earthly destruction, just average occasional child's misbehaviour; perhaps that was precisely why Tom was so upset.
i do bet that is the reason.
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"No! William, please!" Amber tugged frighteningly on a torn sleeve.
i think i know what he's gonna do
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"Don't wait up for me tonight. If I'm not there by morning, chances are I won't be at all."
ofcourse you're coming back,you're gonna kill that stupid shit what's calling himself father.
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"I want what he eats. I want to eat like Daddy."
you're kidding right?
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"I want what he eats. I want to eat like Daddy."
i think he doesn't give a shit
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"What about us. We're human too! If only half. I was human until you thought the need to create hell-on-earth! I know you don't give a shit about me, but …" Tarra pointed to the little boy waddling back and forth on the carpet. "…that! That's your flesh and god-damn fucking blood!" Tarra snapped her head back harshly,
yeah tell him tarra.
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"Why rid myself of you when you'll do me more good alive than dead?"
ugh you're so disgusting
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Tarra's eyes widened. Tom ran his tongue over pearly teeth. "He was so pure. That's rare. I'd say that was the only thing he was ever good for actually."
The disturbing mental image of a screaming infant invaded her mind; spread and about to be shred bloody, encouraged her stomachs' contents up her throat.
"You consumed your own child?!"
just what i said you're disgusting
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"Don't you worry Tarra. I've a feeling this one won't disappoint."
but you certainly do
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Tom brought the presented finger up to his lips. “Shh. He’s sleeping,” he breathed,
like you care
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A small body blocked the blow; just as had been their arrangement the night before. He wasn’t scared. He felt no pain. He didn’t cry out. The stake ripped through the lithe body like it was paper; he wouldn’t have had time to meet the agony.
WHAT, no
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The room went black.
The only scream that was made – had been from Tarra.
so sad
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But that wasn’t all.
She heard …
she heard …
… Laughing?
we all know who that is
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THE END
oke this scares me XP
acualy i can't believe it's the end,well i don't want it to end.
but hey it's a good end and i love the story.
thank you for writing it ^-^
< 3
Author's Response: Seeing this review made me squeal with happiness. ^^ Thank you soo much for review ALL throughout this fic. You are one of the few who kept me going with your mahvelous compliments. Thank you!! *hugs* Finally it's the end. I hope I didn't dissapoint with it.
Date: 10/14/08 07:45 pm Title: f o r t y
Ooooh. YAY for Amber
Author's Response: Yay Amber. :D
Date: 10/14/08 02:11 pm Title: f o r t y
oke i'm a bit confused,i don't really get it,what's happening between amber and bill? could you explain please?
and i aklso don't get the 270 day count-down part.
so it woulkd be nice if you wanna explain things to me ^^
yeah i know normally i give you a quote-review or something,but i can't give it if i don't understand it XD
ooh yeah the last thing is this the end or not? because i thought chap 40 was the end.
p.s. i'm sorry for not understanding the chap.
Author's Response: Bill and Amber have sort of had a thing for eachother for a while, just my main focus was Tarra and Tom. My friend asked I write about what happens with Am and Bill, so thats why this isn't the ending chapter. The next chapter will end it. :)rnrnHopefully the next one won't confuse you much.
Date: 10/14/08 01:26 pm Title: f o r t y
Oh my gosh! I thought it wasn't close to being finished! It is really good. I love it. But i got a question. Whats the 270 day countdown for?
Author's Response: 9 months.
Date: 10/08/08 05:28 pm Title: t h i r t y - n i n e
I was not expecting this to be out so soon.. Its very good! Love it. Cant wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks hunn. :) Hopefully I'll get the last chapter done oon.
Date: 10/08/08 05:28 pm Title: t h i r t y - n i n e
I was not expecting this to be out so soon.. Its very good! Love it. Cant wait for the next one!
Date: 10/08/08 02:58 pm Title: t h i r t y - n i n e
okay first,i'm so glad it not yet the ending ^-^
and second, i really don't care if the chap is short,it's still a chap,and i still like it.
and now a few quotes:
Tom eyed the baby, still covered in a thin film of slime,and squirming in Tarra’s lap.
cute (no not the slime XP,i meant the baby XD)
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"Would you like to hold your son?"
