Date: 10/09/11 01:21 am Title: The Shopping Part 2
Loved it!
Date: 05/09/11 12:07 am Title: The End of the Worst
Loved it!
Author's Response: omfg your awesome! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 11/28/08 08:30 pm Title: So Much Pain
oh. my. godddd. !!!!!!!!!!
that was awesome!!!
more more more
Author's Response: lol thanks lol don't worry there will be more I'm just not sure what to write. I don't write the story done it just comes to me so if you have any Ideas I would like to hear themrnrnDanke,rnRavyn Kaulitz♥
Date: 09/04/08 10:59 pm Title: The Trip: Part 2
Aww your first real fight. Well its over. post more soon. I know I have to post mine too, so don't have to tell me again.
Date: 07/24/08 02:21 am Title: The Best/Worst Day of my Life
aaaawwwww it got sad at the end...
good sex scene though...
Author's Response: I didn't mean for it to get sad the whole coma thing und accendent did happen but to my friend David. But I couldn't say David Jost was in a accedent lol. It would've sound stupid. Thanks for the comment bout the sex scene. Tell me if there is anything you would like to see in the next ch's
Date: 07/11/08 03:23 am Title: The Biggest Surprise of Them All
okay so touring the states. good idea. i loved it. really great.
Date: 07/11/08 03:22 am Title: Girl's Day Out
you really know what i like except for what i wear, i do not wear tan capri's, i do have fashion. but other than that i love this chapter.
Author's Response: Dude hahahaha but this is payback for what I wore in your story!! KARMA!!! und you wouldn't have that fashion if I did help you out
Date: 07/09/08 09:21 pm Title: The Scare and Surprise
Nice spa and girls day that sounds fun.
Date: 07/04/08 02:55 pm Title: Club Inferno
okay when i get the chance to drink i do go over broad so that is me. loved it. i really don't have and ideas for the next chapter sorry.
Date: 06/30/08 12:38 am Title: The Shopping Part 2
I loved it. An idea for chapter 5 is tom und geo have to wear the outfits to the club und tom is yelling at me that he wouldn't even go out in it and that I shouldn't have came up with the idea.
Date: 06/29/08 12:31 am Title: Shopping part 1
I like the part of u and tom meeting. Lol love it. Part 2 I think should have some of me in it that helps with some of the getting tom back. Make-up, girls clothes und more idk
Date: 06/28/08 02:42 am Title: Sweet n' Sour
Tom wearing make-up. Yeah right. Tom is yelling at the phone saying that its not funny and that he would never wear make-up in his lifetime. Loved the chapter, so please update soon!
Date: 06/27/08 01:54 am Title: The Dare
That is mean to pour water on us. I hate it but the funny part was where me and tom was on the floor. Hey thanks for putting more of me in the story. Post more soon.