Date: 07/20/08 09:27 pm Title: t h r e e
I LOVE IT
omg i would of felt that if tom touched me lol
Author's Response: I sure as hell hope I would. Being touched by Tom and I don't even feel the sensation of those skilled sexx-a-licious fingers on me -- would kill me!!
Date: 07/20/08 09:15 pm Title: t w o
cliffy.....grrrr...how dare u tarra lol j/k j/k
i luvz it
Author's Response: Lal (lachen aus laut) Thank you. I am famous for those. Lol. My writing isn't enough that it draws people to want to read more, so I generally have to put those in. :( Hopefully I will get better.
Date: 07/20/08 08:56 pm Title: o n e
OMG I LUVZ IT IT'S LIKE IM THERE LIKE IM TARRA LOL
Author's Response: :) hee hee. Aww. Thanks.
Date: 07/20/08 04:48 pm Title: t w e n t y - t h r e e
happy birthday for yesterday, sorry i meant to say it yesterday but i was tied up all day
hope you had a good day
luv n hugs
xxx
Date: 07/20/08 01:40 pm Title: e i g h t
Look... I am very confused. Does she realise what`s really happening. At some places it seems like a dream and at other places she knows it happened... what`s really going on.. I really can`t understand,... someone inlighten me please. And why was that Tom picked her,it was never mentioned in the story,why does he treat her differently from his other vctoms.. he apparently does NOT love her and it doesn`t seem that he cares about her...
Please someone help me out.. I really don`t know the answer of these questions... and one more thang *giggles* while I am reading about Tom I visualise the face of Brad Pitt (in that horror vampire movie with Tom Cruise and Antonio Banderas I can`t remember the name of :? ) and I bet Tom looks WAAAY hotter like a vampire than Brad does in that movie ... enough hot to make Brad be jealous for Angelina though (haha LOL)
anyway... I`d love to have my questions answered ...
ur story simply rocks (though I don`t understand uite a lot of things there... :? )
hugzz from earth! xD
Author's Response: Ya, it's a confusing fic. Lol. :P Sometimes she is dreaming, but it's just soo vivid that she isn't exactly sure. It will be mentioned later on as to why Tom has chosen Tarra over all of the other girls and why he hasn't just done away with her just yet. Lol Brad looks kind of scary as a vampire. I don't get why everyone goes on about how hot he was in that. I gree that Tom would be a way HAWTER vampire. I'm happy you like the story. I look forward to more reviews from you to help me improve. THANK YOU. Sorry it's so confusing. It will all be explained in the end. :D
Date: 07/20/08 05:03 am Title: t w e n t y - t h r e e
yeay i'm better ^^
quotes:
She was due for another little snack. Wouldn’t you agree?
NOOOO,eww the blood of a goblin it sounds disgusting.
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However, The idea of eating something that came out of a disgusting thing like that …didn’t entirely thrill her.
yeah that's what i said.
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“Tarra, NO!” Tom had returned.
see even tom don't want you to drink that.
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He was too late in his attempts to stop Tarra from ingesting the warm yellow liquid.
O.O yellow,oke that so creeps me out.
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Tarra hadn’t tasted anything like it. Its goodness even far surpassed that which held in Tom’s blood.
So good!
really? because i still think it's disgusting.
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She WANTED more!
hmm is it so addictive?
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Pfht! Ya that’s right. Stay away. You should know better than to mess with me. “Tarra…. Why did you drink it! Do you have any idea how much you’ve worsened your condition. Why!? Jesus Christ— God damn it, Tarra!”
aww i love it when tom cares for tarra ^-^
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“Mmm… your really … Sexy, when you’re angry!” Tarra teased,
XD funny XD but what the hell did that yellow blood stuff do to her.
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The window!!
sneaky tarra XD
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“Don’t worry about it. A pretty lady like yourself shouldn’t half to pay for anything. It’s on me.”
oke what the hell does that creep want from tarra.
