Date: 07/26/08 12:20 am Title: t w e n t y - s e v e n
gah! ur amazing! but where is BILL?! i must know! Dx
Author's Response: You'll see, you'll see. :)
Date: 07/25/08 11:17 pm Title: t w e n t y - s e v e n
i don;t know how i missed it, but i didn't know Bill was missing O_o...Sorry :[]
but now i'm really worried about him! please update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, lol, s'okay. :) rnrnWe're all worried about him. But I'm the only one who knows where he is. Lol. So I guess you'll have to stick around. Hee Hee *meniacle laughter*
Date: 07/25/08 05:31 pm Title: t w e n t y - s i x
Not much changed in this chapter either but i like this chapter the way it is.. Good job!!!
Talk to you later or Tomorrow when you go on MSN!! Hugz and kissz
Date: 07/25/08 04:59 am Title: t w e n t y - s i x
quotes ^^:
So you have taken your brother’s lead and switched to the bimbo variety too, eh?
i guess he did :S
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“…and my daddy owns this club!” she continued.
Oo well good for you or something O.o
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She let go quickly as if the woman had some sort of disease.
i think she might has one or more.
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“Tarr— Evvalayne Swvail … and uhm … should I care?”
nanananana XD
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In the shine of the disco style lighting from above, she could have sworn she saw …
on his lower lip, in the corner …
A glint of silver.
:o tom?
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oke review done^^
i't short i know i'm sorry
but i'll hope you like it ^-^
Date: 07/25/08 03:13 am Title: t w e n t y - s i x
oh oh oh!
Toms turning into Bill not just controling him?
omg, where poor Billa?
aaaahhhhhh i neeed to keep reading this, tell you stoopid sis to behave we need you here!
Date: 07/25/08 03:00 am Title: t w e n t y - s i x
I loved it!
Thanks for posting for us- and risking getting caught.
We appreciate it!!!
:D
Update when you can. I'm still hooked as ever.
Date: 07/25/08 02:59 am Title: o n e
I loved it!
Thanks for posting for us- and risking getting caught.
:D
Update when you can. I'm still hooked as ever.
Date: 07/25/08 01:33 am Title: t w e n t y - s i x
hmmm. i glint of silver on his lowr lip??? od... O_o make me thin of you know who.... XD please upate a ssoon as tyour able XD
Date: 07/23/08 08:26 am Title: t w e n t y - f i v e
and your smiling! yay *hugs*
so shes a stripper now? wow, another unexpected twist lol
i love how you do that :)
Author's Response: hee. :) thank you so much.
Date: 07/23/08 12:48 am Title: t w e n t y - t h r e e
i don't understand...it jumped to her at a bar...okay cool, rexxai..neet name XD pleas continue the updates XD
Date: 07/22/08 07:41 pm Title: t w e n t y - f i v e
uhhh ohhh BILL!
hope he's ok
Date: 07/22/08 05:38 pm Title: t w e n t y - f i v e
very very good. I love the rewrite.. but some of the chapters I did skim over. They were unchanged and didn't catch my fancy.. I dunno how to put it but those select few I skimmed didn't really interest me cuz they hadn't really anything to do with the story.. But its awesome either way!
Date: 07/22/08 02:24 pm Title: t w e n t y - f i v e
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH WHAT HAPPENED TO MY BILL!!!!
TOM WHAT DID U DO WITH MY LOVER LOL
me luv tamara ME LUV SO MUCH
update
Author's Response: Don't worry. We'll find him. We'll find him. :)
Date: 07/22/08 01:49 pm Title: t w e n t y - f i v e
quotes:
Perhaps she hadn’t realized that this was her best friend standing right here in front of her because of the drastic change in her looks. Or maybe … Maybe she really was losing all ties to reality.
no you're not losing it.
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“Of course, sweet’art. Just gimmie a moment to deal with these other custom— Tarra?! What are you doing here?” Yup! Sure enough, it was Amber.
XD funny XD
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“Met her once or twice backstage. Her names Jessie I believe … er …’Flossi’ as the gentleman like to call her.
flossi O.o oke that sounds creepy Oo
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“Aww, no, stay and talk with me for a bit longer.
aww amber missed you ^^
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She hadn't seen Bill for days. Did Tom have something to do with his mysterious disappearance?
i don't think taht tom has bill hidden from her.
