Date: 11/02/08 04:02 pm Title: Turbulance
NEIN!!!! jorg is stupid!!! stupid homophobic peeps!! hate them! stupid other peeps. d:)
Date: 11/02/08 04:00 pm Title: Turbulance
fjhdsfjhdskjfhkdsfBILL.
Date: 11/02/08 03:45 pm Title: Turbulance
Awwww! Poor Bill! His mom left over that and his dad beat him up? How badly hurt is he? I hope he goes over to Tom's house. He can make everything better right?
And I can't vote but I help campaign! So I'm doing what I can.
Author's Response:
i can't vote yet either, i am only 16 :(
but no, bill isn't hurt that bad. and it wasn't only that that made his mom leave. it was everything. that just sent her over the edge.
Date: 11/02/08 03:27 pm Title: Turbulance
O.O
More and very soon please!!
I want to know what happens next.
xoxo
Date: 11/02/08 03:18 pm Title: Turbulance
Oh no!
why does everybody beat bill? :(
i feel so sorry for him :/ ..
i hope he doesn't break up with tom because of his crappy father.
Date: 10/31/08 06:42 pm Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
im so excited to read more, your story is so...i cant think of words for it but i love it. Please update soon :D
Date: 10/29/08 04:39 am Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
damn niceeeeeee......
Date: 10/25/08 10:56 am Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
umm sorry I don't know anyone from war lol but this was a great chappie! Bill and Tom are so cute haha
Date: 10/22/08 12:48 am Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
wow i love this!
bill is abitch sometimes but who wouldnt be if they were in that position :D
very well written!
p.s my dad was in the iraq-iran war back in 1980
Date: 10/20/08 04:42 pm Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
OMG!!!!! please post a new chapter already!!
i think you should tell more about what Bill used to have and more flashbacks though. and make bill a little less of a wimp and make him take up for himself a little more...
Author's Response: its funny that you mention that he should stand up for himself more...in the new chapter, which is already written, he does. so just hang tight!
Date: 10/19/08 06:16 pm Title: First Day Back
WOOOO!!
caann we pleaaasee have a little inside on the next chapter ;)
XD
wee have no patience :D
PLEAAASSEEE *ON THE FLOOR BEGGING ;P*
Date: 10/17/08 07:50 pm Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
no no you can leave me hear i unconsiously ate a stale/rotten penut that tasted like dust cuase i was captivated be this story!
continue i beg of you please!
Author's Response:
oh jeeze! i hope you'r doing ok after that! haha. but thank you for pissing off your stomach for me. lol.
thanks for the review! and i am working ont he new chap now. <3
Date: 10/17/08 10:31 am Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
:D:D:D:D
update soon yeah? ^____^
Author's Response:
i'm working on the new chapter right now!
thanks for the review <3
Date: 10/16/08 09:35 pm Title: First Day Back
yep. :] and your welcome. i love this story so its not a problem!
Date: 10/16/08 05:17 pm Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
:)
Aww... Liked the ending...
:( I can't believe that Bill's house has basically been reprosessed
Date: 10/16/08 03:22 pm Title: First Day Back
its okay he's just a tad loopy lol. but it was very upsetting for the entire family. idk if this would help or not but he told me that at one point in time he saw someone step on a land mine...then he was flying in one of the helicopters and saw one of his comrades trucks run over a few more landmines. its pretty bad out there. a funny thing is that they dont have paper towels and he said that one of the towns people smeared camel poo on the wall lol. Its very much O.o
Author's Response:
wait...camel poo?! wow...
and yes that does help. thank you very much!
Date: 10/16/08 09:10 am Title: "So....does this mean we're a..."
well, i will grudgingly say that this chapter was worth all the time. ;) Nice job, i like how we can feel how awkward it is. And you don't rush things, you let them play out how situations normally do.