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Reviewer: myfishdrowned Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

awwwwwwwwwwwwww.........
I CAN TOTALLY SEE BILL DOING THAT.
THIS IS SOOOOO CUTE..........ARE YOU GOING TO START ANOTHER ONE???
please??
this one was beyond words,so another one??
yah??

Reviewer: earth_to_steph Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

THAT IS SOOO CUTE!!!! the ending well... I LOVE IT! ..

a simple and short review! I have nothing else to add :}

Reviewer: RetteMich Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

THIS DESERVES CAPS LOCK.
KJADHGLKJSDHG;KAJHDFG;AJHDFLKGJHDFG!
AMZINGAMZINGAMAZINGAMAZING.
PERFECTION.

Reviewer: iluvmusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

i love it and i can't wait until the sequel!

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

nnooo :'(
dont end it please?? *puppy eyes*
i loved this whole story and its really sad to find out its ended :(

Reviewer: LiebeMich Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

That was such a sweet and funny and cute and lovely and...and...PERFECT ending!

I'm all smiley now :]

Thankyou for such a brilliant story! And get that sequal up soon, coz im gonna start having Christian withdrawel symptoms soon!

x

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

Awwhh, what a cute end to an amazing story!!

Reviewer: LoveIsWasteful Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

Aahhhhh Bill you forgave her how nice xxx

Reviewer: Twins of Riot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

THE END? :|!!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!! I want a sequel!!!!! I NEEEED IT!! I LOVE this story!!!

Reviewer: lauren1234567890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 11:46 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

AHHHHHH LOVED IT
Sad Its Over :(
loved this fic

Reviewer: YourDirtyLittleSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 10:54 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

^_^

Nyaww...
Please continue!
This was such a great story, there are very few decent Het fics such as this. It deserves to be Featured :P

PS: You have to continue XD

Reviewer: ToKiO HoTeLuV Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 10:35 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

I LUV LUV THIS STORY :)

hehe so good i couldn't stop reading it :)

yayay sequal i cant wait :D lol

Reviewer: LateLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 08:53 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

Ohmygod, what a great ending! :D I don't even have words for it.. it's just.. incredible. Wow..
I'm really, really, really looking forward to the sequel! Like, really, really, really, really :D

Reviewer: Hysteric Polaris Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 07:41 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

One of the best damn stories I've ever read. Ever. The perfect balance of humor and drama, and the perfect ending.

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 03:04 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

aww cool ending^^ Man you made me laugh soooooooooooooooooooo much eh!

My sis already thinks i'm crazy lmao in the middle of the night xD, but you made me laugh even more!

hehe very funny and cool story!

I'll be looking out for the sequel!

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 01:48 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

And that story for another day better come, missy! XD In other words, I'd very much like a sequel *nods*

I grinned so hard when he wanted her to shake his hand. In fact I'm still grinning. What an amazing story. I can honestly say that IMO it's the best Het on here, it's the only fic that I've sticked with until the end and still want more. So, Bravo :D

Oh, and yeah, congrats for the feature :D You deserve it.

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 01:36 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

And that other story for another day is going to be a sequel??? ;P Great chapter :D I loved reading this story :D
xx Chi

Reviewer: starburst Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 01:02 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

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"Bill.." "Bill..." "Bill.." "You really suck at this game, don't you?"


God Sarah. I love you. And I know this is VERY LATE IN SAYING. But, if you want, I can help you with Exiled. I know you asked for help in an earlier chapter note, but whatever gets Exiled done faster gets the sequel to this one started. I loved this story and I am going to miss freaking out waiting for it to update, freaking out when you update, and freaking out when I finish reading the update. You are an amazing writer, and thanks for not being like me and letting it drift away, and not update it ever. When you wake up and get on MSN. I'm internet tackling you and giving you lots of cookies and Skittles and whatnot. You deserve it.

Reviewer: gaamariou Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

Aww..yay! That was awesome!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Tomi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/08 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement

Awww, that was sooooo good. Bill is so adorable. Ugh. I love you! I love you for writing this storyyy...jeez. I'm so speechless.

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