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Reviewer: mrsbkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Damn Regret

ahhhhhhhh amazing
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Author's Response: Lol. Thanks =D

Reviewer: starburst Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Damn Regret

Okay, so I've already told you what I think about this chapter through MSN. But, still. jasflshdflashfljashflkas hfljashflkjahfjkahsdlfkjhasldkfhalsdjfalskjdfalsjfhalskdfhlaskhflaksjf lkjasdf lasdf jasf ksjdfh alkdjflas hlks flskdh faksf -breathes- ksjaf lashflkshadf hasdfkh as lfhas ldfjhas lfhlaskf halsfh las hflashflasdhflaks hflakfhl aks flsh lsaflsakhdflasfl aks -breathes- skhfl as hdflaksjflaks dflakshdf lkas dflkas hdfkhasdkl haslkdfhla skf lksdhflashdf lkadhfl akshdflaksfkadshflksdh lkshdf skdflk sahlfkhslkf

:D -commence heart attack-

Author's Response: DUDE! lol don't die on me!!

Reviewer: anxiety loves adrelanine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Damn Regret

omg the long awaited chapter! i love your writing, so emotional *tears*

please update soon



Author's Response: Thanks! I will

Reviewer: MisterSmithers Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

:O
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
why did you do that?!
why did you have to make her tell him?!
couldn't she have just closed the curtains?
;~;
now bill is all mad at her.
NOW WHAT?!
*grips edge of seat*

Author's Response: *gasp* you shall know soon.

Reviewer: isisivery Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

awe sad

Author's Response: Yup

Reviewer: earth_to_steph Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

MEINE GOTT!!!!! so much for lil sweety pie Bill... I wonder how would he look like when he is so angry and pissed off and practically furious at someone that he could almost kill him.. I wonder.. how would he look like... I can`t really imagine it because he has always been kind and sweet and u know... being just BILL...
anyway... I really really reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally hope that this is NOT the last chapter and.. things could get better...? in the end... ? :?
I don`t know... it`s me to be qurious about it and the author to decide what happens next.. once again even with a kinda sad ending I liked the chapter A LOT (well... what`s not to like..u have an almost complete dirty scene :p ) ..

hugz from earth!

Author's Response: Yup. I imagine Bill would have a big temper... we just never see it ;)

Reviewer: iHEARTtokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 10:59 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

OMG. So good! I love it x

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: YourDirtyLittleSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 05:37 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

>_< Oh no...

Poor Lana...

Author's Response: Yup.

Reviewer: Aqua Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

oh snap...

Author's Response: I know...

Reviewer: tokiohotel26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

oh damn...

Author's Response: indeed...

Reviewer: Chrissy19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

-Snap Snap-
This is really good!
Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I will soon

Reviewer: LiebeMich Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

Poor Bill! Poor Lana!

They were SO close! And ok, I know it would have been wrong if they did sleep together... but I wanted it to just happen anyway!

I need the next chapter like Bill needs Haribo! So post soon! Please?

Author's Response: Haribo... lol.. as long as I get the hearts :P

Reviewer: TokioJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

oh god oh god oh god oh god.
Sorry if i totally used that in vain but omggggggggggggggggggg. i can't believe that, i pray he understands! XX

Author's Response: I'm getting a lot of OMG's :P It's okay

Reviewer: Irene Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

This was unexpected, but GOOD! Really really GOOD! Maybe honesty WAS the best option after all...

Author's Response: Unexpected is good. Means im doing my job right :P

Reviewer: Vall Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

She should explain to Bill like...with more details you know, he gotta forgive her..
can't wait for more

Author's Response: she will try explaining :P

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 04:58 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

O.O *quickly runs to Tomi to get away from Bill* He scares me o.o *eats the cookies* lolz xD Great chapter Ö I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi

Author's Response: Running to Tomi might not be advised :P

Reviewer: StixSpaztic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

Oh my god. I hope Bill forgives her! Or this all gets resolved some how. That was like a complete 360 on what I thought would happen. Amazing amazing amazing as always!

Author's Response: 360? That's good... I like to surprise my readers ;)

Reviewer: MiLOTiQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 01:01 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

Lana YOU IDIOT!!!! Ugh what a dumbass. Lmfao Where do they go from here? Poor Bill.. Lana, you're a jackass lmao

Author's Response: Yup, she's a bit of a ditz there...

Reviewer: LoveIsWasteful Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 12:21 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

Oooooohh! xxx

Author's Response: pretty much sums it up... Eek!

Reviewer: gaamariou Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter 17 - Honesty. The best policy?

Great Story! Hope to see the next one soon!

Author's Response: thanks!

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