Date: 06/24/08 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing. This may be one of the best things you've ever done (and it's not even finished).
Spontaneous combustion. Fuck.
Date: 06/24/08 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. You never cease to amaze me.
Date: 06/24/08 03:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Phew! Awesome. I loved the mixed up confusion that was Tom's thoughts in the shower, especially the last bit of Bill's hair bleeding blond to black. Very well done.
Date: 06/24/08 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Now this is interesting! I like what you wrote about Tom, He doesn't care if he's started something; some fires are meant to burn. And then later when Bill said, "You don't know what you did, do you?"
As Tom's lips meet Bill's, they spark alive, finally, and it's like breaking through everything that's ever held them back.
...Ignition. Very cool. Can't wait for the second part of this and again, awesome idea (and execution)!
Date: 06/24/08 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god, that was amazing. I loved the style, the flips in the scenes and in Tom's visions. The sex was so fabulously hot! I don't know when you're posting the second part, but I'm definitely looking forward to it.
Date: 06/24/08 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1
The TH-smut I like is smut I can believe in. It has to be realistic and so it has to contain het.I'm glad you are writing more and more het/slash nowadays:)
This one was incredibly hot. But not just that. It was subtle too. I loved the fire-references and now I cant wait for more. You actually made my panties burn, woman!!!
Date: 06/24/08 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1
damn, wow.
I really want to read the other half.
jesus.
I kind of feel sick myself...
Date: 06/24/08 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I think I read this with my mouth open the whole time. Wow.
Just... wow.
Date: 06/24/08 02:16 am Title: Chapter 1
CANT WAIT FOR MORE! sorry i have to use caps lock for this!
xoxo
Date: 06/24/08 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah, this is intense. I love it!
Date: 06/24/08 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1
this is seriously amazing, honey. good good gooood. and moooore. please.
i looooove the heat and fire and burning references, they tie it all together so well... this has your voice in it, big time. :) :)