Date: 10/30/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Guru Christian
ouch!
Date: 10/30/08 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Lengths to get a story
This story is so well written, thank god! Good grammar, spelling and it has a god flow. I love the idea. The characters are really well developed! Yeah! I hope it get's really dirty!! *evil grin*
Date: 10/27/08 11:59 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
amazing =] i couldn't stop laughing throughout. am right about to read the sequel!
Date: 10/24/08 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
XDDDD OMG!!!! It's rare when I like hets and well X__x I can't write them myself. Trust me, I've tried lol and well >.> it's the uber cliche insert!sue but with friends type of story that's only meant for your fansite on myspace in the blog ._. lol so ja =P slash reader/writer UBERLY loves this story *-* seriously!!! lol
XD and you know... this kinda reminds me of the movie Head Over Heels with Freddie Prinze, Jr. =P cuz like... he ends up falling for this woman even though he's just doing his job by being this >.> FBI agent or whatever so he completely lies to her and the girl flips out on him and the ending is kinda like this one with Bill and Lana XD *cuddle* I lubzes this story ^^ lol sorry =P had to say it again...
Author's Response: *huggles you*rnrnthankyou so much!! It makes me really happy when Slash readers tell me im a good writer... makes me feel like ive achieved something :D
Date: 10/24/08 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?
;__; meh...
Date: 10/24/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Voulez Vous
XDDDDDDD...... DDDDDD"X
I feel so excited yet extremely sad!!!! DDD"X
Date: 10/24/08 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Finally
XDDD I had to laugh at:
“Oh...” he muttered, as if he’d only remembered about me now, “See, the thing is...”
“If you don’t want her,” began Georg, “Then...”
“NO,” cried Bill suddenly, and much louder than I’m sure he wanted to because he looked a little surprised after he’d said it.
XDD oh ganz lmao I'm sure that if my room mate were here, that she would look at me as if I were nuts from my laughter... jaaa ._. I laugh obnoxiously at things that aren't even that funny but XD I could just picture Bill's eyes suddenly going wide when he shouted "NO!" *gigglefit*
Date: 10/24/08 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 11 - In The Shadows
D=< fucking Tom!!! RAWWWWRRR!!! ._. *cough* ja >.> even though what Lana is doing, is evil ;__; I can't help but think that this is uberly romantiiiiiic... *cries*
Date: 10/24/08 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Sabotage
>_< I love the uberly cuteness between them even thought they've only known each other for a couple of hours, but Bill HAS said that he believes in love at first sight, ne? ;) und ja!!! lol I really like this story even if it's a Het ^^ cuz it's really good!! lol =P
Date: 10/24/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder
XDDDDDD I must squeal at this!!! lol
Date: 10/24/08 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Lengths to get a story
O_O AH!
Date: 10/22/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
wauw O.O
this entire story rocks like hell
I SO like this one x3
and the end is great! :D
,,,now, i'm going to read the sequel ;)
Good job!
x.x.x
Date: 10/09/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Guru Christian
BAHAHA I love it xD I laughed throughout the whole chapter.
Date: 10/07/08 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
i absolutley loved the entire thing and i know i haven't followed the story from chapter to chapter like the proper dedicated fans but if once burned, twice shy isn't complete when i've caught up you can guaratee(sp?) i'll be following it like a love sick puppy :D:D:D
Date: 10/02/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Once More With Feeling
HAHA I LOVE UR STORY SO FUCKIN FUNNY LOL
Date: 10/01/08 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
I love story greatly. i didn't leave a comment until now but yeah i figured since the story was already finished to just wait till the end. so yeah.....your a wonderful author and i can't wait to read the sequel. and if there is any mistakes in this message i apologize cause i am on my phone.
Date: 09/30/08 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
i dont think i can even find the words... I just spent a HUGE chunk of time reading every one of these chapters. Its nine at night and if i dont finish the mountain of homework i left undone my teachers will kill me, but this was worth it. I cant even explain how hard my heart was beating as i read every word. I still cant get it to slow down. Sorry this is so long but i just wanted to let you know how much i loved this. You write beautifully, i seriously think you should submit your work to a publisher. Thank you so much for writing this, it made my year. =]
Date: 09/27/08 11:52 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
I LOVE THIS STORY times infinity!!!!!
Love it... so amazing.
Date: 09/27/08 01:48 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
Brilliant. Made me cry even. Absolutely the best fanfic I've read in a while and certainly the best TH fic I've ever read.
Date: 09/26/08 12:02 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
OH MY FUCKING GOD THAT WAS AMAZINNNNNNGGGGGGGG
O_O
*applauds until hands fall off*