HEY PSST if you can keep a secret i'll tell you something i know where bill is,he's here with me ^^ GOD I WISH THAT THAT WAS TRUE XD
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Tarra reached the room where she spent many-a-night. Okay, there is the door, I'm just going to grab my things and be off.
and that's not gonna be so easy as you think (that's what i think)
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oke i'm done,the review is maybe not so long as before.be i'm trying to do my best.
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Author's Response: Thank you sweet'art. You're reviews don't have to be long to be appreciated. Thank you, Thank you. *hugs*
Date: 07/22/08 06:26 am Title: t w e n t y - f o u r
yay shes getting an attitude, i like it!
how do you pronounce her new name? Ewalayne? it sounds slightly welsh i like that name
great chappy as always
well done
Author's Response: Thank you. :) you pronounce it. E v v a h - L a i n
Date: 07/21/08 04:15 pm Title: t w e n t y - f o u r
i hope to see more when i come back lol
Date: 07/21/08 11:08 am Title: t w e n t y - f o u r
ur welcome!!! XD
Date: 07/21/08 08:31 am Title: t w e n t y - f o u r
i love it! :)
Author's Response: danke schön XD
Date: 07/21/08 06:03 am Title: t w e n t y - f o u r
quotes:
She ran her finger over it gently. “How’d this happen?” she spoke quietly.
ooh god tarra please tell that your not flirting with him.
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“I ran into an old friend of mine. Let’s just say, he wasn’t too fond of our past relationship together.” Rezzai nodded to the man in the core of the throng.
and that man is?
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He wore a black hat with streaks of white and a strange symbol in the center. Beneath the cap, a black sweat band nearly blending in with it. His dread-locked hair cascaded over his shoulders and down his back,
TOM
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She peered around the room in search of her next meal.
Nope! Too small. I could get more blood from a mosquito. She zeroed in on a man sipping a tall beer. Hmmm...nah.
Nope!
No way.
FUCK NO!!
that's funny XD
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“Come here.” Tarra grabbed his hand tightly and pulled him from his seat; Weaving through and about the hoards of people, just beyond the crowded dance floor, and past the dreadlocked boy.
“Tarra?”
he saw tarra ^^
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As her new friend gnawed at the nape of her neck,
-shock- FRIEND Oo
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“No ...Not Tarra…” She licked the excess from her lips. “Evvalayne. Call me, Evvalayne…. Tarra is no more,”
evvalayne?? well no sorry but i still call you tarra
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“How long have you been here?” Tom continued to glare, at both Tarra, and this mystery man he’d not yet met. “Who is this?” He nodded to Rez.
he's a bit jealous
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“I dunno’ what was wrong with you, But I’m completely fine. That blood did nothing to me. I’m still living, breathing, aren’t I? Quit your worrying.” Tarra swung down from the high stool barely sticking the landing and pranced off into the crowd. Tom followed.
of course he's worried,he loves you.
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“Evvalayne! Call me Evvalayne.”
Every Vampira needs a cover.
oke,oke i get that,but is still don't like that name.
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Wait, wait, wait, wait … HELP?
Tarra threw the gloss back into her purse and pivoted on the spot.
“You want to HELP me!? Oh please Tomas! You know as much as I do that that’s a full out lie! WHY would you help me! Let’s not forget how I got into this mess. How I became this way. I once had a some-what normal life and who took that away from me… Who Tomas!? … Ya, that’s right, it was you!! To fulfill your own selfish need!,”
she has a point you know.
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She’s right Tom. You did this to her. It’s all your fault. You ruined her life!!
Shutup!
gheghe XD
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Tarra passed him by and left the room, leaving Tom to his thoughts.
auch XD
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review done ^^
and what i think about the chap well i love it of course,but i definitly don't like that rezzai dude.and i think that tom made that scar on rezzai,but then again when tarra said rezzai's name to tom there was no sign of recognition. but that can be an act.
but i also have the smallest feeling that it is bill he hurts rezzai.
i can only hope XD
but then bill won't look innocent anymore.
well oke i'll stop thinking about that and leave it to you.
hopefully i'll read it in the next chap.
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Author's Response: Hee Hee. It will all be revealed. :) Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/21/08 03:24 am Title: t w e n t y - f o u r
how dare tarra do that
she should of never drank the goblin blood
ME WANT MORE
Author's Response: Dammmn gurl!! I woke up to find that there were 22 new reviews on Biss Mich. That makes me happy. Thank you so much for leaving your input. I really appreciate it. :D