Date: 07/09/08 10:53 pm Title: Try as he might...
Extremely well done... Bill's life sucks really, really hard w/o going into the realm of 'woe is me' or 'the poor, perfect angel' or 'horrible shit happening to him unrealistically and out of nowhere.' Perfect angst! I give you a full 10.0 pts. ^^
Author's Response:
thank you! but i couldn't have acheived that level of perfect angst without Xarkenzia!! if it weren't for her, i probably would have slipped into that realm.
thanks for the review and perfect 10!
Date: 07/08/08 10:31 pm Title: Try as he might...
AWWWWW BILL!!!
Tom do somthing!!
Yay shes gone =) Im happy.
Cant wait to see what happends next.
Hope your feeling/ doing better! ER are not fun. =]
Author's Response:
sorry to say, she isn't gone forever...but Tom won't be putting up with her crap anymore, i can tell you that much!!
no, ERs aren't fun...but i'm doing fine now, i just have to take it easy so i don't have another anxiety attack! thanks for the review and concern!
Date: 07/08/08 02:31 pm Title: Try as he might...
I'm so shocked at how good this story is turning out to be keep it up^_^...~_~
Author's Response:
wow, thank you! that means a lot to me, thank you so much. but i can't take all the credit, Xarkenzia is a great editor!
thanks again! <3
Date: 07/08/08 01:14 pm Title: Try as he might...
Ahh, I love this.
:]
Author's Response: danke!
Date: 07/08/08 10:22 am Title: Try as he might...
:O huh, he snapped pretty badly... I hope he will reason with Tom :( and FINALLY the bitch's away! I couldn't stand her anymore! Posttt! ^^
Date: 07/08/08 10:22 am Title: Try as he might...
:O huh, he snapped pretty badly... I hope he will reason with Tom :( and FINALLY the bitch's away! I couldn't stand her anymore! Posttt! ^^
Author's Response: oh, she's not gone for good...she'll be back!
Date: 07/08/08 09:44 am Title: Try as he might...
One word
AWESOME!!!
Please write more
I totally luv it!!!
*****
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 07/07/08 11:46 pm Title: Try as he might...
awwwwwwwwwwwwww! why cant you people give bill a break. even my dog is pissed at them.
Author's Response:
haha, well tell you rodg that all will work out in due time!
and technically, your dog is pissed at me because i wrote them...but don't tell your dog that...!
thanks for the review!
Date: 07/07/08 10:22 pm Title: Try as he might...
O.O
-continues reading, super into it-
Awwwww its ovvveeeerrrr... for now...
-pouts-
Write more sooon!
Author's Response: i plan on starting the next chapter tomorrow...or tonight depending on how bored i get! thanks for the review!
Date: 07/07/08 10:17 pm Title: Try as he might...
this was excelent! I hope he didn't totally alienate Bill though. I feel a tiny bit bad for Sophia. Not b/c she didn't deserve it but b/c it brough up bad memories for Bill. Tom is such a teenaged boy!
Update soon.
BTW, I hope you're ok, what were you in the ER for, if you don't mind my asking.
Author's Response: no, i don't mind you asking, i had an allergic reaction to seafood and that triggered an anxiety attack...it was horrible, but i am fine now! thanks for asking and reviewing!
Date: 07/07/08 08:05 pm Title: Being Brave
This story is amazing!
Author's Response: haha, thanks! it will get so much better, don't worry!
Date: 07/07/08 06:52 pm Title: Being Brave
this is realy ggoos great job
please update soon
:>
Author's Response: thanks. and i will hopefully have an update this week. last weekend i was out of town...and i wounde up having to go to the emergency room...so it may take a few days until i have the sence of the next chapter...it's almost done though!
Date: 07/04/08 02:39 pm Title: Being Brave
ohh good :D
more :D
Author's Response: thanks. i'm working on the next chap right now...but it'll be a few days before it is posted. i'm not in town and i'm really busy, but i promise i will have it up!
Date: 07/02/08 07:46 pm Title: Being Brave
omg. that was AMAZING!
Author's Response: thanks. just wait until i get the next chapter up! which i am working on and hopefully will have up before i leave for NC!
Date: 07/01/08 09:54 pm Title: Being Brave
so what. is he a kaulitz or trumper in this story? is gordon the pot head or jorg ?
please email me the answeres
Author's Response: i tried, but i got a failure notice :(
Date: 06/29/08 10:47 pm Title: Being Brave
Awww Bill.
I dont like Toms girlfriend, she bothers me.
update soon =] love it!
Author's Response: she bothers me too! i'm writing the next chapter right now, so it'll probably be up tomorrow. thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 06/29/08 04:23 pm Title: Being Brave
:( oh Bill...I really don't know what to say.
except keep writing of course :) xx
Author's Response: of course i will! thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/29/08 09:49 am Title: Being Brave
Aww :( Tomi was being nice why did he stop x) I freaking hate that girl btw O.O can't see her... post post post :) ps. I liked the big lenght! :P
Author's Response: length of the chaoter? don't worry, i have lots of ideas floating around in my brain, so lets hope i can type fast enough! but don't worry about Sophia, she'll get hers....*evil*
Date: 06/29/08 05:44 am Title: Being Brave
:( Update soon!! It's really good :D