Date: 12/17/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT.
PLEASE WRITE MORE.
YOU BETTER.
Date: 12/06/08 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! What an amazing story. Great idea, soo hot!
Date: 10/24/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the hottest things I have read in my entire life. Whoa.
Date: 09/23/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1
holy sh**. That is one of the hottest things i have ever read, and they arent even having sex with eachother. wow. incredible!! bill being so focused on tom's pleasure just makes it so incredibly erotic...good lord...
Date: 09/11/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
AMAZINGLY HOT!!!
O_O
OMG!! that was...
I'm speechless.
Date: 08/20/08 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not only was that written beautifully, but it was so hot my laptop almost melted.
Date: 08/15/08 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
and you know. this is the first time in my life i wish i was a whore, that whore!!
Date: 08/07/08 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn, that was hot!
Please continue! X_x
Date: 08/02/08 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my, i'm just one more who loved this one very much!
you made it something different, you made my computer steamd-up ^^ pleas write more and i will cover my computer i plastic and then read!! :d
(and good to keeping that girl's comment, she can just read my and everybody elses comments here, and learn! )
Date: 07/24/08 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was scorchingly hot!!!
Date: 07/24/08 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really good. You should post more smut. lol.
Date: 07/24/08 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow........god that was like so hot. it gave me a nosebleed all over my key board..damn that's some good smut.
Date: 07/23/08 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
........
*Stares blankly at the fic.*
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*Speechless.*
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*Runs to add to favorites.*
Date: 07/23/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well.
All I'm saying is that I loved it!!!
Like, LOVED it... lol
~Emily
Date: 07/23/08 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
SHIT SON. I've never read something so intensely intense, in so buttfucking long. Bravo.
Date: 07/23/08 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great, i just found this site and that was an awesome story.
Date: 07/22/08 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
oh wow...simply wowawesoem threesome!althoug it was more jsut two with in helping fucking hot!
Date: 07/21/08 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOLY SHIT DUDE!!! I'm not really a big fan of het but HELL that was SO fucking good!!!!!!
Date: 07/21/08 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.O
I think I just died.
.. I .. I ...
Uhmm ... it .. I ... WOW ...
SEXY ... DUHHHHHHHHHHH! *drool*
X.X
Date: 07/21/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fuck. Wow, that was fucking amazing.
I love how even though it was short, i got the feeling of a long fic. You gave insight to their relationship when they were younger, and led it up to this moment with only a few sentences, it gave the illusion of a chaptered fic without actually being one. Awesome. Very, very, cool.
Oh, and the sex was srsly to die for. Holy shit. I was even able to overlook the whole...Tom fucking a girl, thing. XD.