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Rezzai pushed a glass closer to Tarra. Tarra giggled then grabbed it. She slurped up the thick layer of foam that lay on top; her eyes never leaving his. He broke the connection and stared hungrily and her collar bone. The flesh was still slightly pink from where Tom had attacked it earlier. He licked his lips.
oke tom you need to come to her right NOW.i do'n't trust that dude XD
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woesh quotes done ^^
you know your story is very addictive
i love it ^-^
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Date: 07/20/08 01:16 am Title: t w e n t y - t h r e e
D:That was Wow, just wow. It was interesting as always! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope nothing goes wrong....
Happy Birthday again. I hope that you got something you wanted! :hands you flowers, cake, gifts, card, and balloons:
:D
Date: 07/18/08 05:32 am Title: t w e n t y - t w o
hun,don't be so unsecure about yourself.
people will review your story. and if they don't there just to lazy to leave a review. and i don't know if it helps but hey i'll still read your story and i review ^-^
and now quotes:
“Where’s …”
“William? Not sure …
tom stop reading her mind,that's freaky XD
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“William! So good to see you!” he answered, pushing away from Tom
william? hmm
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William? Why’d he call you, William?? Wait … I thought your father was dead.
strange.
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He is! That’s most defiantly not my father. But I think I have an idea of what it might be. I’ve much experience with these creatures, and if I’m not mistaken, that is a Fitilos Goblin.
oke that's explains it.
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Ahh … I remember reading something about Goblins. In one of the many books that lined the shelves of this horrid dungeon. Vampire bites were lethal. No one who’s been bitten has avoided the effects. Unfortunately, so it was true for Goblin Blood. Mixing the two liquids — Blood running through that of a vampire and then that of a Goblin – would leave the attacker and attack-ee with a most fatal outcome.
Tarra couldn’t let him do this. She was sure he knew of what would happen. Either he already knew, or he didn’t care.
i'll guess will see in the next chap ^^
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oke i'm still sick,but i tried to do a better review ^-^
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Author's Response: Thanks. Hope you get better soon. ^_^
Date: 07/18/08 04:41 am Title: t w e n t y - t w o
nooo he cant bite him, itll kill him! noooooo
i love your twists and turns, brilliant cliffhangers
keep it up, i love it lots!
Author's Response: I seem to use cliffhangers a lot. It's the only guarantee'd way to hook people, since my writing isn't doing a very good job of it. Thank you soooo much for your review. It means a lot.
Date: 07/17/08 10:57 pm Title: t w e n t y - t w o
It isn't terrible! It's still one of my favorite stories!!! Look you already have over 100 Reviews. WOOT! :D
YAY. Anyway, it was interesting...I'm contemplating on what will happen next.
Update when you can.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yea, I broke the 100 mark. But I still wish it could be better. I wish more people would read it.
Date: 07/17/08 10:48 pm Title: t w e n t y - t w o
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Date: 07/17/08 05:30 am Title: t w e n t y - o n e
oke i'm trying to quote, but i don't no if it's going to be a long quote review. because i'm a sick.
quote:
"I knew you would come back. I didn't even have to come for you. Good girl." Tarra eyed Tom with hatred in her glare as they now stood in the doorway.
i totaly understand tarra reaction.
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"…So what was it? My un-deniable good looks, or, did you finally discover, you can’t survive without me?"
who said it was you,maybe she just can't live without bill XD
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There was a crazed look in his eye. Like a toddler, who had begged for just one cookie. Finally getting it, only to want another.
i don't know why but i think this is funny.
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He clearly hadn't been satisfied!
oke that's not funny (XD)
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Stopping before covering the distance needed to bring them to that door, her spirits lifted. Instead, they entered a large room. This one, she had also been in before. In the centre stood a large bed, this was his sleeping quarters. He brought Tarra to it.
that's because he loves her now.
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Instead, his hand cupped her cheek. He caressed it with his thumb and leaned down, his breath cascading over her as he spoke,
"Stay with me, Tarra. Stay with me."
if i was tarra i stil don't know if i said yes,because yeah well look at what he did to her.