A BOOOOOOOY ^^
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it makes me happy that i know you like my reviews ^-^
p.s. is the next chap going to be the last?
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you sweetie. :) And yes, the next chapter will more than likely be the last. Unless I suddenly get a tidal wave of ideas for the story over night - But I highly doubt that. :P
Date: 10/08/08 04:38 am Title: t h i r t y - e i g h t
"I changed my mind. I hate people who kill for pleasure."
Bill let out a whole-hearted laugh at his older brothers’ statement. "Quite ironic, eh Tomas?"
this was very funny XD
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omg the end comes at chap 39 or 40 wow that's... uh... well... SOON -shock- :l
hmm yeah well i still want the next chap ^^
Author's Response: I'm not having as much fun as I used to when I first started writing this. That's why I'm so eager to end it. ^^ Thanks to you for your great reviews. :)
Date: 10/07/08 06:46 pm Title: t h i r t y - e i g h t
Aww, YAY! Bill to the rescue
Author's Response: Yay. :)
Date: 10/07/08 05:21 pm Title: t h i r t y - e i g h t
Ahh! I gotta no more! Get those fingers going girl. That chapter was sooooo intense!!
Author's Response: Let's hope that 'intense' is a good thing. ^^ Thanks baby. I wrote more in second period to finish this chapter off for you. I'll start 39 tommorow if I can. I seem to write best in that class because I'm sure as hell not working so I write and then my mind is on nothing else. No Bill and Tom to distract me.
Date: 10/07/08 03:00 pm Title: t h i r t y - e i g h t
oh god!! its sooo great:D are u going to write more??
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much. I'll wrote more as soon as I get the ideas. I'll be ending this either in chapter 39 or 40. I'm excited. ^^ thanks for your review btw.
Date: 10/05/08 07:43 pm Title: t h i r t y - s e v e n
I told you i would read it again when i am more awake and i have. its much better when im not almost dead tired and falling asleep at the monitor.
Author's Response: Mkay. Thanks hunn.
Date: 10/04/08 05:16 am Title: t h i r t y - s e v e n
quotes XD:
Bill did his best to force out his dirty thoughts,
XD -grin- XD
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You didn't , by any chance .. Uh ...
First degree, baby. I heard every word.
mehee XD you've got caught XD
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"What’s with the Mr. Nice Guy all of a sudden?" asked Tarra.
XD
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Both unsuspecting to the shadowed figures creeping closer.
:o i think they are the persons from the first part in the chap
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oke i'm done quote'ing
:O the ending comes soon -shock-
why?,
don't you like writing this story anymore?
Author's Response: Thank you for your mahvelous review. :) ^^ I always love reading them. You actually make me feel like your truely enjoying this.
Date: 10/04/08 04:14 am Title: t h i r t y - s e v e n
Tom's feelings for Tarra, very confusing what he thinks of her:P but keep on writing it's great!!!^^,
Author's Response: Yea, his feelings are all over the place aren't they. :P ^^ Thanx hunni.
Date: 10/03/08 08:28 pm Title: t h i r t y - s e v e n
YAY!!! Finally! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: I'll see if I can muster another 'straight-from-an-ass' chappie. Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/03/08 04:33 pm Title: t h i r t y - s e v e n
Your writing has gotten bad at all.
You know my response to it ^__^ and I doubt that you want to keep hearing how much I loved it, but I fall in love with this story every single time after reading it - all over again.
I can't believe it's going to be ending soon *cries* I'm going to miss it a lot
Author's Response: Thank you, Babe. That's so sweet. ^^ Makes me happy to hear that. :)
Date: 10/01/08 07:11 pm Title: t w e n t y - s e v e n
major SUSPENCE!!! it driving me crazy
Author's Response: :P lol. Yup, yup. ^^ I'll write the next chapter as soon as I can come up with it. :)