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Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/08 09:20 pm Title: I can be all you need

what will happen??

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/08 09:16 pm Title: We'll Leave This Place With A Sex Scene

mmm don't tell me they do really need to sleep
xoxo

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/08 09:10 pm Title: A little Bit of Freedom.

i loved it
thxs
xoxo

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/08 09:07 pm Title: Behind your eyes I see the lies

yyyyeeeeyyyy i loved that
thxs
xoxo

Reviewer: loves harry Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/08 08:16 pm Title: Prolouge To Disaster.

mmmm they don't know about each other feelings...

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/08 12:31 am Title: Ich liebe dich auch, fur immer.

sweet chapter. I really liked the happy mood it seemed to have. Great job!

Reviewer: EMO_KAULITZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/08 12:53 am Title: Meetings.

HOLY......................SHIT................ . WHAT HAPPENS? OH MEIN GOTT!!!!!!!!!!! UGH IM GOING TO DIE OF SUSPENCE. GREAT STORY BY THE WAY. CANT WAIT FOR MORE.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/08 08:30 pm Title: We'll Leave This Place With A Sex Scene

I'm glad they're happy, but I feel like this is the calm before the storm. Like it's too good to be true. And I'm assuming Bill feel's something along the samelines, hence the bats.

Reviewer: dkdemon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 07:47 pm Title: Prolouge To Disaster.

great story - but please get someone to beta when you write in German. It's kind of irritating with grammar mistakes etc. because it really removes focus from the story.

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 06:37 pm Title: A little Bit of Freedom.

Aww! The German is so sweet! :D

Reviewer: iBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 06:36 pm Title: A little Bit of Freedom.

omg.
more more more more more more more more soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
*smiles*

Reviewer: Lucifers angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 09:24 am Title: Behind your eyes I see the lies

wow! O.O more pleeeeease!!!
mehr bitte wenn du kannst ich liebe es!!!

Reviewer: Akuji Seyyuki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 06:12 am Title: Behind your eyes I see the lies

ok I don't know much German but I know what that said and all I have to say is AWW and ich liebe Dich

Reviewer: daphne_always Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 03:47 am Title: Behind your eyes I see the lies

Please work on your German Grammar:

"Ich freue mich, dass Sie mich erzhlt haben" - it's supposed to be "Ich freue mich das du mich das erzält hast."

Ich liebe Sie mehr als ein Bruder," "Ich liebe dich mehr als ein Bruder"

Author's Response: oops. rn-_-rnthanks.

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 12:10 am Title: Behind your eyes I see the lies

Aw! Loved it!

Reviewer: intiment Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 12:04 am Title: Prolouge To Disaster.

very excited to read whats next^^

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 11:55 pm Title: Prolouge To Disaster.

I really loved it! Please continue ASAP! =)

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