Date: 07/15/08 04:28 am Title: n i n e t e e n
awwww me thinks Billy boy is in luuurve lol
this is getting more and more gripping the more you write, its awesomness on a stick!
please update soooooooon
luff uuuu
Date: 07/15/08 04:23 am Title: e i g h t e e n
wooooo i love not being able to work out whats going to happen, makes it so much more interesting, and in this i have no idea, you threw me with the great grandfather thing and i have no idea now
but keep it up, i need to know whats going on!
i love it!!!!!!
Date: 07/15/08 12:47 am Title: n i n e t e e n
Love it Hope you update it soon.
Date: 07/14/08 11:44 pm Title: n i n e t e e n
AAA!now i cannot wait for the next update!!!!
Date: 07/14/08 10:30 pm Title: n i n e t e e n
:) more please, this is very creative and interesting :D
Date: 07/13/08 07:03 am Title: e i g h t e e n
quotes:
"I don't understand. Why kill me? I’ve nothing to do with the horrid actions of my ancestors! I play no part in this!"
tarra,tarra,tarra,if he wanted to kill you he allready did.
think about that.
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Oh, you've been a Bloody Fool Tarra! "…unlike your friends ...death will not be your end"
see he's not going to kill you.
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Tarra wrapped her arms gracefully around his neck. Their eyes connected, as they had done before. Using all the strength she could muster, Tarra pushed him back onto the table with her body. The need for blood far surpassed her attraction towards Tomas, but it hardly disguised it. She swooped down, her mouth suffocating his.
Resisting at first, Tom finally surrendered his lips and mouth to the woman atop him. Losing herself but for a moment, she dug her teeth into his luscious bottom lip. He did not scream, for Tarra still held his mouth hostage while she feasted. Tom found a better way to release his agony, biting her back – Hard!
Tarra didn't pull away. Instead, her fingernails sunk into the flesh of his shoulder. Footsteps were heard coming their way. Not now! She hadn't finished; she needed more! Tarra had hoped to regain all strength and weaken his, giving her the upper hand she would need to flee. With frustration, she bit harder, creating a tare in his lip. Tarra released her kiss and backed away.
A young woman stood in the doorway now, considering the scene she had just interrupted.
oke that woman totaly screwed up there moment.
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"Yes, Duryea? What is it?" Tom spoke with an angered tone. It would seem Tarra wasn't the only one who didn't welcome this disturbance.
yeay XD
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Who, who is here? Thomas, tell me, what have you done?
I do not believe that you are in any position to be giving orders Tarra, and certainly Not to Me!
Tell me! Tarra’s thoughts held firm. We battled within our minds, challenging each other with our eyes.
and who wins?
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The woman seemed pleased with his words. This angered Tarra further. Tom turned back, and grabbing her by the arm, he proceeded in dragging her off. Stopping before a horrifically familiar door –Oh no! Not in there, not again!– He opened it and shoved Tarra inside.
-smacks tom- no bad tomas.
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Following as Tarra staggered backwards, he smiled and pushed her up against the wall. He pressed his lips to hers once more, giving her no time to react. There was no biting, just a short but deep kiss before leaving Tarra panting and gasping against the wall.
-shock- he kissed her,without biting
-shock- wow.
I KNEW IT HE TOTALY WANTS TARRA.
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Amber looked in the direction that he had indicated and wondered.
AMBER Oo omg he has amber.
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Was he going to do to her what he had done to Tarra? Turn her into a monster as well?!
no i don't think he's gonna change you into a vampire.so don't worrie about that.
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woesh my review is done.
and i have to feeling that it is a long review. let's hope so ^^
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, sweetie!! Your reviews make me happy. *big hugs*
Date: 07/12/08 09:38 pm Title: e i g h t e e n
i really like this :) it's confusing but in a good way. :D keep it up!
Date: 07/12/08 05:42 am Title: s e v e n t e e n
quotes:
"Time to wake up, Tarra!"
ooh it was a dream.
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"Welcome to Hell! How are you enjoying your stay, my Dear?" Tom voice cackled loudly in Tarra's ear.
well it look likes she not.
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"Forced? Who said anything about using force? Please, woman, ... you're not that special. I needent exert myself."
are you sure of that tomas?
because i thought you loved her.
