Date: 06/29/08 01:18 am Title: Leave him alone!
great job but one problem, you called Austin Mr. Austin which is his first name but then you called Tom Mr. Trumper which is his last name. You can't switch them like that, I know its a small detail but we are writers...we live for detail
Author's Response: i actually never thought of a last name for Austin. i was going for the whole 'mr. popular jock only needs a first name' that sort of thing. like, he is too good for a last name too...i dunno. i guess i failed :(
Date: 06/28/08 11:57 pm Title: Being Brave
Oh, poor Bill. Who was at the door? His parents always fighting and abusive, no friends, beaten up at school... What was Sophia's reaction to Tom intevening in Austin beating up Bill? I didn't understand what you were trying to say. Was she amused that Bill was being beaten up or was she proud of Tom for interveinging? I'm happy their date didn't work out. Tom's got Bill on th brain hmm? Wonder what he'd think if he knew what was going on at Bill's home. Bill's grades are slipping right? Well, now we know why. I hope that if Tom can make him happy, his grades will improve b/c he'll be happier.
More please!
Author's Response:
well, lets see if i can answer your questions.
ok, so they guy who was at the door was a customer of bill's dad's. he is a drug dealer, hence, the new item in the apartment the next day. going by what sophia said the previous chapter, she was glad bill was getting the crap beat from him, and thats why tom was shakig his head-dissapointment in her. and yes, bill's grades are still falling. and you'll have to see how everything works out!
thanks for taking the time to reveiw!
Date: 06/28/08 12:05 pm Title: Leave him alone!
TOM YOU FUCKER, DO SOMETHING!
Author's Response: lol. don't worry, he will!
Date: 06/28/08 11:52 am Title: First Day Back
:( sweetie. I don't know why, but I always happen to hate OFC :/ and this one I hate even more!
Author's Response: well, you really won't like her after the next chapter, but don't worry, she goes away eventually!
Date: 06/28/08 06:36 am Title: Leave him alone!
man if I were to go to that school none of the bullies would be able to reproduce, but I really like this story.~_~
Author's Response:
thanks for taking your time to review!
Date: 06/27/08 07:04 pm Title: Leave him alone!
ohh :')
so nice :D
more :D
Author's Response:
more is on its way, don't worry!
thank you for the review!
Date: 06/27/08 12:04 pm Title: Leave him alone!
Sickkk Banner!
love it!
One question.. Bill and Tom are Not brothers in this right?? Just making sure ^.^
Author's Response: right. i just put it in the twincest cat just to be on the safe side!
Date: 06/27/08 12:13 am Title: Leave him alone!
AH this is a really good story so far. Why does Bill keep scratching at his arms?
Author's Response:
you'll find out! just pay attention to what he says/thinks and you should figure it out soon enough before i get to the chapter it is officially said.
thanks for the review!
Date: 06/26/08 10:15 pm Title: Leave him alone!
Oh! Poor Bill, what's happening at home to make him so miserable that his grades are slippping? Of course the school situation could be enough but I doubt it's new. I hope Tom stands up for him in then next chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: i'm actually writing the next chapter now! and don't worry, you get to see a little bit of his home life.
Date: 06/26/08 07:16 pm Title: Leave him alone!
aww, bless Bill feeding the geese :)
he needs to stop hurting himself, and Tom needs to rescue him from the school bullies...oh and get rid of his girlfriend lol.
Loved it, really, hope to read more soon :)
Laurie. xx
Author's Response: don't worry, all will work out! but in due time!!
Date: 06/26/08 05:17 pm Title: Leave him alone!
I lovee it!
Tomi is being so cute ^.^
Poor Bill..=[
update soon I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: glad you liked it! i should be updating in a day or so!
Date: 06/26/08 05:11 pm Title: Leave him alone!
not billa!
Author's Response: hehe *evil smile*
Date: 06/25/08 08:23 pm Title: First Day Back
I feel privileged, because I'll get to see how it unfolds before everyone else.
Lol, wow I just noticed how many more slash stories there are on this site in comparison to Heterosexual ones. I should have expected that.
The Panik site seems to have a lot of Jan/Juri pairings. -_-'
Jan and Juri are like Gustav and Georg.
The 'G's and the 'J's =)
Author's Response:
:)
luckily, my story has both het and slash! *gloats*
Date: 06/25/08 08:12 pm Title: First Day Back
You know I love it.
:D
Author's Response:
you better! you get to read the new chaps before everyone else!
my lovely editor!! <3
Date: 06/25/08 07:14 pm Title: First Day Back
wow that good...but why did Bill have to get kicks in the balls that has got to hurt*twitches*
Author's Response:
it's supposed to hurt!
you know bullys, they just have to make sure he's a...well...a he!
thank you for the reveiw!
Date: 06/25/08 05:54 pm Title: First Day Back
aww poor Bill, I hope things look up for him soon,
I really liked the start, more soon please :)
Laurie.
Author's Response: don't worry, they will!
Date: 06/25/08 05:04 pm Title: First Day Back
wow. reminds me of my days in highschool. sighh...some people can be cruel. i really enjoyed this though, its very well written..and it hits home. cant wait to read more, its just too awesome of a story!
angie.
Author's Response: aw, thank you! sorry about it hitting home, but i think we are all in agreement, kids can be stupid!
Date: 06/25/08 04:33 pm Title: First Day Back
yaaaaaaaaay 1st to review!!!! anyways, update soon, k.!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/25/08 04:32 pm Title: First Day Back
loved it please dont be a one shot!!!!
Author's Response: don't worry, it's not a one shot. i'll write the second chapter hopefully tonight!