Date: 04/14/11 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was just wow. Really hot and really good. I love bill being in control, tom totally submissive.Woot, i wouldn't mind more of this! xx
Date: 01/23/11 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Fuck that was so fucking hot. Fuck... Yea I'm kinda incoherent at the moment. And the end with "You little fucker..." from Tom was perfect. Ahhhhhh bliss. I'm blissed out from a fic. Fuck!
Date: 12/12/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1
God! This is so wild. I've been waiting for a story like this to come along. I would have liked the girl to have been treated more like a human than an object though. That would have made it entirely complete for me.
Date: 12/11/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I get it now. They pay the price for confidentiality. Well if they ever need a discreet freebee, I can accommodate them both at once. No problemo and I would NEVER tell a soul!
Date: 12/11/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love your writing but I can't imagine the twins would ever, ever, ever need to pay for sex. They are the sexiest men alive!
Date: 11/14/10 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
o.h.m.y.g.o.d. :O Hot!!! Like, super hot!
Date: 05/21/10 12:51 am Title: Chapter 1
This was SO HOT. I loved the dynamic of Bill and Tom's relationship. Favoriting!
Date: 04/15/10 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow very impressive smut. You got some plot in there and some character back groud but still made it all about the smut. Well done!
Date: 03/21/10 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh gooooood
*suffocating*
That... that was so hottttt
Date: 11/30/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Dies*
Fucking fantastic.
Keep writing.
Date: 09/24/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was one of the hottest things I've ever read. And I've read a LOT. *dumps cold water over head*
Date: 09/21/09 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
ok, i've just read this for the second time, because im now deciding to read the whole series and wow. this is probably the best smut i've ever read. no joke, im not trying to flatter anyone or anything, just telling you. my constructive criticism is to keep writing like this. it blew my mind. amazing.
Date: 07/06/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really good. Was it really your first time writing smut? ;)
You should really write more cuz that was awesome
Date: 06/08/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
And I forgot to add...that Bill - he's such a giver. Always thinking of others. :)
Date: 06/08/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazingly erotic and intense. Absolutely fantastic. I love a dominant Bill...
I loved it completely.
Date: 06/07/09 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOAH! One of my favorites, defenately! I just have to thank you for giving me such dirty visions to my imagination to play with. This story is so HOT, so intense and so realistic... Makes me blush once again :). You have skills to write and create the most intense and still somehow loving atmosohere. I should read your other stories too asap.
I would just LOVE to be that female, total dream come true... I just keep reading this over and over again.
And maybe I'll just go for a cold shower now :D
Date: 06/07/09 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved seeing Bill in control like that, so hot!
Date: 03/21/09 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah! Totally awesome. Never read one like this before. *grin*...Super cool. You totally made it realistic. I could SEE the sweat and the uh *cough* other bodily fluids. *grin*...Thank you very much for this.
Date: 01/25/09 10:59 am Title: Chapter 1
wow...yeah...what everybody said..haha XD except that "billsgirl" person who in the first place shouldn't have continued reading it from the first few sentences then she wouldn't have regretted XD and yeah that's why there are warnings hehe good to give it to her real well :D