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"Not sudden, not at all sudden. Think back aways my Dear. Remember the night Bill feasted off the blood that you so graciously provided? The night you entered the home of a one Nicolas S'dtrawsser, my recently deceased enemy..." How could she have forgotten? Tarra nodded. "…You felt no familiarity at all towards him?"
ooh,yeah that's right,i almost forgot that.
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Her Father's face!
Tarra's heart felt as if it'd beat it's way through her ribs! This cant be! That would mean that Nicolas was-
Oo uhuh
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review done ^^
Author's Response: omg sweetie I love you for these reviews!
Date: 07/12/08 05:00 am Title: s e v e n t e e n
omg! now this i never expected!
in the whole time ive been reading i didnt ever expecct this!
wow what a twist, well done sweety, you got me there
awesome, excellent, brilliant :)
10/10
Date: 07/11/08 10:17 pm Title: s e v e n t e e n
wow, this story is so detailed, keep up the good work!
Date: 07/11/08 09:41 pm Title: s e v e n t e e n
I read this when it was originally Bite Me, I'm so happy you have started updating again :)
Author's Response: Well I'm glad to hear that. I was depressed because no one seemed to be showing much interest in it before. But I thought I would give it another try.
Date: 07/11/08 09:37 pm Title: s e v e n t e e n
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Date: 07/11/08 09:32 pm Title: s e v e n t e e n
OMG! Update soon please (:
Date: 07/11/08 10:25 am Title: s i x t e e n
ahhhh!
i luuurve this story!!
Haha! last night i read the whole thing, took a while but i luuuv it!
=]
Author's Response: aww thanks sweetie.
Date: 07/11/08 06:30 am Title: s i x t e e n
Ahhhhhh Tom is controling Bill?
bad Tomi!
awesome chapter as usual, love it love it love it!
Date: 07/11/08 06:21 am Title: f i f t e e n
poor Amber, i think id be a bit scared at first too. but now she has to believe her, serves her right in a way
brilliant as usual :)
Date: 07/11/08 04:32 am Title: s i x t e e n
so here is the review fore chap sixteen.
quotes:
"You don't have to keep doing this you know?" Bill's head turned up to meet Tom's gaze. He shrugged looking away. Back down at his palm, which was now outstretched in front of him. Bill attempted to ignore his brothers' words.
he's not you tom.
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"What else do you expect me to do? I'm not you! I will not go out and kill innocent people. Taking lives for my own satisfaction ..."
yeah and that's why i love bill ^^
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"...you...you took those extra vials...for me?" Tom nodded, licking the blood from the corner of his mouth. But why?, thought Bill, glancing down at his hands. The scars had gone, his hands held no evidence of being torn.
oke tom can be nice ^^
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"I didn't do it for you!!" Tom snapped,
oke now your screwed up Oo
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"I promised Mother I would take care of you. When I saw that you had taken her route and decided to sacrifice your own blood for sustenance, I knew I had to do something. I had to!"
i'll stil tink you have to do it for bill to and not only because you promised your mother.
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"Well, well ..., I see you two are in the middle of a ...'moment'. Guess I should have knocked!" Tom pushed himself from his brother, switching instantly to night vision, to see an all too familiar face staring back at him.
TARRA ^-^
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"Uhm ...going out for ...a...a. smoke." What!? "You don’t smoke!!" Tarra stopped at the door, they slid open, responding to the weight on the floor beneath them as she stood.
"I do now!"
liar XP
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"Hey..." Tarra reached for the smoke, inhaling what she could, then throwing it down at her feet. She had never smoked a day in her life,
then why are you doing it now,because of tom that's lame.
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She snapped out of her daze as Sarah pushed. Her upper arm covered in blood, from where it trickled down to her fingers.
"Tomas ..." she cooed, "Can I treat you to a drink?" Sarah had always been this way
oke sarah makes me wanna throw up now.
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Sarah seemed to grow more pale with every ounce that left her body. Maybe Tarra was just seeing things; she continued to stare, watching Tom as he feasted off of Sarah's bloodied limb. It became too much to watch. She had to look away. Not because she was disgusted – No, not at all! That sensation disappeared upon entry to this new lifestyle. Tarra only looked away to smother the urge to devour her. As Tarra turned she was brought face-to-face with ...
tom your disgusting Oo
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how can you drink sarah XD
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Bill ..?? What are you doing?
