Date: 09/10/08 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
THIS WAS AMAZING!! You have some serious talent!! I'm anxiously awaiting the sequel =)
Date: 09/10/08 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
AAHHH beautiful finale!! the last bit especially was so adorable, my cheeks hurt from smiling so big =] as for the love you've been recieving? there's NO need to thank any of us: you truelly 100% deserved every bit of it!!! i'm sooo excited for the sequel. thank you so much for writing this
Date: 09/10/08 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
Oh no! It's over :(
Now what am I going to do? I hope the promised sequel will be up soon.
I really loved this story more than I can tell you. Not for one minute did I find it boring. I loved the plot, the characters, your writing style. I loved everything about it. This is why it's in my favorites and this is why YOU are in my favorite authors list.
Ok I think I should stop now...
The bottom line is I LOVED IT!!!
Congrats!
Date: 09/10/08 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
End of story?
No kiss?
D:
Ah well.
Date: 09/10/08 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
Awww, I love it!! Loved it, loved it, love it!!! I'm gonna miss this story!
Date: 09/10/08 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
*cries* the first series is over *tears* best story ever, honestly*sobs* beautiful *applauses* cant wait for the sequel*rounds of multiple applauses* Ill be waiting for the next series!
I LOVE YOUR STORIES!
Date: 09/10/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
lol. that was so cute. great job. i realy cannot wait for more. a sequel sounds just aobut what would make anyones day. it may be het but it was still a great story. and by the way i have like a total hating for het usualy, so if i stayed to read it then you know it was one of the greatest stories ive read so far. great job and gpopd luck with the sequel. i will be sure to read and review it. : )
Date: 09/10/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
argh! whats gonna happen next?
Date: 09/10/08 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
You're my hero! xD lol But that was one of the best stories I've ever read *nodds* I'll be waiting for a sequel! & I really love the way you write, it's realistic, funny in a way, and simply great thing to read. :]
Date: 09/10/08 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
Awe!! I'll be looking forward to future stories from you chica. And I certainly hope you do bring Alannah and Christian back for a sequel. keep writing, you do it very well. (^_^)
Date: 09/10/08 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
LOVED the story!
I'll def. be reading the sequel :)
wooo!
Date: 09/10/08 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
MUAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH I AM REVIEWING AGAIN BECAUSE I
Date: 09/09/08 11:38 am Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
Okay, So I came into this story late. I LOVE IT. You have such a good voice and well developed characters, not to mention great humor. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the excellent writing chica.
Author's Response: Thankyou so much!! =D
Date: 09/09/08 10:52 am Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
Lol. Bill just flies through the window xD
I knew he had superpowers!!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Lol not QUITE ;)
Date: 09/09/08 10:24 am Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
awww how sweet Bill saved her.. this is soo cute.
Author's Response: Awww thanks ^_^
Date: 09/09/08 06:22 am Title: Chapter 13 - And this is why we don't go bowling more often.
Hey, I saw your note about putting italics in the story. I don't know if you know this already or not, but if you write fanfiction elsewhere like on fanfiction.net, there's a simple solution to keeping your bold/italics. Just upload the document there and then copy and past the HTML directly onto your window here when you're updating. I used to run an archive using the same HTML script as this website (eFiction script) and I know it strips your italics, so you probably have to put in the and yourself. (I'm adding the : since I'm guessing that JS might be enabled for the comments too, in which case if I didn't add the : it'll just make it italics for real, loL. I'm an author too; I know how it's a real pain to go through and do that. What sites like fanfiction.net do is strip your document of all HTML formatting except for the basic stuff.
Anyway, if you're still unclear and wondering what I'm talking about, feel free to PM/email me and I'll explain with more detail.
Author's Response: Wow thanks!! That'll really help with updating!! *hugs*
Date: 09/08/08 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
WTF. Bill just showed up out of nowhere. Epic. XD Please update soon.
Author's Response: Yup. epic-ness
Date: 09/08/08 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
yaaaaay!!!! woo hooo.... things are gettin waaaaay betta noow :p LOL ... super bill to the rescue!! I loved it... heer hero... lol.. loved the chapter!! the name of it first confused me and let me think that this is not gonna end up good.. but now i believe there wouldn`t have been a better end for that chapter :pP
Date: 09/08/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
awe bill
Date: 09/08/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
I. NEED. MORE.