Date: 07/12/11 12:11 am Title: Chapter 5
I literally cried all the way through this. Oh my gosh... such a beautiful story, I love your writing so much! Great work! (:
Date: 08/13/08 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
i read this while at work and ... you made me cry.
so touching. and so true.
i think the best advice i ever got about death was " the pain doesn't go away- it just gets further." you captured that emotion.
Author's Response: oh, I'm sorry if I made you cry at work :c But thank you so much. Means a lot to me that you liked it.
Date: 08/13/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this story! The ending is so sad. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 08/12/08 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww this chapter was really good I'm glad that people understand Bill can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I think it's important that when people mourn, somebody must understand. :)
Date: 08/11/08 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
*sobs* I LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/11/08 12:39 am Title: Prologue
*crys* touching storie
Author's Response: aw, thank you :)
Date: 08/04/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter 3
AWWWW this story is sooooo sad oh my god I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: aw, i'll update tomorrow or later today again :)
Date: 08/04/08 06:00 am Title: Chapter 3
*cries* beautyful, really.
Author's Response: wow, thank you.
Date: 07/31/08 07:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Ahhh... i feel so sorry for Bill :( poor thing
Author's Response: yeah.. but two more chapters though :)
Date: 07/30/08 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
i..can't stop crying this is like my first character death story and I feel so bad for Bill..having Your twin die must be awful especially when it's your other half..its just depressing.
yeah i may be sad but i still need more.
Author's Response: wow, aw, thank you! i'll try update as soon as possible. :)
Date: 07/28/08 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1
*cries* more please? :'(
Author's Response: aw, don't cry! *hugs* I'll try to update soon, i promise! :)
Date: 07/01/08 10:38 am Title: Prologue
-sobs in corner-
Tom...
I have no words. I loved the start, and your english is very good by the way :)
Hope to read more soon.
Laurie.
Author's Response: Aaw! Thank you so much. i was actually very nervous if there were any bigger mistakes. New chapter will come soon, i promise! ^__^