Date: 08/10/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
You go Bill:)) show them who is the best :P
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Gooo Bill! Gimmi a B... gimmi an I... gimmi an L... gimmi another L... what does that spell? BILL! Lol XD I crack myself up...
Date: 08/10/08 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
Update soon! I really like this...
Christian is just awesome.
Author's Response: Christian is awesomesauce... I should patent him...
Date: 08/10/08 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
HAHAHA, you finally get a good giggle out of me and it's over? :( I love how you made Bill a super-bowling-genius-god. I mean, he was still a super-genius before, but ADD BOWLING ONTO THAT! Andi-ways, great chapter, and I really can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: The Bill super-bowler was some of my best work if i do say so myself... I can just hear him rubbing it in Tom's face :P
Date: 08/10/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
haha! omg, this rocks! I can see it clear in my head the scene Bill had to remove his rings xD This is awesome! *sits down and waits for more*
Author's Response: *hands hot coco* Hehe nice to see you camping outside my story waiting for more ^_^ I wish i could keep you all happy and get the chapters up sooner but it's been a busy summer ¬__¬
Date: 08/10/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
awww man, no action is this chapter lol!! cant wait til 'tonight' lol :D
Author's Response: oh yes... 'tonight' will be some fun ;)
Date: 08/10/08 04:08 am Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
I love your style, it's funny and smooth.The guys are funny too. Will she just do her job? Or fall for him...I'm not asking about him, since it is pretty obvious.
Author's Response: :P Yeah Bill's been hit by cupids arrow... but what about Alannah...;) Keep reading and you'll see...
Date: 08/09/08 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
haha
Author's Response: XD
Date: 08/09/08 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
AHAHAHA!
Bill's a superstar bowler-that's funnnnnnny!
Author's Response: I thought so too XD
Date: 08/09/08 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
ooo.
this is AWESOME!
you have to update now!
and now is now!
please?
seriously, you crack me up!
Author's Response: glad i crack you up, but you're going to have to be patient... what with work, guitar practising and other such activities it's hard to get a chapter out in less than a few days :P
Date: 08/09/08 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
Hahaha, the humor in this chapter was amazing! My three favorite parts were:
1. “They’re not usually this weird. I think it might have something to do with you, or Christian, but… probably you.”
2. Whiney, Sexy, Smelly, Bitchy, Alannah and Christian.
3. "Bill kicks the shit out of us and gloats for the next six months.”
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more soon!
Author's Response: thanks for pointing out your favourite bits!! I love to know what things everyone finds funny ^_^
Date: 08/09/08 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
haaa poor Tom Bill's going to kick his ass in bowling.
Author's Response: Bill's gona kick ALL their asses ;)
Date: 08/09/08 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
that was funny about the shoes.
loved the chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, and the shoe thing... when i thought it up in my head i couldnt stop laughing XD
Date: 08/09/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
awww.. Bill is soo cute when he's arguing about the shoes. i love it so much.. please update soon :)
Author's Response: I know! Prima donna Bill must wear his own boots to bowl ;)
Date: 08/09/08 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
gaah, i LOVE THIS.
it's so fucking funny!!
Author's Response: XD thanks. If you're finding it funny then i'm doing my job =D
Date: 08/09/08 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
awww yay yay yay!
thanks for posting this ^^
ive waited for days for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hopefully you don't mind the wait. No matter how hard i try, I cant get chapters out faster than every few days!!
Date: 08/09/08 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
yay, you're here again ^^!!! but there's no action in here :'( It doesn't matter, is a cool chapter anyway! :)
and...wow, I didn't know those things about smoking...I started because of stress too...Oh my god...I've been fooled all my life! xDDD
Author's Response: Haha, my mother has the same problem :P There will be action soon ;) I promise
Date: 08/09/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
HAHA now i must say, (and i hope this really sinks in :L:L) This story is probbly in my top...2 for favourites! it makes me laugh sooooo much, everytime i see its uploaded i almost could dance! its really good how you mke tom and bill argue and have a laugh but at the same time tom is really protective, now i just hope allanah doesnt hurt bill too much :( bowling bill....O_o..i never expected that!
x
Author's Response: wow ^_^ Thanks for the review. Glad you like it... and yeah, bowling ace Bill is a bit of a surprise ;)
Date: 08/09/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
YAY!!!
when will the next chapter come ? im excited =)
Author's Response: =D Im excited tooooo
Date: 08/09/08 08:51 am Title: Chapter 12 - Real
cant wait for more
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 08/08/08 11:35 am Title: Chapter 12 - Real
lol wow, dudeeee i LOVE this storyyyy!!! haaaaa (:
seriously i am sucked into this story like its a vaccuum or something :/
Author's Response: I'll take that as a HUGE comment!! =D *hugs* thanks