Date: 07/15/08 04:49 pm Title: MY LIFE. YOUR HANDS.
^-^ ^-^ ^-^ i love love love love liebe liebe liebe your story.
Author's Response: Thank u sweetie. :)
Date: 07/15/08 04:41 pm Title: ON A WING
yay yay yay yay ich liebe your story ^-^
Author's Response: Ich liebe your review. LOL.
Date: 07/15/08 02:48 pm Title: TRYING TO TURN BUTTERFLIES INTO CATERPILLARS: PART#1
omg, i just have to say...i almost dropped dead when you mentioned alaska!!! TH DOES have fans in the big AK...me!!!!! i hope they come to anchorage..oh and btw, the sheraton is a great hotel^^
Author's Response: HAHA, I like the enthusiasm! I picked Alaska just cuz its "far away".. lol. And as to the Sheraton.. it was a random middle-ground between Motel6 and the Ritz. lol. But I totally know what you mean- its always cool when someone mentions your city, right? XD I get excited too when ppl mention Toronto. :)
Date: 07/09/08 11:07 pm Title: FOOLS RUSH IN
Well, it was all sort of funny, until Bill realized just how deep Tom's love ran. I though he wanted it though. I mean, I assumed he know and that's why he was playing this game.
*sigh* I hope they can pull this together.
Author's Response: Had to keep it on the light side for most of it, otherwise it would have been dreadfully angsty. I mean, as if its not sappy enough. lol. Ok, so i guess they both know they loved eachother that much, but i guess it doesnt hit you until someone actually SAYS it.rnrnOh boy.. the rest gets rather angsty. I try to keep it light when I can, but it shouldnt be, so it isnt. Get ready. hehernrnI'm currently writing Ch.11, which is giving me grief.. if it turns out the way I want it, i'll be a happy writer and well on the way to finishing this story. :)rnrnThanks for sticking around. :D
Date: 07/09/08 04:19 pm Title: FOOLS RUSH IN
I really like this. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks darling. :)
Date: 07/09/08 07:45 am Title: FOOLS RUSH IN
i love bill o i canīt believe iīm calling him this.
but..
BILL YOU STUPID DUMBASS IDIOT! GO BACK!
YOU CANīT LEAVE HIM!Ļ
dONīT BE A STUBBORN BABY!
LET HIM EXPLAIN!
Author's Response: HAHAHA, you crack me up. :) It's true, Bill is being an idiot.. you're gonna love how he copes with everything. hehe. Oh, the drama in the next few chapters... *big grin*
Date: 07/06/08 10:04 pm Title: WOULD YOU?
Nice ending. "Bill was taken aback." It's almost comical. And right after all those gloom and doom situations too. Well, lets see how Bill responds to that.
Update soon.
Author's Response: I rem when I wrote that, that line actually sounded a bit odd to me too. lol. I just cant place why. Oops.
Date: 07/02/08 08:56 pm Title: JUST DIE.
Wow, they've switch personalities on me. Bill was acting funny on the plane though. So he obviously is still a little on edge. If they miss each other so much they just need to be locked in a room together for a few hours, that should clear things up.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA! I wish someone would lock them in a room together IRL. lol. Then catch all the action on tape! Sorry, I'm deviating. lol.
Date: 07/02/08 03:32 pm Title: JUST DIE.
Lmao I love this chapter. Especially the narration.
Author's Response: HAHAHA! Thanks! I love writting the narrator-with-PMS bits. lmao
Date: 07/01/08 10:08 am Title: YOU KNOW YOU'RE A DUMBASS WHEN...
wow...they're changing! XD
cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: That switching-personalities-thing was hard to achieve. Thank you! :)
Date: 07/01/08 09:04 am Title: TRYING TO TURN BUTTERFLIES INTO CATERPILLARS: PART#2
NOOO! BOYSS!! ARGGG!! Tom, go and follow Bill to make sure he won`t do something he will regret later on!!
Author's Response: I'm sure Bill regretted doing a lot of dumb shit in this story.. but it was a means to the happy end we all wanted, right? LOL
Date: 07/01/08 08:52 am Title: ON A WING
OMGGGGOMGOMGOMG!! I feel like I`m having a panic attack like Bill! PLEASE LET THEM SURVIVE!
Author's Response: Wow.. LOL. You know they survived. :PrnAnd I know you did too. lol.rnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/29/08 02:36 am Title: YOU KNOW YOU'RE A DUMBASS WHEN...
awh, why'd it have to end?
I love this. truly magnificent.
Author's Response: It's not even close to the end. I'm pretty sure by now that there's gonna be 13 chapters.rnHang tight. :DrnI'm just getting more and more excited to post each chapter. Ch6 is coming soon, I promise.
Date: 06/29/08 01:52 am Title: YOU KNOW YOU'RE A DUMBASS WHEN...
i love you. this story is so great ! i need more ! D:
Author's Response: HAHAHA Thanks hun. XDrnI'm replying a bit late, so I hope there's enough "more" now. lol
Date: 06/29/08 01:12 am Title: YOU KNOW YOU'RE A DUMBASS WHEN...
OMG! It's like they're slowly switich personalities! That's so wacky! You're doing a great job! With the writing I mean, showing how they're changing progressivly, but it's sad at the same time. I Tom really is dying for Bill attention and Bill's not giving it. They need another chaotic plane ride. this is so good! Update?
Author's Response: Oh gosh. I'm so happy you get it. I'm so excited to be writing this and getting such a wonderful response. rnAnother plane ride, eh? Don't give away the plot now. ;)
Date: 06/28/08 06:09 am Title: TRYING TO TURN BUTTERFLIES INTO CATERPILLARS: PART#2
This is a good story I'm liking it
Author's Response: Glad to hear that. Thanks. :)
Date: 06/27/08 07:13 pm Title: TRYING TO TURN BUTTERFLIES INTO CATERPILLARS: PART#2
Awww, poor Tomi. I feel so bad for him, he clinging to Bill just as Bill's trying to spread his wings and fly away. Hope he can reel him back in.
I just wanted to say, I really loved the writing for this chapter. There was something about it that made me smile.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. It means a lot to me to know someone is smiling because of me. :)
Date: 06/27/08 01:37 pm Title: TRYING TO TURN BUTTERFLIES INTO CATERPILLARS: PART#2
OOO! I Want more! Must read more! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Awesome! Thank you!!
Date: 06/25/08 06:13 pm Title: MY LIFE. YOUR HANDS.
I can't wait till there's more! I think I already said that but oh well!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I've put up chapters 3 and 4 today. rnStick around cuz I've got up to chapter 8 written, so I'll be posting them in the coming days. :)
Date: 06/25/08 06:09 pm Title: ON A WING
Its very good so far! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work! I love the details for I can imagine everything that's happening.
Author's Response: That's great. I'm glad it's coming across nicely. :)