Reviews For A Good Start
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Reviewer: smoke2die Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

where's the sex!!! lol

Reviewer: babalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, very HOT!

Reviewer: danradfan84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, wow.

Reviewer: AnimeMandi22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahhhhh!!!!!!! That sooo sucks..... Great story though... i love the way you write.

Reviewer: AnimeMandi22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/09 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

A very good start... now were is the rest of it?

Author's Response: Good question! Lost when my PC crashed -.-'

Reviewer: InsanityRelapse Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/08 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1

I think that was the first time I've ever gotten a nose bleed from a kissing scene! O.O Very well written

Reviewer: TH_lover7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/08 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

cutee

Reviewer: Kaulcest Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1

I have NEVER read a kiss be wrote so erotically.

Reviewer: Prepqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

good ass details lol

Reviewer: ScandalandVanity Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/08 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Amazing...simply amazing. To think about a kiss that deeply...wow...

Reviewer: Kaulcest Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/08 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That has to be the hottest kissing scene I have read. Ever.

Reviewer: yaoisex Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/08 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Woah *fans herself*

That was the longest kissing scene I've ever read. And I enjoyed every second of it...guhh.

Reviewer: barra_arisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Totally hot twincest. Like woah! *begins wiping drool up off the floor* You rock!

Reviewer: Frozen Reapper Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yummy^^
Sexy sexy xD

Reviewer: Yuki-Kami Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

it's a little HOT in here don't you think? OMG i almost had a serious heart attack reading this. OH you have a very naughty, naughty mind.

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I never knew kissing could be written so erotically! Wonderful fic!

Reviewer: el_gardner Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mmm, so yummy! I love kissing scenes and I think that this is probably the most detailed one I've ever read!! ;)

Pretty damn good considering you have WB Tink, lol! I loved it! It was really cute and sexy!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

well, all right then. Honestly not my favorite peice by you. Too much smut not enough background info. It felt a little strange, like I walked in after missing the beginning and did stay for the end.

Author's Response: Lmao! Probably because it's actually just a part of a work-in-progress songfic xD

Reviewer: Buyyouadrank Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/27/08 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yaayy that was a pretty kickass kiss XD
Loved it! :)

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