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oke review is done,i'll hope it long but i'm not sure.
but next time i promise i'll better when i'm not sick anymore. ^-^
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Author's Response: Hope you feel better soon hunni. Thanks for the review. :D
Date: 07/16/08 10:19 pm Title: t w e n t y - o n e
Aww, that was really good. :D
I'm glad that they finally kinda got "together"
I can't wait for more. Update when you can, and Happy Early Birthday. I hope you enjoy it!
Author's Response: Danke Schön!!
Date: 07/16/08 09:10 pm Title: t w e n t y - o n e
Loved it I hope you update it soon I really want to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you. :D
Date: 07/16/08 06:45 am Title: t w e n t y
quotes:
"I'm so sorry. Next time, I'll believe you when you tell me your co-worker is a monster."
XD
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At his end, Tom turns, shouting back to Bill,
"I love Her!" Bill was taken aback by Tom's outburst, almost as much as Tom himself seemed to be that he had uttered this.
^^ that's exactly what i wanted to hear
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"So… so you treat her like this? You're not being rational. You love her, and yet you continue to torment her!?" Bill found it difficult to understand this.
yeay that's the weird thing about it.
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"I… I, don't know. I didn't ask to be this way. When my other half overtakes me, there's no chance of stopping it. I can't control it,… I've tried." Tom had calmed.
oke that declared it.
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"You always have a choice Thomas. This won't end well. Some one will pay for your games." Tom knew this to be true. At this moment he was no longer a raging monster. He was simply a man in love.
bill your so right.
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She had to get away.
Far away.
to who go you then?
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quote done,
and i know it's a bit early to say this.but i'll hope you get a great birthday saturday ^^
and the story is almost there where it remained.
and why you gonna be kicked when your 18?
or don't you wanna tell that,you don't have to tell if you don't want to. ^^
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Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my fic sweetie. I really appreciate it (and your kick-ass long reviews). My dad says I have to find somewhere to live and not just let my life fucking take over. The thing is that things are just getting worse with my S.A.D and I am really afraid I won't get any better. :(
Date: 07/16/08 04:57 am Title: t w e n t y
Tom loves her? omg more twists
geez your good at this girl
im as addicted to this story as Tom is to Tarra
I LOVE IT!
happy birthday for saturday btw, you think 17 is getting old? im 32 in 4 months, now thats old!
Author's Response: Thank you. Well no 17 is not old, but I am just upset about my birthday because its a year closer to 18. My dad is threatening to kick me out. I have no where else to go. :-( I never will.
Date: 07/15/08 10:10 pm Title: t w e n t y
i love this so much! it's amazingly written, good job. please update again!
Author's Response: Thank you !!
Date: 07/15/08 09:32 pm Title: t w e n t y
omg, I was deff. not expecting that..I love this story (:!
Date: 07/15/08 09:49 am Title: n i n e t e e n
This story is awesome!!
Date: 07/15/08 05:22 am Title: n i n e t e e n
quotes ^^:
"So...when you say I'm not yet...Yet meaning… meaning you're going to…?"
"No, no you are not. Not yet. Near too, yes, but you are still alive. That is how I need you… for now."
"So...when you say I'm not yet...Yet meaning… meaning you're going to…?"
"Of course not!
then why are you confusing amber so much.
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"It's alright. I'm here to help. I am sorry for frightening you. Forgive me..." Amber was soon reunited with the ground as her bonds were cut. "…I'm Bill. We were never properly introduced." How cordial he was being
don't be scared amber,for what i know you can trust bill.
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"Amber!" Very poorly lit where they stood, Amber's eyes could not adjust.
awh that's sweet of bill,he brings her to tarra ^^
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"Ladies, we really have to go. He's going to find out you're missing."
yeay bill's going to help then,bill's going to help then,bill's going to help them. yeay ^^ XD
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"Just drink it!" he snapped. His tone fervent.
oke that's not very nice.
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"I'll find a way. I promise you this!"
^-^
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review done.
and i'm going to say this: i still love this story,and i think it's one of the best story's.
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