Date: 11/05/08 06:03 pm Title: Turbulance
i never read slash stories especially with bill & tom
but i really like this story! :DD
pleasee updateeee -puppy eyes-
Author's Response: well thank you, it always makes me smile when people read my story when they normally wouldn't. thank you very much <3
Date: 11/04/08 03:32 pm Title: Turbulance
OMG. This chapter was amazing. So good. I love the story line. I hate reading unfinished stories because then I'm left hanging. OY! more more more bitte bitte bitte!!!
-my only problem is the "boyfriend" thing it's just so hokey.
Make Bill run to Tom after he pick himself up and have them *shifty eyes* fuck! *evil grin followed by a flutter clap*
more story bitte!
Date: 11/04/08 02:36 pm Title: The things I'll never say
I'm all a flutter. This story is so good!
Date: 11/04/08 02:18 pm Title: "I can never think you or anything you say is stupid"
your writing is improving. Each chapter is better then the last. I'm really impressed you have a good beta and your story line rocks!
Date: 11/04/08 01:35 pm Title: A brick has been taken away
uh oh bad sign he's wearing tom's jacket and loving up his smell...I can feel the dirtyness coming. *grin*
Date: 11/04/08 01:19 pm Title: A Step Backward....
yummy story!
Date: 11/04/08 12:51 pm Title: Try as he might...
no this story is like chrismas but with gramatical errors lol chriermas ha ha love it don't stop!
Date: 11/04/08 12:04 pm Title: First Day Back
very well written!
Date: 11/04/08 02:17 am Title: Turbulance
this was a really great chapter!! im so glad you updated...be sure to do it again soon!!!
Date: 11/03/08 10:58 pm Title: Turbulance
wow i loved it alot
Date: 11/03/08 03:00 am Title: Turbulance
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Date: 11/03/08 01:49 am Title: First Day Back
I just have to ask...since you put on a character death warning...ehm..Are you going to kill Bill or Tom? :/ or have I missed something (forgot something) that have happened erlier in this story?
ps: sorry if my english are a little weird..not my mother language:P
Author's Response:
your english is fine!
and there will be a character death before the big one...but you'll have to wait to see who the big one is ;)
Date: 11/02/08 08:24 pm Title: Turbulance
oh wow this story is really getting good lol :) Keep writing you got me totally hooked!
Date: 11/02/08 08:13 pm Title: Turbulance
ahahah wow i could just imagine how awkward it can be.
"soo...uh...what do "more" people do?"
ahahah, i was almost crying out of laughter.
though the ending was kinda ironic. in a good way.
poor billy bob.
;)
Author's Response: i'm glad i could make you laugh so much. that was my goal. i didn't want it to be too too serious...
Date: 11/02/08 07:01 pm Title: Turbulance
OMIGOD I LOVE THIS STORY U NEEEED 2 UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11/02/08 06:17 pm Title: Turbulance
:| AHHHHMMAZING CHAPTER!
Date: 11/02/08 06:13 pm Title: Turbulance
Awww! That chapter was super cute then super heartwrenching! I can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 11/02/08 05:40 pm Title: Turbulance
Poor Bill. Just about everything seems to be unraveling. At least he has Tom. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Hope it comes out soon.
Date: 11/02/08 04:44 pm Title: Turbulance
awww, i could cry for Bill! That's terrible. Hopefully Tom can make him feel better. But Tom's dream scared me a little bit too. I hope he doesn't kill Austin for Bill, that would be bad. Who would save Bill?
Date: 11/02/08 04:26 pm Title: Turbulance
:O
No!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!