She was thrust up against the wall behind her. What was he doing? Tarra didn’t understand. Bill had always been so nice before. As he repeatedly slammed her body against the brick, Tarra struggled to free herself from his grasp.
Looking over, she could see Tom in plain view. His gaze was locked on Bill. His eyes...black.
The mass of people that had surrounded him, were now crammed against a wall on the opposite side of the alley. They all held the same expression – Fear!
The pain in Tarra’s head increased suddenly and her vision became blurred by the vibrant stream pouring down her face. With what seemed like the last bit of energy she possessed, Tarra looked back at her attacker. Peering through bloodied peepers she looked deep into his eyes once more. Tarra lost all willingness to fight.
The last thing she could remember was a familiar voice in her head. A voice … speaking to her.
"I'm sorry"
then why are you doing this you moron
-shock-
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oke this review is now also done.
so yeah i want chap seventeen ^^
Date: 07/11/08 04:18 am Title: f i f t e e n
1)i'm glad you like my reviews
2)i like it when the author response to my chaps,and you do that so ty ^^
3)i'll see that you allrerady have chap fiveteen & sixteen,so your getting 2 reviews.
4)here are the quotes:
"Why are you— WHAT the … What'd you do to yourself? You're covered in blood!" Tarra hoped she wouldn't have noticed … but really, how could she not? It covered her complete left side.
"Amber, calm down. I'm fine, really." Tarra tried to reassure her friend, but it was clearly not working. With reluctant fingers, Amber peeled back the bloodied t-shirt from Tarra’s shoulder.
"Hmm … no blood? Well if this isn't your blood, then whose is it?"
Tarra was unsure how to answer her. Should she tell the truth? If she even tried to expose the brothers for what they were, she would only be bringing herself down as well. Tarra decided instead to ignore the question, for now, ignoring Amber as she walked past. But she turned abruptly after hearing Amber scream.
The deep scratches to her back had bled through. Large moist streaks showed all down Tarra’s back. Amber began to panic.
"Amber, calm down. I said that I am fine."
"You most certainly are not! You're covered in blood! You’re horribly disfigured…c-cuts down your back. That's NOT fine!”
i think this proves what a good friend amber is,she cares alot of tarra
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"Tarra seriously, I'm your best friend. Why do you feel have to make up such things? If you are in trouble, you have done something; you can be honest with me. The whole Vampire shit was amusing in the beginning, but now you're just starting to piss me off."
amber,amber a minute age i thought you where a good friend but now. well oke acualy tarra sounds a little crazy,but she tells the truth. oke i can't blame you your stil a good friend but you have to believe her.
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"Oh, that’s great, Tarra. They’re really something. Where'd you buy those? The local gag sho—" She leaned in for a better look. Amber gasped and scrambled to her feet only to topple over the end table behind her. She backed away hastily. They … they cant be. It’s not possible.
"Oh my— Oh, my, God! You… your seriously a… a—"
uhuh yeah that's what i'm talking about. XD
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"What do you think of my Hot co-worker now? He's the reason I'm like this! How do you like him now?!"
oke i so like this line ^^
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"Kialbay. That’s what Bill called it ...Uhm...'Black Night' in easier terms. It halts my cravings. As long as I keep drinking this ... everything will be alright." Of course, Tarra didn't entirely believe this herself. But what other option did she have?
as long as she doesn't lose amber with it it's fine by me XD
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"H-how many of those do you have?" Amber wiped the slow stream of tears from her cheeks.
Tarra swirled the dark liquid around in the vial.
"Five.."
are you sure that's enough tarra?
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oke so i'm done with this review ^^
and now i'm gonna read chap sixteen and go review on that ^-^
Author's Response: Seeing these long ass reviews from you put a smile on my face (and I was in a bad mood this morning). Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. *bigs hugs*
Date: 07/10/08 11:17 pm Title: s i x t e e n
Loved it I hope you update it soon. I'm dying to know what happens next:)
Date: 07/10/08 10:44 pm Title: o n e
Best birthday present ever!
Woot! I loved it. Yesh, we love you!!!