Date: 09/24/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
*favourite*
so glad ur making a sequel this truly was an amzing story. i'd make the review longer except its hard to see the keybord in the dark XD
awesome story
yay sequel
xx
Date: 09/23/08 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
I LOVE THE STORY!!! make that one more for you favorite count.
I'm looking forward to the sequal
Date: 09/19/08 03:03 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
I loved every second of it. =D
Date: 09/18/08 05:13 am Title: Chapter 8 - Better The Devil You Know
As much as I wish I could sit here and finish all of this now... It's past 5 AM and I have work in the morning. But I am loving this so much I seriously don't want to stop! The remark about Gustav's one facial expression at the playground had me rolling, and I think you've got Bill down to a T. How he's vain, but still charming, and completely oblivious to his own vanity. I'm not generally a fan of OFC fics, but she doesn't come on too strong, and she just seems very real. I can't wait til I get home tomorrow evening to read some more!
xoxo - Jayde
Date: 09/16/08 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
loved it, i wish more people would write het, i'm not too big on slash and twincest is just >_
Date: 09/16/08 07:54 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
That was the best fic I have EVER SEEN. It is so hard to fin Het fic that are good. But I don't touch the other ones like slash. But this is AWESOME. You are worth all those reviews and favorites. Major brownie points to you. And your own characters where great as well, they just seamlessly fit right into the story. But I really love how you protruded all of the characters. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
Date: 09/15/08 01:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
OMG!! MUCH LOVED & TO BE MISSED STORY!!
ssseeeerrriiaaaallleeee!! :D
lmao, exiled deserveth not your attention-eth? me & me's serial deservith your attention?
lol, sorry there is no eay way to put this, iv always held a grudge against exiled cos it held you back from this story.. i am bad. :[
but ME LOVED THISSS!!!
Author's Response: Exiled seemed like a good idea at the time, but it ended up just sitting there without much interest. LOL this story's much more fun :D
Date: 09/14/08 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! That was a WONDERFUL ending!!! hehehe im so happy that SOMEONE got to smash simon over the head lmao!!! this was such a good read! although i must admit it could have used a little more smut haha!!! Keep on writing, your very good! =D
Date: 09/14/08 10:37 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
I LOVE YOU.
Date: 09/14/08 06:30 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
What a great ending! Great story!
Date: 09/13/08 06:21 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
AHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVE IT!
And I demand a sequel ASAP!
Date: 09/13/08 05:40 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
it's sad to see his story finish but it's been wonderful. This story is just amazing.
Date: 09/13/08 02:52 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
lol the sniffy bit made me giggle
very well written
xx
Date: 09/13/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
Congrats! I totally know how it feels. I was shocked too when YLAD got featured lol xD But, let me tell you, you deserved it. I haven't seen such an original het fic in a long time. I really loved it, and I'll be waiting for the sequel :)
Btw, I like...dont read anything on here because all of the het fics sound the same, so me reading this is sorta out of the ordinary for me lol xD VERY VERY refreshing! Keep up the good work :)
Date: 09/12/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
This is by far my favorite Het fic on here. Kudos m'dear! I'm itching for the sequeal! ;)
Date: 09/12/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
Wow!!!!
The ending was perfect, seriously,i totally love it
Date: 09/12/08 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
Ohmygoooooooood!!!!!!!
Noooo!!!
It's done D:
;~;
It was an amazing story! I loved it soooo much!
Date: 09/12/08 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
AHMYGOD
so it all worked out in the end, eh?
gotta love when that happens!
....
*cough*
sequel?
*cough cough*
Date: 09/12/08 11:07 am Title: Chapter 19 - What have you done now?
bahaha!
stinkin simon.....
Woo! Bill came back! how in the world did he find her? ahh who cares?! he's Bill-he does what he wants!
Date: 09/12/08 04:52 am Title: Chapter 20 - Atonement
That was really sweet, and I cannot wait for the sequel! I'm so happy for you that this story became so popular. But, this story and YOU truly deserved all of this recognition!