Date: 05/17/09 06:41 am Title: Chapter 2
In a booth. A public booth! Oh my god. These twins are just too hot for words.
Date: 05/17/09 05:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my gosh you have to update this soon. This is a good story. I was a liitle hesitant to read it, but definitely glad I did. :)
Update soon!!!!!
Date: 05/17/09 12:53 am Title: Chapter 2
i was wondering how you could possibly follow up the mood of the first chapter, and you've done a wonderful job. this might end up being my favorite smut fic, and one of my favorite fics.
Date: 05/16/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is deep.
It probably has a deeper meaning.
I probably can't decipher it cus I'm stupid and young and ksjdaslgagsdlashjshdaglshd
*Slaps self.*
I love it. ):
Date: 05/16/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
:o
I must be sick.... Tom and Bill doing those things... just so hot
Date: 05/16/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I didn't expect this to be updated. It's a nice suprise and hot as hell.
Date: 05/16/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
ksajfkdsjfksdjfkjdskfjksdjf *___* Wow, this story leaves me breathless. ♥
Date: 05/16/09 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Holy shit. In the booth. In public. I think I nearly died.
This whole chapter...this whole story is...I'm at a loss for words. I think you really did kill me. Damn. Thanks for this.
Date: 05/16/09 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww *pets teh twins*
Date: 05/16/09 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I’m gonna save the email that notified me of this update forever!
I try not to curse way too much in reviews, but HOLY FUCK !!! That was (using the word ‘hot’ here is so tempting) astoundingly beautiful. I only say things are perfect when I mean it, because there are few times I believe in perfection, but girl, this is beyond perfection. This is you and words and me getting completely lost in them.
There is nothing, absolutely nothing, that can ever be better than this.
The fire, Bill’s ice melting to the idea of tasting sin, Tom’s reluctance to submit to something that’s already got him anyway…
And then ending, the ending and the question of what happens next, when the fire’s gone out…
Can you tell by now that I’m utterly taken by this?
Thank you so, so, so much
I’m gonna read this again and again now ^^ and then one more time
Date: 05/16/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think I flatlined there near the end. That image of them, basically in public in such a heated, tense moment with the position they were in? GUH. Seriously, umf. And besides the hotness that part where they were being silly and play-eating each other's locks was so freaking adorable and twintastic. Loved it.
Date: 05/16/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
hooooooooooooly sweet baalllllllls
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Date: 03/30/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Erm..i know this is the second comment i leave here,but i always get a better view at re-reading things ,so..
Good job-not like i expected anything else from you .But you wrighted "twincest times two" and it's like there's twincest times one.I mean,pshysicall,not only mental and includin' both parties.Maybe that's not what you meaned and maybe i'm expecting too much ,but i saw the story is incompleted and..will you update soon ?
Date: 03/25/09 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god....more more more more more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Date: 01/24/09 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmmm.
Sexy.
Even the Tom and two girls thing.
TwoGirls1Tom.
SUPS.
Date: 09/22/08 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I check this site like 20 times a day to see if it's updated... you're killing me here. ;_; I'm going to drive over to wisconsin and strangle you!!!
Date: 09/20/08 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this, can't wait for more!
Date: 09/19/08 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is most likely one of the best fan fics I have EVER read !
Tom is so extremely…Tom, in this and I just love how you made his personality more human, adding the insecurity and tiny bit of doubt about him. And still, he’s that good old Tom, cocky as ever with seriously wicked ways in bed ,)
And mhmhmm to those two girls ! At first, I was thinking friends with a little bit of rivalry since they appeared a little reluctant, when I found out why though, I got a pretty pleasant surprise. I was amazed by how you managed to keep me clueless all the way up until the point where Tom realized that they were twins. Actually, that is sort of brilliant because you gave so many hints and then I was just sitting there thinking ‘hell, why didn’t I see that coming?’ just brilliant !
The sex was as always with you HOT as HELL, I really loved how you described the way the two twins got so tangled up in each other and not Tom when they actually had a famous rock star in bed with them, shows that they really were ‘meant to burn’ you know?
Oh, and loved that there wasn’t much dialog between the threesome, too, that made everything so intense !
Loved (I seem to be using that word a lot oO, wonder why) Bill’s remarks and just his behavior in general, and adored the way you made Tom slowly get into the thought about being with Bill. The end scene was amazingly written and just built everything up very nicely.
God, I cannot wait for the update of this (as you might have noticed by now) and I really hope it happens soon, but take your time, it’s worth it when waiting for your twincest ,)
Do you know around what time you might post ? So that I’ll know when to be looking for it ?
Oo sorry bout the long review, this story just made me all…hot and bothered ,)
Love