Date: 07/19/08 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ^_^
this was REALLY sweet and really hot! =D the perfect mix if u ask me ;p
ur fic is friggin amazing and i can't wait for more of it!! totally awsome =)
Author's Response: thanks! *blushes* i'll get more up as soon as i can!
Date: 07/19/08 09:19 am Title: Chapter 9
it was great and beautiful
Author's Response: thank you!^.^
Date: 07/18/08 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
The smut was fine. And i'm happy about the I love yous at the end b/c Bill didn't say it back at the beginning. Also. Simone's like, ya know, dying... how on earth is she being let out of the hospital?
Author's Response: oh thanks goodness! simone is a different story all together...next few chapters will explain it tho!
Date: 07/13/08 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
aww ^_^
i liked it =D
georg was totally awsome (as always) and i liked gordon's reaction alot =D
please update soon?(A)
Author's Response: i will! thanks!
Date: 07/13/08 12:32 am Title: Chapter 8
cool chapter. It was a nice filler for setting up the scene for future chapters. Great job. Definitely toned the action down and smoothed out the whole story.
Author's Response: thanks for reading it!
Date: 07/12/08 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
But I'm sure he'll get there start to tell Bill he loves him, and that his dad is fine w/ it and the phone will ring announcing that Bill's mom has died. That'll be depressing. I'd prefer if he could just get it out and the two of them be happy for a while. But maybe misery then happiness would be better. IDK, your the author, do what ever you want and let me read it. Preferably soon!
Author's Response: i'll try and get it up soon!! thanks for teh review hekki!
Date: 07/10/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww. I'm glad Bill's opening up! Moar of him and Tom together please! :D
Author's Response: soon!i promise!
Date: 07/09/08 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
I really love this story it's kinda sad and sweet all at the same time!
Author's Response: Awww Thanks!n.n
Date: 07/08/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm, well, that's a depressing image of his dad, but now at least we know who's paying for the house. And whose cooking the food. Where do they get the mony for groceries though? Although shopping for two is a lot easier than shoping for three or four.
Does he know more about tom now? Is there anything to know?
Does Jorg know Simone's in the hospital?
Author's Response: all in due time my dear Hekki, lol. but no jorg doesn't know...i don't think he ever will...w.e i'll post the next chapter soon though
Date: 07/08/08 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
wonderful chapter. I love the development of emotions that is taking place. I really can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it and reviewing, really. makes me happy that ppl actually read my story!^.^
Date: 07/07/08 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg
T.T
haha
write more soooon
Author's Response: i will i'm just started writing the next chapter...finally got over my WB it'll be up soon!
Date: 07/06/08 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ah, what could you do now? Well, you could bring the dad back into the picture. I'm not sure how I feel about that though. You should probably have simone have a pretty big life insurance policy so they don't have to worry about money to pay the bills, and taxes. For when she dies I mean. You could have simone die, Jorg come back into the picture (but be a cool, nice dad), have Bill finish up school, and then go to the city w/ Tom and work as musicians or something. IDK
Author's Response: lol thanks for the suggestions!! i'll work on it...*typing* lol
Date: 07/04/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
:O I knew that was close... urgh I don't want her to die! D: they still need a mom... hasn't Jorg got any say in it..?
Author's Response: soon soon soon! n.n jorg is gonna show up...soon! lol thnaks for reviewing!
Date: 07/04/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
this is reali good please continue
Author's Response: i will! thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/04/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw Gustav's nice :) and Tomi too! *shiver* I feel like THE moment is about to come soon...
Author's Response: THE moment...hmmm lol i'll see if that can happen soon in the next few chapters~_~
Date: 07/04/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww :( poor Billa, not only is he about to loose his mother, he didn't even get Tom :( I hope the situation will get better!
Date: 07/04/08 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Those girls seem annoying u.u Tom is descreet instead ^^ I'm looking forward to the dinner!
Date: 07/04/08 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
:O that's bad, oh too bad... she can't be dying! D:
Date: 07/04/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
:O gosh, serious stuff here :O poor babies... :(
Date: 07/02/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
They're together! Yay! That should make Bill a bit happier. I'm sorry that his mom's getting worse though. Do his teacher's know? He's gonna get a lot of crap from them if they don't.
Author's Response: yeah...i have no idea how to make it seem more real...i'll work on it though!! thanks soo much for the review!