Date: 07/21/08 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
*__* That was awesome. Awesomely amazing. Awesomely amazingly spectacularly fantastic. Please do write more smut in the future!
Date: 07/21/08 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG I REGRET READING THIS, IT WAS THE MOST DISGUSTING THING ON THE PLANET!!!
WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU ?!
It made me sick, I just want to throw up now!
And.. OMG there are hundreds of other sick stories like this one... I seriously don't get it!? I'm so fucking confused on how can anyone even want to hear about such perverted stories?! How can you like reading or writing such stuff.. its completely insane, are you all out of your minds??!!
You're just sick, perverted and brain cracked!
OMG seriously , you need special treatment, there is definitely something wrong with you! Though I doubt you could ever be cured, you are just insane , retarded, I have no idea what else to call you... whatever I say it just won't be enough..
If Tom or Bill happen to read one of those sick stories on this website, GOD !!!!!
...I feel very sorry for them...you are basically, making them look like shit, like if they are not normal people with feelings but ....just some sort of a new fucking disgusting breed of twisted animals!
I mean ,GOD ,even animals aren't acting like that!!!
And OMG they wouldnt treat a girl..or even a fucking animal like THAT!!!!! It's AWFUL!!!!
Author's Response: You know I could just delete your review, but I won't because ,you see, everyone is entitled to their own opinion. However, it is considered bad manners to write such 'reviews' on this site, we either support the writers or walk away if the story is not our cup of tea. I'm sorry that you are 'confused', but the warning 'heavy kink' was out there for a reason. Oh, and I really don't feel 'sick1 or 'brain cracked', though I admit to a bit of perversity. But hey, I'm only human...
Date: 07/19/08 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
*panting*
umm..
i think i need some alone time now...
sheesh
THAT WAS SO FREAKIN GOOD! and in a story sense to, not just in an i'm horny twincest kinda sense.
Date: 07/19/08 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing :D
YOU MADE ME BLUSH, and that's NOT simple!!
LOVED IT! ^^
Date: 07/19/08 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
The beauty is in the details, and omg, this was beautiful.
Date: 07/19/08 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooo I'd never have read it is this wasn't featured, just because I don't read het or OFCs much. But I'm so glad I did read this one because it was hot! And so very slashy, actually ^_^ I didn't even notice the het sex much LOL! Poor OFC.
Date: 07/18/08 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Smut has very rarely been this naughty. Worth the read, definately.
Date: 07/18/08 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.O i um, that was, uh, umm, just, OMFG.
i think that HAS to be the hottest think i have EVER read on this whole site.
you should DEFINATELY post more smut in the future. if you don't then... i dno.
just do! please!
Date: 07/18/08 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
holy fuck, that was really hot. especially the part where their eyes met.
you're now cleared to write lots more smut.
Date: 07/18/08 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1
ah!
i think my brain had an intense orgasm,
so did my eys from just reading thiiis!
o god. amazing.
haha this has become better than porn for me!
Date: 07/13/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story...*grins and goes back to lolcats*...^_^
Date: 07/07/08 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow... I hate het or any sign of if, but this? Wow. What a nice fantasy. Absolutely loved it!
Date: 06/27/08 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1
O_o
You should definitely post more smut.
That was just...
amazing?!?
Date: 06/23/08 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill is amazing *stares dumbly at the screen*
Don't know what to say. Except you're a fantastic writer!!!
Date: 06/23/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tom seemed spoiled. Like he though he could have both. I felt like Bill was settling b/c he couldn't have Tom any other way. but it was still really good, but it did feel like het to me, to a certain degree.
Author's Response: Interesting. Tom is spoilt, there's no doubt about that, but to me Tom is allowed to have these things only bc Bill lets him. It also coincides with what Bill wants - watching Tom - and that's Tom's luck. Bill is in total control here - at least that's how I wanted to write it.rnThanks for the comment though. It's interesting to see someone else's pow.
Date: 06/23/08 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was...WOW! personally i dont like het, but like you said when Bill's by Tom's side... Whoo! *fans self*
You are an AMAZING writer!
More smut in the future would be awesome! =)
Danke,
Andi
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'll definitely write more smut if you guys respond to it so well!
Date: 06/23/08 10:59 am Title: Chapter 1
very good hun! best smut i've read so far! keep up the amazing work :)
Author's Response: I'm flattered, really. Thank you:)
Date: 06/23/08 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, that was insanely hot! U need to post more smut in the future! (like in... maybe... The Fault??)
Author's Response: THank you!!! There will be smut in The Fault, but I'm afraid you guys have to wait a bit. I'm going thru a writer's block...*shivers*
Date: 06/23/08 06:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Really awesome :D I usually don't read bill/tom/ofc-stories, but this was totally awesome!
You seriously need to write more fics like this in the future, please :D because I'm seriously in love with you and your smut-skills! Totally! x)
Author's Response: THank you for giving it a go despite the het. I know. It's not my cup of tea either. But with the certain flavouring...